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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: pinkpuppy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 19:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is so amazing i just cant stop reading i have to admit that i was at first reluctant to read it but im glad i did its absoloutly spectacular i cant wait to see what happens next so i just wanted to say that you are the most amazing author ever! pinkpuppy
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Reviewed By: monykkka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 11:42 PDT
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:))) i just loved those last words hehe. miroku is quite the smooth talker, isn't he? well, you got me guessing what happens to little shiori.. and considering that shippo is with her all the time.. do they actually get together when they get older? and then he loses her? or what?and where did yashita go? i'm guessing it does have something to do with our story-line, right? well, that said, i'm looking forward to more of your brilliant writing :) hope you don't keep us waiting too long!! love yaaa
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 14:08 PDT
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Fabulous chapter. I just love Inu/kag squish - and you are very good about giving us a little every chapter. I enjoyed Kagome looking at the photos of herself that Yashita has taken over time. Stalkery, yes, cute, yes! I thought it was a little odd, the meeting with Sess. Perhaps it was just my paranoid nature, but he seemed to be hiding something. Add that tothe fact that no one else was there and I found it really really interesting.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, I enjoyed the chappie. Especially the part involving Yahita's little dirty nudie pic collection. OH I couldn't stop laughing! I just imagine him hunkered down around her house clicking away. Oh and I wish I had Inuyasha chasing me into showers...I'm still reeling from the leather pants visions from last time. I feel bad that Kagome has to hear about Shiori's death and feel helpless in changing her fate. Such a burden to carry. I was sad to see that there was no Yashita becuase they always have interesting little interldes (btw the wedding pics, how sweet!). I was also a tiny bit worried about Inuyasha catching on and thinking about her 'time running out' comment. I hope he doesn't think on that one too much. T'was a great chappie. Thanks bunches!!
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 08:48 PDT
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Hehe, loved the letter! Men and their 500 year grudges...and the pictures! Inuyasha has stooped to stalking girls...a little hard up for someone with his looks, LOL! Overall a very good chapter! Some interesting information (So sad about Shiori!) as well as some humor, smutiness, and fluff. A little sad that Yashita wasn't in it, but hopefully you'll remedy that with an appearance in the near future...er, or the far future, if you want to get technical. ^^;; Anyway, can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 21:25 PDT
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wonderful chapter as always. I was starting to go into withdrawal!! Are the kids back in school yet? I'm hoping for more updates soon :)
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Title: Hey Feni!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 20:33 PDT
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Ah, what a pleasure to have your new chapter to read in my first few moments of free time in DAYS! Just the thing I need to motivate me to get to work on my own lemon chapter...thank you! As always, you write beautifully.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 18:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damned brains working so overtime, I forgot the ratings...lmao....Im so lame sometimes, lol. :P
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 18:04 PDT
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Heh, waking up the household like that is always fun, lol...oh yea, there goes my hentai brain again, lmao......hmmm though, Kags is begining to worry it seems, as is Sessaki. And wonder where exactly everyone went to. Interesting. Great chappie(s)...Update when ya can. :D
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 11:54 PDT
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Took me long enough to get caught up! I'd planned to read these three chapters at the beginning of the week, but between the madness that is work and school (as well as other distractions), I'm just now finishing them. They were all good chapters, but as always I enjoyed the last half of the third chapter the most. VERY cute Inuyasha/Kagome interaction! And I couldn't help but be insanely amused at the fact that Inuyasha was very unaware of what seat he was in on the bike. It would be very entertaining if he somehow found out later...or if Yashita brings it up...that would be just like a man to remember that one big insult to his manhood over 500 years later! LOL Anyway, I'm looking forward to her meeting with Sessaki. And I'm hoping that we find out what happened to Shiori. Until next time! ^_^
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Reviewed By: InuyashaChic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the BEST fanfic that I have read on this site so far. Good plot and excellent writing style. definately 10 out of 10! Keep it up!
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Title: The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse
Reviewed By: GgBg [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 19:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Fenik it's me, I bet you forgot about me or you were probably thinking I forgot about you, ha. Just summer school for me and summer school for my son and work kicking my butt. I have a lot of reading to catch up on and then you will be getting reviews from me. Just wanted to let you know that I didn't die or fall off of the earth. Drop me a line if you have the time...I know that your getting ready for back to school too. I'll be talking at you later, I'm going to try and find something to read, ha ha. Later Ggbg
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Title: Twin Throttles
Reviewed By: QueenTatooine [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An absolutely wonderful chapter. I loved how everything fell together and am enticed in the idea of figuring out exactly what Arashi is going to give birth to. Is this a common occurance? Looking forward to more. ~QueenTatooine
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 17:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your images ("moth-fluttered light") and what a great way to come back from Hahvahd!
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Reviewed By: Seiai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL...love the analogy with nipples and motorcycles! great update!
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