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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: =) On: June 05, 2006 02:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story. It's nice to read and the characters aren't tiring. I like stories where Inuyasha and Kagome are roommates. Great job writing the story. It deserved the nomination. Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 01:21 EDT
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I'm in love with your fic. It's been a long time since I've been on, but when I saw your fic I instantly remembered it and caught up on the chapters I had gotten behind on. I'm glad you've kept with it. I don't know if I've mentioned it to you before or not, but you should read Dragon's lover"s Transformations and changing lives. I need to finish reading it myself, but I think you would love them. Again, I love your work and please keep it up.
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 01:06 EDT
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Hahaha! I agree with the 16-yr.-old comment. They should be more like me and at LEAST wait 'till they're 18.... 0.0 ... Oops...Haha...yeah...
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Reviewed By: Kittenyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 15:53 EDT
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This chapter is great so let me in on what you're going to do next chapter oh if you don't have my e-mail adress here it is j_youkai@yahoo.com Keep workin' on your fanfic.
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Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 (nsi) On: May 28, 2006 14:59 EDT
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Oh my goodness. I can't believe that I can remember all of the previous chapters, I love your story and it is really amazing. I don't want to wait for another posting from you.
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Reviewed By: serendith_ On: May 27, 2006 12:44 EDT
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I just found your story and am really enjoying it! I hope to read more soon!
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Reviewed By: Tanaga Mannie_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 00:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i teally enjoy reading this story it's wat u would call a reallity . it suites the char,s very good. please update soon ok
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: May 26, 2006 10:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok yea Inu needs to get back home so that Kagome can stop freaking out. And she also needs to take a deep breath and just try to stay calm and not freak out until she knows for sure what's going to happen between her and Inu. Anyway it was a good chapter update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: IC On: May 26, 2006 07:34 EDT
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tha fic is awome
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: May 25, 2006 15:21 EDT
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It's nice to see you updated, I was wondering about Inuyasha's thoughts on what happened between him and Kagome.
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Title: ch. 18
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not sure if i reviewed yet but i wanted to stop and say thank you for the update and tell you how much i enjoy your story!everything is perfect so i don't have much to critique or suggest...good job! can't wait for what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Charice On: May 25, 2006 13:05 EDT
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Please update as soon as you can. It's a great story. I'm dying to know what will happen next.
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 08:38 EDT
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I loved it the drama, everything, even though i usually HATe drama, it fits with the story line so what the hell I can live with it:) update soon, tis a great story and hope to be able to read more soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: MsAnimeLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 04:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter. ::exhales with a smile:: OT - I'm a fan of Laurell Hamillton too!! I just learned of her approx 3 wks ago and have already purchased and read 5 bks. They alternate btwn Anita Blake and Merry Gentry series. I'm soo happy I found out about her.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 22:23 EDT
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alright aleight... next chapter is what im waiting for
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