| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: redbutterfly21 On: November 01, 2006 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You portrayed Kagome in a very different light. Usually she is not taken as being so naive and inoccent, however I really like it as the building relationship between her and Inuyasha is very sweet. Just one little flaw-isin't it a bit random for Inuyasha to all of a sudden start havingfeelings for Kagome? Almost directly after he meets her he starts falling in love with her! At least this is how I saw it. Anywhoo, keep updating!! I absolutely love the story so if you continue in a similar vain I will be most happ:)
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 22:46 PST
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aw man please update soon (and the man was totally gender neutral). Just read all of it and majorly addicted and feeling bad for inuyasha. All the emotions and everything..good job. and way glad kagome has an aly in ryu
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 09:57 PST
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i adore this story. i can't wait to see what kagome manages to come up with to help inuyasha. i think it's cute that Ryu knows who to schedule her for without even thinking about it!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 14:04 PDT
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aww....there falling inlove!! awsome!
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Reviewed By: john- matthew On: October 15, 2006 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and continue the story. i think that you are doing an awesome job!
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Reviewed By: MysteriousAM On: October 15, 2006 13:04 PDT
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Love it, love it, love it! Please keep going with this, because it is a very interesting set up. I hated to stop there! I'll be eagerly looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 02:49 PDT
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This story is humorous and captivating i love it! Please update soon!!
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Title: Congratulations.
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction meets the K.T.S. Damn Good Fic specifications. One of the few that has recieved all tens, it is considered one of THE fics to read as far as this anime/manga is concerned. This is Sueric-level storytelling, friend. Well done- continue this series or I will eat your brains and finish the story myself.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 15:13 PDT
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i'm lovin' it! what a way to start a relationship...a shy shrine virgin who's there to do as her family wishes and an abused (which is most definetly what our poor hanyou is) shrine prostitute who has never really had anyone care for him. they are so good for each other!
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Reviewed By: frosstyshake(nsi) On: October 12, 2006 13:19 PDT
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Oh I don't care that your a procrastinator,I'm just glad that you updated, and oh what an update!!!!
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Title: yay
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 10:33 PDT
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This is AWESOME so far! It's just a cute story and i love how its turning out. I think they are perfectly characterized!! WONDERFUL JOB!!
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 09:50 PDT
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oh, i'm hooked. continue... ^_^
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Title: please update!
Reviewed By: yume_no_hanabira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 13:52 PDT
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I love this story! Please update soon!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: DonutFiend [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 18:26 PDT
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This fic is totally AWESOME. Please update soon?
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 02:41 PDT
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I like your story I think was good I hope you up date soon on it
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