| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Title: Ahhhhhhh.............
Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 19:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much, even if this is my first review. I've just been reading and enjoying it. Anyway, that has to be the cutest moment ever in Fanfictom. I just bet Kichiro made that CD at one of those, record-your-own-song booths. Am I right? God I hope I'm right, that would be the best. Please pardon the annoying giddiness, you made me happy today. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: Gold Wings On: July 13, 2005 19:20 EDT
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Good chapter! This is way out there, but, what's Sesshoumaru's last name? Or did you not give him one?
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: July 13, 2005 18:53 EDT
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Poor Dr Grumpypants! Did he burn a CD for her?? hum... I wonder what's on it? What does he say, sing, confess? hum.. I guess I'll find out.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 15:14 EDT
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whoohoo! another lovely chapter...poor dr. grumpypants...im very sure belle-chan coulda made him a Very dr. happypants...as i can never guess what tortures and ansty wonders await our poor characters(and if i do guess...im so usually wrong)...im thinking there is something very important on that cd....id guess, but im probably wrong...i think kich might have a bit of inuyasha's baka gene in him...it would explain things such as his grumpiness and the like...but yes...must be moving on now...lovely chapter and update soon...oi, by the way, the last chapter with cain and gin..pretty hott..saved by the phone...awesome work ...You so totally rock! Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 15:05 EDT
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haha "bad" kich is making some moves on belle-chan hmm i wonder whats on that cd...
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 14:10 EDT
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I can't wait for more, this is by far the best story - series of stories that I have ever read. You kick ass!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this chapter i can hardly wate for the next one this story as well as all the other puritys are going on my fave list. just to let you know your on my fave auther list as well. until the next chapter bie.
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Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: July 13, 2005 13:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hah! That was a very cute chapter. Mr. Happypants. Hahahahaha! I can't wait to hear what is on that cd!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 13:24 EDT
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I loved the conversation between Belle and Kich all through this chapter. His comments about his preferred behavior brought to mind; "When I'm good, I'm very good. But when I'm bad...I'm even better." Naughty, naughty Kichiro. And he keeps knocking her for a loop with his little verbal bombs. Looks like he's on the right track. *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: Migoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really happy things are starting to work out with Belle and Kich. It makes me all giddy and happy to read. I was wondering if you have any idea how long this fic will end up being. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Ch41
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 12:47 EDT
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Woohoo! Go Kich! He's finally catching on to the idea that being nice to Belle isn't so bad! And, he got a couple of kisses for his trouble as well! That should be a big clue for him on how treat Belle later. Awesome chapter, the haunted house scene was great! Good job and keep it up! Umm...seeing how often the author is honored and congratulated about a story got me thinking. How often do betas get praise, too? The authors write the stories, and the betas work hard at getting all the bugs out (at least that was my understanding =P). So in this little tidbit, I would like to congratulate the betas on the incredible work you guys have been doing. Awesome job everyone, YOU ALL ROCK!!! Peace, and God bless! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Suze - nsi On: July 13, 2005 12:34 EDT
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FUNTOWN!!!!!! Again, you make me all homesick, Sue! I haven't been to Funtown since I was a kid, but I *loved* that place. Poor Dr. Grumpypants (LMAO!!!)...definitely not a place for those who don't like the combo of sugar high and dizzying rides. I can't believe it was the carousel that finally did him in, though. Poor guy... I bet I know what's on that CD! :D
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: July 13, 2005 12:21 EDT
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sorry I haven't been reviewing, internet is an evil monster that is as temperamental as a pregnant woman. BAH! Anywhooo just read the last 3 or 4 (i think..) chapters...LOVED EM! I reckon Belle and Kich is my favourite couple of yours, I must say. I like Gin and Cain, too, but...something about the dynamics of the two hanyous...I likes it, I does. But that said, I damn near cheered at Cain's amorous antics. I am now more eager than ever to know more about Isabelle...hmm intriguing, they all warned him against her? What is on the minidisc? And I must say it was jubilation and crows of triumph in this hemisphere (southern, the land of oz to be exact :p) when Kich kissed Belle. WOOT! Bout bloody time, too. If only she hadn't thought he was drunk! sorry for the disjointedness of my review, 'tis 3 AM but wanted to review now in case my internet's hormones play up again *shakes fist at provider* Have at you, sah!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova(:D not logged in of course) On: July 13, 2005 11:53 EDT
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awsome fluffy chapter. poor Kich. he was never meant to go to a fair. :D update asap, please. ja ne, Zirra
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Title: Subtitles in Fan Fiction Land?
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2005 11:14 EDT
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Hey, Sue! Um... I have a question. It's a stupid question, but it's been on my mind ever since the couples split. What languages are they speaking to others and to each other? Kichiro knows English, right? Does Belle know Japanese? Does Gin know English? Or does Cain speak Japanese to her to appease her? I know it's Fan Fiction Land and everyone understands each other, but the logic part of my brain is bugging the crap out of me! And I'm sorry for asking you such crazy questions, but I just have to know! I'll even believe you if you say in Fan Fiction Land, subtitles follow them around! I'm pretty sure I'm the only one who has thought of this. But, I'm just curious. I'm a very language-centered person and it's been nagging at the back of my mind. Okay, annoyance aside! I loved that last chapter! As per usual, you rock! XOXO! ~pagan_sedjou
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