| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 17:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can't believe he did that. I'm very curious to see which one of them wins.. if there's going to be a winner, that is. Amazing chapter.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 16:41 PDT
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I'm really impressed that Inuyasha finally had the guts to tell Kikyou he loved Kagome. Now things get interesting.
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Reviewed By: einehexe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 16:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I decided to read it here, so I will continue reviewing now. This chapter is... so very overwhelming. And I wonder what'll happen with Kikyou. This is something I'm really looking forward to reading. I imagine you're going to leave it hanging for a while, inserting something about the Modern Era just to keep us waiting, aren't you? Anyway, amazingly intense chapter!
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Reviewed By: TriannaKumira [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This is such an awesome fanfic. The Kirara/Sesshomaru pairing was completely unthought-of until I started reading this. The science can sometimes get a little confusing, but you do a great job of making sure I can get the gist of it (which is more then I can say for my Honors Chem. teacher :( )But KOUGA? KOUGA?!?!? Why end such a wonderfully written and well-though-out chapter with KOUGA, of all things?!?!?! You had better come out with the next chapter soon, I wanna know what happens! Thanks for being an amazing writer, though. Does it make sense to say that? Ah, well, it makes sense in my mind. I'm going to post this before I begin to ramble, just keep up the good work!
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Title: Avid Reader
Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Thank you! FINALLY, Sessho and Kirara are together. I cannot tell you how glad I am that that hedge has finally been cleared. These past few chapters (the 'Get Thee Behind Me, Sesshomaru' mini series) are written very well (yes even for you). You ventured into their emotions and cleared up more than a few confusing issues for, well, me at least. But of COURSE, you have to end a perfect, five page lemon with Koga. Come on. Don't get me wrong. It's not that I hate him, but what the hell is he doing at the house interrupting Kirara and Sesshomaru? WTF?! Seventy-four chapters and it ends like this? T^T Why must you torment us so? *le sigh* Well, hopefully, we can see why Koga-kun is coming towards them and then get back to the issue(s) at hand: more specifically, Sessho's SOB mother and the rest of the group. Again, great chapter. I hope everything's good with you and uh... I think that's about it. *wavies* JA MATA~ ~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Mouse#9 On: August 09, 2009 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang! Oh please, please, please continue the story! When I first started reading this story I was hooked right away. lol can't wait till the new chapter is up!!!
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Title: W.O.W
Reviewed By: kittenprophetess(not signed in) On: May 04, 2009 23:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I want to say is 'Holy-Smokes Batman... I read an amazing fanfiction!!!' Okay, maybe more than that. I just found this about three days ago... and once I got to the last chapter and found that the story was not completed... I almost had an apoplexy! Please, continue on with this. It is truly a brilliant story and I love how you threw in an unconventional pairing with Sess/Kirara. I would have never have thought of that until you're story. Anyway, thanks for blessing the fanfiction world with your work. It is truly a piece of art. May Your Life Be Blessed, Kittenprophetess
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2009 19:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea!!! Is it just me or does EVERY (adult) in this story get laid??? lol. I've never read this before but now I must!!! so sad that I have finished the last chapter so far!!! and the holidays for me have just begun(and everybody else it seems is studying for exams poor things)!!!
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 06:28 PDT
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And there's revision #1.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2009 06:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshys is finally saying sorry to his father.. about time lol... but... I WANT TO TAKE KIRARA'S PLACE!!! NOT FAIR!!! T_T lol
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Title: A Perfect Mismatch
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 19:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this line: `I need a tree!' And Sessh's apology to his father was just perfect. Great job of keeping them dogs and cats, but still showing their common ground. Oh, and kudos for a surprisingly un-,'pun'-ishing title.
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 14:14 PDT
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One word: HOOOOTTTTT!!!!!!! LOL This is my favorite incarnation of Kirara ever! And I love the chapters between her and Sessy best. Is that bad? Lol Are they mates now? I really want her to have kittens of her own.... Or would they be pups...? Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 06, 2009 12:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As long as someone beats the shit out of him again I don't really mind Kouga coming back. I just find him to be exceeding annoying and even denser than Inu can be. On another note this was an AWESOME chapter!!!! I'm so happy Kirara and Sess finally hooked up. Keep up the good work I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: theknightcallsmyname [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2009 12:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Egads, I love this story. I think that was one of the hottest lemons I have read in a long time. Thanks for all the work you have put into this story! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Manda687 On: March 18, 2009 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted you to kno that I really have enjoyed ur creation so far. It is well thought out and I have to say that you make it make sense...if you kno what I mean. All the questions you ask urself while reading or watching Inuyasha are answered in you work and also an exciting new adventure goes with it. Really it is amazing and I just wanted you to kno that you should keep it up...it is my all time favorite Inuyasha fanfic by far, so please keep going, cuz I want to kno what happens next. Thank you for four nights of insomnia...i enjoyed every minute of it...lol ttyl Manda
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