| "Purity 4: Justification" Reviews/Comments [ 2208 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: July 13, 2005 10:42 EDT
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Great chapter! Poor Kich. Getting sick at the amusement park. How can Gin and Belle eat so much sweet stuff. Gah. Good thing they're Hanyo or they'd have mouths full of cavities. Grin. Kich is a very well put together character. I can see a lot of Inuyasha in him but he is also a child of the 20th century. I just can't picture a young Inuyasha confidently slipping his hand up a girl's skirt in a haunted house. Grin. Thanks for the great character and wonderful chapter.
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: Mizbum2u(NLI) On: July 13, 2005 09:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sueric! this is awesome! updae again! but... are you making/ continuign more fictions like dex(i dunno how to spell it)? cause if you wont write anymore.... T_T ~hien
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Reviewed By: yasha 101(nli) On: July 13, 2005 01:56 EDT
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oh so sad. Gin dosen't really understand does she? i gues she will eventualy. cant wait for tomorrows update-yasha
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Title: Want More!!!
Reviewed By: silver_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 23:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. That last line about Cain leading her to the bedroom...(SWOON). I love how you take your time to develop your characters...You are an inspiration to me!!! The first thing I do in the morning(after my morning prayer) is to check to see if there's been update. I commend you on your dedication to your stories, there are very few authors who are as reliable as you. Anywho, don't let the morons who don't know anything get you down, they're not worth time or tears. And if they start threatening you, you can always call 911!Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Ch40
Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 22:15 EDT
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Wow...that was awesome, lol. After reading that scene, I found myself asking this:"How in the world did that manage to happen?" Looking back, it started with the bribery...which led to Cain's attempt at fondling Gin's ears...which led to Gin tearing open Cain's shirt and then licking his crests! They should have been flavored? Oh boy, that was the peak of hilariousness in this chapter. Simply superb! Keep it up, and peace be with you! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: July 12, 2005 22:12 EDT
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lol...i wasn't that drunk... :P great chapter! they just dont get it do they? they are too cute! but the question is: who will hook up first? cain and gin? or belle and kich? and what about kich teaching belle to fight? yey for playfighting!!!
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Reviewed By: razorbladesinner(nsi) On: July 12, 2005 21:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN CAIN'S MORALS!!!!!!! That was an awesome chapter, do we get to learn more about his past with Isabelle now? I certainly hope so. Oh and that whole "You're using me for my crests?" That was classic.
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Reviewed By: nerwenfaelvirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 20:22 EDT
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"You're using me for my crests?" She started fumbling with his buttons and snorted. "Of course I am!" she assured him. "What other reason would there be?" "I feel so . . . violated." That's just so funny! Once again, an amazing chapter. :)
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: phantomflame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 19:47 EDT
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What is wrong with Gin? You don't go around licking people all willy nilly. She doesn't need to drink ever again. Then it doesn't help that Cain pounces on her like a dog in heat. He might have been a monster for taking advantage of her while she was drunk, but Cain failed to tell Gin the whole truth of why he stopped. He didn't tell her about the promise he made. Another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: black_rose28, not logged on On: July 12, 2005 19:34 EDT
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Woah that was something else! I think that would be the best Cain/Gin moment in all of history lol. It was sweet that Cain didnt do that with Gin when she was drunk, so this means that Gin and Cain will definatly be more...couple like i guess u could call it? Great chapter update soon plz!!
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: July 12, 2005 15:55 EDT
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0_o oh my...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 15:17 EDT
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Aww how sad. I'm at a lost for words right now, it was such a good chapter that I can't put thoughts into words. Don't you just hate it when that happens?
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Title: *sticks head in freezer to cool flaming cheeks*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 13:14 EDT
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What a scorcher! I was all, "Whoohoo! Go Cain!" when he all but pounced on her. It's starting to look like they'll be addressing the "Isabelle" question soon. I'm wondering if Cain is only fooling himself with Belle's need of him as the reason he didn't follow his mate, the real reason being he didn't want to. So subconsciously he justified it, promising himself; "I'll do it later..." -- Oh, I have no doubt that he would keep his promise, he has too much integrity not to. But maybe he needs to reexamine the whole thing. -- Then again, I could be shooting in the dark here...you've been very secretive about the particulars there Sue. So you'll keep weaving and I'll keep reading, '...and a grand time was had by all!'
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 12:36 EDT
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:) That was very nice
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Reviewed By: Darksquire(not logged in) On: July 12, 2005 12:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... those chapters were awesome! I love the intensity between Cain and Gin. Sorry I havn't reveiwed in a while but I have been on vacation. I want to take this opportunity to tell you just how great of a writer you are. Most of the time when I read fan fictions they are enjoyable stories but they do not have the same depth as yours do. Your stories have very deep emotion and very realistic charachters even though they are demons. It takes a very powerful writer to make a story as deep, intense, and hilarious at the same time as your stories are. I greatly appreciate your putting your stories out here on the internet so that we can read them and enjoy them. ~Darksquire
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