| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Title: SO COOL
Reviewed By: siw-wa On: March 26, 2006 03:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have me melting in this chapter!!!!
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Title: You Trickster
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2006 21:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love it! I can't believe how you tricked me, making me think that Duo's dream was true. I really like Duo's birthday present!! Continue to update this is one of my favorites!!
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 13:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You little tease you!! Great chapter though, I loved how you foreshadowed Duo's dreams to what he felt. This is a great fic so far and keep updating, also if still need some help with grammar or spelling then you can always email me at anytime. I am always online. Adam
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Reviewed By: WickedGame [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 22:58 EST
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i just caught onto this through the 1x2ml, and i am very happy i did. i really like it, and i like that you take the time to research your premise. it makes the story have that much more depth. i do hope you post the chapters on the ml! i am going to put this story in my whole favorites thing so i can see it if you do update. also, i know you were saying you were in need of a beta. i am willing if you need someone still.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 12:59 EST
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Where to begin when have less than two minutes for a review. Well I beginning to love this story and the interaction between Heero and Duo of course is growing with every chapter. Now I dunno why but I hope that when Heero says that there is something more that he's sensing from Duo I wonder if it maybe magical? Prehaps Duo is a Celestial Gift or Celestial Adjacent and doesn't know it? That would be an interesting twist and gahhhh what they did to Eutal... *shivers* Now I think Duo should blame Tricieus for his very vivid and detail wet dream *smirks* cuz if the guy hadn't told him all that ...extra stuff then his subconscious wouldn't have known what to concoct. Oh one more thing before I go, I think that Duo should ask Heero if the emperor *sorry for spelling* has chosen him for that special night *shivers* Cuz the way the guy acts toward Heero I think that may indeed be his intentions. I had thought that maybe there was this fatherly thing going on but I dunno... the way he looks at heero seriously gives me the creeps. And Hey they kissed!!! Wahoo TWICE!! Update really soon 'kay.
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Title: The best story I've read in awhile!!
Reviewed By: noh1 On: March 21, 2006 03:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I also stumbled onto tbis fic, because of a post on the 1x2ML and boy am I glad I did! I am immensely enjoying the twists and turns of the plotline and I love how multidimensional the characters are. I wanna know what they do next! *stamping her foot like a spoiled child* Keep up the excellent writing! And I hope that the ultrasexy Heero will be not be just a dream, but Duo's reality pretty soon. Although having said that, please take as much time as you need to develop the characters. I am just enjoying the ride! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Hails On: March 20, 2006 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your sty;e of writing, it's flowing and easy to follow, as well as lending stuff to the plot. You have a few spelling mistakes though, but that' aren't a problem, or even really noticeable! The idea isn't a new one, but the twists in the plot, like the Lord or Lady having to sleep with the emperor and such, are really interesting, and stuff, so original plot. Anyway it's really engaging and I'm really looking forward to your next installment!
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Reviewed By: WCInsane On: March 20, 2006 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was definitely a different type of story thats for sure....not what i'm used to reading but good....*grins* no spelling mistakes!!!! first story where I didn't notice any of them. Made my day...awesome story
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Reviewed By: Cyrrer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 18:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I just read about this story in the 1x2ML today and I had to try it. And I have to say, that I really enjoyed it. It's nicely written and i think that you created a very liveley new world. Hope to read more of this soon. The curiosity regarding Heeros nightmares is driving me crazy
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Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2006 10:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn!!! A dream!!!! And I was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hoping it would finally happen….. Guess, life is REALLY unfair sometimes. Anyways, I loved this chapter. I soooo want to hug Duo at the moment, and Heero was soooo cute. I hope that you'll continue soon. Hugs, Anya
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 00:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome! Awesome chapter! I love this story so.The pacing is still good. Love how things are heating between heero and Duo.Interesting turn of events with primivitus(however it's spelt :)),it was good enough for even me to be creeped out and scared for duo.Keep writing. keep updating. Can't wait for the next chap!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 18, 2006 20:04 EST
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an update so soon! and worth waiting for because that scene with duo nearly falling into the lampreys was hearstopping, and that wet dream (i didn't want it to be a wet dream, because heero was so sexy like that XD !) was scorching! it's great that you finally are getting duo to start admitting feelings about heero to himself. the smooth transition of wufei into the story was really good and i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter so update again soon!
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2006 13:08 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OHHHHHHHHHHHH!ooooooo0oooo00ooo0ooo0oo..... I want more!! Please!!!! Don't make me wait for the next chapter! I'll love you forever if you put up another (LONG) chapter in the (very) near future!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [Not Signed In] On: March 18, 2006 10:28 EST
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Wow, you nice save there. We wouldn't have lynched you, but I think they're might have been a mob...but you wouldn't do that to us >.< Nice wet dream sequence. MUST HAVE MORE!
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Title: I love this story
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2006 23:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the way that the story flows and that Duo finally admitted to himself about his feelings for Heero. I love the sparks between Duo and Heero; I just hope everything works out for the best.
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