| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: *psychokitsune On: July 24, 2006 21:24 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wow. It's been forever since you wrote. Please UP_date soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Anna333 On: July 24, 2006 17:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG IVE SEEN THIS STORY SO MANY TIMES AND IVE BEEN WAITIN SO LONG FOR U TO GET MORE CHAPTERS I LOVE IT UPDATE BEFOR I GO NUTS LOL OOPS TO LATE! LOL ANYWAYS LOVE IT UPDATE UPDATE!
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Title: Outstanding
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 17:29 PDT
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Well now, It's wonderful that see that you have decided to make this a multi chapter story. This story is not in the usual form and I love that you built a prequel to make it easier to understand. This has been on my list of favorites since you first put it up, and I think I e-mailed you about it too. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Would she be allowed to choose him every night? From what I remember of the greek and roman vestle virgins, they had favorites and regular clients, how close will you be adhering to that idea. Can you tell this story has me excited? Let me know. thanx
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Reviewed By: Minerva519 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 00:09 PDT
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You didn't even need that first chapter, but it's still good.
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Reviewed By: Akihana nsi On: July 22, 2006 23:44 PDT
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You updated! Excellent. I'm really happy that this story is going to become a multi-chapter story. Even if it is just a long PWP. All the background information is helpful in understanding what is going on. Also, I would love to beta for you. I've never betaed someone before, but I have edited papers and the like and hopefully will catch typos (you have a few) and other little errors. Heaven knows I never bother to look when I write. Anyways, if you still need a beta feel free to email me at akihana15@hotmail.com
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Title: you must continue
Reviewed By: Bri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 17:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Ha! this is so awesome!!! you must write more, if you don't i'll send my owl that's stuck in a sock after you!
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Reviewed By: Portia On: July 22, 2006 16:58 PDT
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AWWW!Please write a morning after! This is genious!!!!! I LOVE YOU!
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Reviewed By: brazenthought On: July 22, 2006 11:31 PDT
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I am so glad you are not going to leave this as a one-shot. You have a way of making your stories great.
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 08:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
Luv it its soooo cool! please continue
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: July 22, 2006 06:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I was surprised to the story again. I remember it was at aff. Please continue the story. I am sure you have a plot. cya
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Reviewed By: Kaiios On: July 22, 2006 06:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh I loved it!! Please write a continuation!! PLEASE -begs pathetically-
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: July 14, 2006 21:39 PDT
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aww, that last line killed me. very cute.
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Reviewed By: heartgirl9229 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 18:43 PST
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You should definetly write a continuation!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Lady_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 09:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!! I want to see how kagome and InuYasha turn out. Will kagome just be able to LEAVE, Will InuYasha be able to LET her leave????PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!!
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Reviewed By: Kairi01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2005 18:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so good, must make into fanfic want to see kagome free inuyasha...so sad he does that and is so unhappy but she has two months right that should be enough time to help him out. Kairi
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