| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: Genie666_28 On: December 21, 2006 15:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I juat read the new chapter and I thought that it was amazing! I had actually the first chapetrs a while back when it was first posted and I got hooked. But for some reason, since you didn't update, this fic slipped my mind. But today I saw it posted and i was so surprised! I just read like a moster. You have really great talent to come up with a story like but I just hope that you could update this story more often!!! This story is explicit, just how I like it! But PEASE PLEASE PLEAAAASSSEEEE you gotta send the other chapters....I really wanna know what's gonna happen next!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 14:54 PST
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*cuddles nussles and gropels* doing good..good luck in rescuing inu yasha kagome!
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 09:01 PST
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Great Chapter! I'll be waiting in anticipation for the next!
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Reviewed By: cbm1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2006 17:40 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 20:39 PST
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boo when are u gonna update haha going through withdrawel
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Reviewed By: tamtam807 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 13:14 PST
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COME BAAAAAAAAAAAACCCCCKKK FINISH THE FIC PLEEZZ
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Title: >w
Reviewed By: sallyo129 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 15:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I happened upon this fic, at first I just sat here and stared at the title scratching my head. "Interesting..." was all I could think. The summary caught my eye, so onward I went, and read I did! And now I'm all "OMIGOSH THIS FIC LYKE AWESOME DOOD!!!111one11!!1!!!" XD I love the part about Inuyasha not kissing... Reminds me of Pretty Woman... *clears throat* "Pretty hanyou walking down the street! Pretty hanyou, the kind I'd like to meet, pretty hanyou! I don't believe you! You're not the truth! No one can look as good as you! Mercy!"
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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 13:42 PST
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I like the plot. Is sad and sweet. A good combination. I just have one question: At what time does she pray?
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 21:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is absolutely amazing, I am really feeling it. I like the Pretty Woman spin to your tale, male instead of a female. God knows we're always the low man on the totem pole. Their reluctance to be anything more than client and customer is angsty, I just wanna yell, get over it already ya'll like each other! Please update a.s.a.p this story is HOT. P.S. LOVE THE LEMONS
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Reviewed By: Anna22 On: November 07, 2006 14:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All i can say is write more!!! Write more!!! lol
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 18:15 PST
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I love this story, it's one of the best lemons I've read in ages. Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chappie ^^
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Reviewed By: elly86 On: November 02, 2006 23:58 PST
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This story is so hot!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I Couldn't stop reading!
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Reviewed By: Kirarie1 On: November 02, 2006 23:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooooo good!!! I haven't read a really great online story in so long and you so just gave me one! Thank You! thank you!!! i have never seen anything quite like this story before and i deeply appreciate your creativity with this story. I feel so sad for the two of them but i'm glad that they found each other. This story really is very original and well done. you should be proud of yourself! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! it's so interesting and i love how you write. keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Inu's girl On: November 02, 2006 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! I love this fic! It is just been awesome so far and there is so much potential for the rest of the story. I love how long the chapters are and how much the plot is advanced every time. I do hate that we missed 3 of their "sessions" though-grin. Sorry that was the hentai in me. The hopeless romantic is all misty eyed thinking of how kagome could possably rescue Inuyasha from is fate and get to keep him forever like her mother seems to have wanted to do...or did she?! Now that would be interesting. Ha Ha the higurashi women like to test drive their men...okay not so funny but still. Well I'm rambling now and all I wanted to do is tell you how much I'm enjoying your writing. Seriously get around the copy right laws and you could sell this story, sigh o-well. I cant wait for the next chapter! Inu's girl P.S. I wanted to leave you a comment on Adult fanfiction but I didnt see where to leave it. I'm glad I found you here. Okay I'm gone this time...bye...your the greatest...okaybye.
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