| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 09:47 PST
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Thanks for the clarification on my last review. So, I know Kagome is a devoted girl, but, how is she going to 'pray' now? It'd be interesting to see her reaction when she face her new praying partner. I suppose you're going to put in motion the 'freeing Inuyasha' plan now that Kagome will have more time to think over it. Well, we'll see. Bye
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Title: more
Reviewed By: Raz 2 On: January 07, 2007 15:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE Please i love reading your work!
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Reviewed By: Poker Alice [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 19:07 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantasticly sexy story. Horray for updates. =^_^=
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Reviewed By: asterick On: December 31, 2006 16:30 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is seriously one of the most intelligently written inuyasha fanfics I have read in a long time. It'd be so easy to make this a really crude PWP, but somehow you manage to keep the sex scenes coming while still keeping their characters and dignities intact. Thank you! Looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze (nli) On: December 30, 2006 20:29 PST
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Wow, another lovely chapter. Very well done, though a little less description on the actual clothes and rather on the emotions the clothes evoked. Anyway, I'm burning with curiousity to find out who the next tetesudai is. Please tell me she somehow ended with Inuyasha again. The thought of anyone and anything else beside Inu-chan is simply disturbing. Looking forward to the next chapter. Shizu-chan
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Reviewed By: cbm1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 19:40 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo i fricken LOVE this story!! update soon please!!! oo and do you have a fan fiction dot net profile? if so wat is it?
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsi) On: December 28, 2006 19:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You freakin' ROCK!!! I looooove this story so much. Your writing and the plot are just amazing! Please keep up the good work. I know you have put alot of effort into this and beleive me...it shows. Can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
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Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 12:01 PST
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AHH! That was the best chapter EVER! I don't understand why she can't have inuyasha anymore! I love how you portrayed and explained the whole plan of Kagomes. It was genious!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 02:39 PST
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WHOA!!! That was one of the Hottest,Sexy,Cute and Bittersweet moment I've read. He kissed her yay, it's really in the KISS where your heart lies. Hmm, seems like love to me, just hope it ain't over before it starts. Hey, why does she have to go back to the brothel, why can't Inu just be her only one? Update soon
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 00:06 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good, HOT chapter. It seems that Kagome had the time of her life pleasuring Inuyasha (and who could blame her if he is even half as sexy as he sounds, lol). But, I can't help but think that this night may cost the two of them dearly. I just hope that Inuyasha will survuve the punishment he will surely take for his extra night with Kagome. I sincerely hope that can find a way to get Inu out of that hellhole. I'll definitely be looking for the next update.
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 13:59 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter. but i'm sad that they can't see each other anymore. hope something great happens to bring them together!! update soon.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 01:18 PST
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I do like how you've written Kagome in this story, even though she's doing something that would be looked down upon in current society, she still has her air of innocence. She's also not wishy-washy like she's usually written and she's not a desperate fool in-love either. This slow burn is cool, sometimes it takes awhile to find true love, I think that way you cherish it more - friends before lovers. See ya next read
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 22:04 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHH YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! i'm so sad about the limit though. good job!
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Reviewed By: LadyButterfly21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 20:59 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter brought the plot along nicely and you did manage to express Inuyasha's "feelings" towards Kagome well,the story makes more sense now so good job!The one thing that left me puzzled is if Inuyasha and other half- s/demons are subject to such rigid etiquette when socializing with others that weren't her kind why didn't she know of this already? Kagome isn't that clueless.Aside from that point I'm really enjoying this story and please keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Kaname_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 19:51 PST
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Holy crap! You gota update on this one, PRONTO!! Love it! Keep up the great work! ^_^
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