| "Close Quarters" Reviews/Comments [ 356 ] |
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Title: This rocks!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 04:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think inu should do kags too!,But at the same time if it's to soon it'll mess it up I get that so keep it up your doing great! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!! LadyWolf;)
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: September 19, 2005 03:32 EDT
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Nice dress enjoyed the updates. Yeah the one chap was a little boring. The people that think you should speed up can piss off in my opinion I think the story is great the way it is. Your developing the charaters nicely. Also I'd like to know more about the plagarism. Rainstorm61879@hotmail.com Thanks and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss-nsi On: September 19, 2005 02:46 EDT
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I like Good Eats too but I gotta say my favorite is 30 Minute Meals. Anyway! Awesome chapters and great dress for Kagome. Don't give in to the lemon pressure. Make them wait or they read another story! This is absolutely fabulous exactly the way it is!
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Reviewed By: Tia Q On: September 19, 2005 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...great chapters! :D I love the recent development, it was so sweet! And the description on Kagome's dress was done wonderfully! Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter, so please update again soon when you get the chance! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Odoriko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 00:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply beautiful dress...I like how you'll give a visual aid for the dresses you talk about. And, of course, GREAT chapter. I heard the plagarism is on Fanfiction.net. I never go on there for that reason....but, what could I do to help stop it?
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Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 00:14 EDT
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I don't think the fic is slow OR boring. I hate fics in which it's all happy and they have sex from the very begining. ::growls:: I love your take on Inu. I just CANT make him the way you do! It's brilliant! The way you write him, and describe his thoughts is awesome. :)
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 01:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...I feel so sorry for Kagome! She has both Koga and Inuyasha down her back in this chapter...and Sango is gone, her saving grace in the chaos. Anyway, awsome chapter! It was very eventful and I loved it! :D Please, update again soon when you can! ^_^
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Title: abheff
Reviewed By: abheff29 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 18:17 EDT
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Love this fic!! Can't wait until you update!!
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Title: Close Quarters
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 00:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: AerynsPistol [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! looking forward to updates! ^^
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Reviewed By: bubbles-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 20:31 EDT
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You keep updating! I love you!!! *huggles* It's authors like you who keep me interested and happy!!!! You are a trooper! Woot-ness!
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2005 18:28 EDT
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please update!and i feel so sorry for kags!she has a hard life and i agree wit InuGrrrl either update on the sex or let inu kill kouga!=) UPDATE
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Title: Thrown to the wolves literally eh?
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl (NSI) On: September 13, 2005 13:20 EDT
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InuYasha is wastin' time...he needs to jump Kag's bones...or at least highten the sexual tension! But knowing him, killing kouga would be far more interesting.
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Reviewed By: Silver Angeliss-too lazy to sign in On: September 13, 2005 11:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cool! It's got romance, sexual tension...everything that makes a great story. I just hope Inuyasha and Kagome get together soon. P.S. You got the recipe from Good Eats, didn't you? hehe
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