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Title: Avid Reader (when am I not?)
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 14:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. And it was updated (on ff.net anyway) on my birthday! Hazzah! Thank you! ^o^ *gives you a cookie* Well, of course I had to reread the last few chapters, but wow. This was... It felt important. Like this was what you'd based everything upon or had drawn everything to. Nice. Bonus points for including the beloved Incan gods and goddesses. And the dinosaurs. It's like seventh grade all over again! I do have a question though. You say that Inuyasha is supposed to be a manifestation of the inu Libra. But how can he be balanced if the hanyou has one star, the youkai has three and the human is made up on two? That seems demon favored to me. Is that why we have Kagome? It'd make sense. Hmm... Well. I am very interested in this little (and y little, I mean serious course) physics lesson you've got going here. Riveting. It's like, you think it's... and then it turns out... But I think I can understand what you've told us so far. And oh my god. I was right! That is a little Kirara-Sesshomaru konek-inu thing. ADORABLE! And completely unfathomable. I love it! ^o^ *gives you more cookies* So, thanks again for the b-day update and another a few days afterward. Love and all that. Hoping everything's good on your side of the computer. And we all just as psyched as you to get to this pivotal moment. I'm gonna go read the next chapter, review it and go take a few Advil. Ja~
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 09:23 PDT
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Wow...just when I think I have it figured out I get so confused again. That is a good thing though, it's the sign of a good read and an excellent author. I did not feel as if you were being blasphemous. God has a sense of humor or we would not have one ourselves. The cliffhanger was awesome...totally forgot about Kanna while trying to figure out what is going on! So many choices for our heroes to make and all of them seem as if they are not a choice at all. I know all will eventually be revealed, but I will have to go back and re-read the last chapter again and see if I can figure out what is happening. As always it was a wonderful chapter!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 09:22 PDT
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Wow...just when I think I have it figured out I get so confused again. That is a good thing though, it's the sign of a good read and an excellent author. I did not feel as if you were being blasphemous. God has a sense of humor or we would not have one ourselves. The cliffhanger was awesome...totally forgot about Kanna while trying to figure out what is going on! So many choices for our heroes to make and all of them seem as if they are not a choice at all. I know all will eventually be revealed, but I will have to go back and re-read the last chapter again and see if I can figure out what is happening. As always it was a wonderful chapter!
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Title: Lost
Reviewed By: TheHybrid02 On: March 12, 2010 00:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't understand what happened, but it was a great story till 6 or 7 chapters ago when things became ridiculously confusing. actually I've been reading this for three days and now its like the magics gone...sigh...
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 17:35 PST
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Wow! I have missed so many chapters! This is all very confusing and I have a difficult time visualizing it, but I get the gist of it. So someone (s) has to make a choice. This sounds like a riddle and if someone figures it out correctly, everything should be alright. Can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 09:16 PST
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Wow! I get behind a bit and have to wait for the weekend to read the new chapter and I get rewarded with a two for one deal, excellent! I'm glad to hear you are feeling better. With these two chapters I found that if I tried to make sense of things as I went along I got more confused than if I just let go and read it. As details were added and explanations given things fell into place and what had been random began to for patterns. Just as it must be for the characters. I'm still not sure what the precise situation is and what the choices are and that makes for a cliffhanger for the next chapter when I'm sure things will be made more clear. I thought you handled The One pretty well but then I'm a big fan of Dogma too.
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 21:08 PST
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I am sorry to hear that you have had such a rough time. I hope that all will turn out well for you. This chapter is wonderful. I studied history when I was in college and recognized Queztocoatl (I think I just abused that poor name) from way back...that was just too cool. Not to mention Nessie. I laughed out loud at that one :) I love the notes at the end of your chapters, I feel as if I have had a good read and learned something along the way. It's the best of all worlds! This chapter was well worth the wait. I wonder what the next one will bring. I ponder on all of the things you pack in there, but just when I think I have it figured out I get a pleasant surprise. I am truly enjoying this and will hate to see it end.
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2010 00:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa...and I'm a Libra, LOL. Great update! I can't wait to see how you balance everything out!
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Reviewed By: ER On: December 09, 2009 02:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, keep at it! ^^
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 19:00 PST
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Oh no! Are they gone forever? I don't understand what's happening at all. I think you're giving me a heart attack! What will happen to Sesshoumaru and Kilala?! Gah! Oi, even though you're on my favorites list, mm.org doesn't send me notices when you've updated. Is there a way I can get notification? Maybe you could make a post in your journal when you update? I think I get those. ^_^ This was another hand-wringing chapter. I can't wait til it's all over. You're killing me! LOL Everything is so jumbled and everyone is getting trapped. There doesn't seem to be a solution. BTW, hot lemon with Kilala and Sess. Yum, yum. ^_^ Loved how they fought together.
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Reviewed By: ginhayashi85 On: November 21, 2009 21:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you finish this. Im finally caught up and will go insane if you dont update soon.
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2009 06:20 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks again for updating! I'm sorry to hear that your life has been tough and I hope it gets better for you. I like your idea of the Heavenly Generals and other characters being turned into constellations in the sky. I so did not see that one coming. Hopefully Shippo can save the day, it is the fox kit's time to shine! I wonder what Inuyasha is doing right now? Well I shall have to wait until the next update to find out. Thanks again for not abandoning this story and I hope everything in your life gets better because you are a cool person and you deserve an awesome life. Sincerely, Zach P.S. Thanks for the email, I always think it is cool when authors go out of their way to email their fans. So I just wanted to say, you rock.
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Title: More than worth the wait
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 19:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Trust me, I'll be reading and reviewing as long as you're willing to write. You have one of the great epics of IY going here; it's well worth waiting for. Besides, I have concentrate so hard to follow the physics and the battlespace that it keep my mind off the recent loss of a friend: please do keep at it. M-chan P.S. You'd get an 11 on Enjoyment but the dial doesn't go that high.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 03:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this sucks ass. Inuyasha, Kirara and Sesshomaru are the only ones left. And what was that about Rin? She can't be a constellation (unless she'd be considered the princess that crosses Vega, but she has no prince. Not to mention that whole cycles thing)... Can she? Hmm... Well, I hope Shippo can get out of the void somehow and warn Inuyasha and Yorei. And I'm hoping that Sesshomaru and Kirara can get out of bed before anyone else is swallowed. O_o I do like the idea of making them constellations though. Very original. *gives you a cookie* I have to say that the physics and brane matter isn't as difficult as I thought it'd be. It's extremely difficult, yes. But when put into context, as you've done in this story, I think it's infinitely easier to understand. Hazzah! In any case, I hope all's well on your side of the computer. Don't worry. Six months isn't so long to wait for a chapter. Just please don't, you know, make us wait a year this time. *wavies* JA MATA~! ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: October 19, 2009 16:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe your welcome. Sometimes a cattle prod is needed. You know, I just realized I've been reading this story for 3 years!!! OMG where did that time go? I swear this is getting worse as I get older. A year used to take forever to pass when I was younger. Anyway; I really do love this story, don't totally understand the physics stuff but I get the jist of it. I'm trying to figure out how this will all end; it better be a happy ending. I've read three books recently that all had sad endings and I'm in need of a happy one for a change. Well update soon ok, I'll keep the prod charged LOL. ^.~
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