| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: LOL
Reviewed By: DemiToast On: February 02, 2007 15:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 35: "Something is disturbing the space-time continuum!" ... I lol'd so hard when I read that. It has to be the best line I've ever heard, and I'm going to carry that quote around with me for ages. Oh, and great story by the way.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 18:52 PST
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!! They made a fucking creepy thing!!!!!!!! Scary!Update soon.
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Reviewed By: JazzyFe On: January 29, 2007 20:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I can't remember if I reviewed this or not, but even if I did, I have to say that I really enjoy this fic. It's unique, very well written, and refreshing to read. I have come across a few excellent writers in the past couple of months, and it leaves me positive that I will always be an avid reader as opposed to a writer ;) -luvsjazz
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Reviewed By: entropy9 (not signed it) On: January 29, 2007 01:08 PST
Comment/Review:
eyecatching summary! not story, sorry
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Title: darnit
Reviewed By: entropy9 (not signed it) On: January 29, 2007 01:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote this long review and it got deleted... basically, i tried many times to read this story but could not get into it. today i forced myself and now i love it! i'm on ch. 29 and i think you should ask readres to help you write an eyecatching story (lol, maybe offer a nice short story or something in return)...sigh so mad my review go tdeleted...anyway in my case, i just wasn't interested enough...i had this bookmarked since you put out the first chapter, and because the other fics suck now (i can't find a good one i haven't read) i forced myself to read yours. i was blown away. you write just the way i want the story to go...you really have talent. the problem is th estory starts out slow, but if readers stick with it, they are rewarded...email me if you want any advice, help, a summary :-P, or a specific piece of fanart. i'm at your service entropy_nine@yahoo.com p.s 9 for enjoyment b/c this is a hard fic to get into, and you have to be patient for the really good stuff...but it's worth it...i'll up it to a 10 when the action gets good.
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Reviewed By: SGWolf On: January 28, 2007 20:46 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, keep writing please.
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Reviewed By: yujigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 05:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW let's see this is a great story so far.I oh ya love Sesshoumaru and Kirara! they are so cute!!!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 17:40 PST
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Very exciting, especially when you consider everyone is motionless!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Moonlit_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 21:01 PST
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Woooooow! This has...this is the...wow. I can't even express how great this strory is! You've captured the characters so well, I can entirely see the entire story in my head as it goes on. I really hope that you continue to write, b/c I love it!!! Great job!
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Title: awsome
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 14:13 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an absolutly magnificent story so far... I love it.. Everything that is goin on is pulling me further and further into this story... I cant wait to see what happens with kirara and sess... o0o0 and i wonder where jaken is.. gosh please update soon.. so many questions! laters!
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Reviewed By: K_J On: January 17, 2007 13:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! It took me a while to read it though, but i like long stories too. ; ) I saw some fan art that was suppose to go along with this fic and I started reading. I have to say this is very well done! I have never read a fanfic like this one before and thats what makes it even better. 10 out of 10! Your fic totally deserves it! I can't wait till the next chapter is up!So please update ASAP!!! also I wanted to ask if you would drop me a line when you update your fic again? It would be very much appreciated! born_to_live_91@hotmail.com Later, Kambri-Jade
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha_crazy_fan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 08:06 PST
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hey i am so glad you updated! anyway i am thinking that Houseki person is sorta like the living jewel or something tell me if i am wrong. well update ASAP... seeya!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 20:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! Most excellent...and was rather exciting as well. Kohaku is himself it seems now, and what a way to find out about the baby. But were they trying to create the living jewel on purpose? Am gonna have to go back and reread that one again. :P Again, great chap...Update when ya can... ;)
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:58 PST
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Oops - review got cut off - I meant wind tunnel, rather than wind scar...
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 18:57 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! I love the fifth soul that has to be balanced out - nice to see you work Shippo into the living jewel. It was great to see Sango's and Miroku's reactions to her pregnancy, but I do have one little nitpick - wouldn't Miroku sense the wind tunnel, rather than the . (Sorry, the story is so good that this bugged me a little...)
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