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| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: ginger75125 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 05:51 PDT
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Wow! I love this fic!! I can't wait for another chapter!
| Reviewed By: Sannah [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 12:20 PDT
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Evil, Evil person!! Another cliffhanger. You had better make the next update quickly in return for visiting another evil cliffhanger onto your loyal readers. This was an awsome update though! well worth the wait. I hope that there is a happy ending though.
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo, damn but that was good! A whole lotta action goin on in this one. Definitely worth waiting for. Particularly like the interaction between Kirara and Sess, most interesting. And you are most welcome for IYFG and FA. A very excellent chapter, iPoe. Update when ya can! ;)
| Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 00:32 PDT
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This chapter was well worth the wait!! This is by far my absolute favorite story. Your writing style is smooth and everything just seems to flow naturally. I also love the titles in Latin...I have so much fun trying to figure out what they mean. I usually guess incorrectly, but is fun anyway. :)
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 21:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent as always. I hope we get a new chapter soon.
| Title: Ch. 65
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 18:51 PDT
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Wow! So much action and so much character development AT THE SAME TIME. It's going to be really interesting to see Sess and Kirara as part of the meld.
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 18:24 PDT
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It's always a good day when you post another chapter...and this was exciting. And made me want more....
| Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 23:01 PDT
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007art.html http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/aug2007.html And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open August 1, 2007 - August 15, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Winners will be notified by me after August 15th. ~ The Daimyo
| Title: What a ride!!!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 18:37 PDT
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OOOOIIIEEEAAAHHH!...cough, hack! Ah well, tried it, muffed it. Well hell, bouncy bouncy goes my stress level. The way you build up the tension and release it, only to do it all over again within a single paragraph (or 2) is frickin' awesome! You're killing me here. Ok... I'll bite, Inuyasha's human voice seems to have gone bye bye, and not just for the full moon luvin' on a tree trunk escapade. He's not getting phased out as Inu's demonic half becomes more pronounced, is he? Hope not. Balsamic moon eh? I hear that goes great on Belgian endive, o' scientific one. Um, I've never reviewed before, because I thought you quit writing this. My bad. I really like it. It's very entertaining.
| Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 13:25 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Waht an incredible story. I absolutely love it! I pray you are gonna finish it. It'l be such a crime if you dont. I see Kirara and Sesshomaru are getting closer...hmm.. i wonder.. how close will they become? ...maybe ..mates? or is that jus for Rin? Hmm.. who knows.. wait .. you do! lol Any who .... Hope u continue . =]
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 11:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd been holding off on commenting on this until I read it all the way through. Unfortunately, you have a the misfortunate of bad timing to revise chapters I had previously read, but no worries. Anyway, I like you approach to this, emphasiving the sci-fi elements of Inuyasha and since I'm a huge sucker for time traveling stories, all this talk of Time Lords and such nonsense makes me wonder when Tom Baker is going to show up and the good 'Doctor' will take over. ;p Very well written, lots of consideration made towards imagery and metaphor while keeping an eye toward action and science. My kind of story. Great work my friend. BTW, I would to second what SnowFall said, you're doing a bang up job. And I also think I can somewhat sympthize with you as a writer with a very technical background (engineer), I know it can get discouraging but hang in there. I need ya to finish this damn story.
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 18:05 PDT
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I've been re-reading and because I know that I didn't review as I should, here is an example of how great you are. In chapter six (?), when Kagome was lonely and crying, you described it so well that I cried too. Doesn't that make you a great author? Think about it. It is the goal of the writer to evoke emotions, influence opinions, etc. You are doing just that. Now, off with you. Go write with confidence, grasshoppah. ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 16:55 PDT
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You despaired of your writing ability? What hallucinogens was someone slipping into your tea! Geeze. If I knew who it was, I'd...well, I don't want any charges of terroristic threats leveled against me, so I'll just leave it up to your imagination. Onward and upward. Squeeeeee! Sesshoumaru and Kilala! And, ooooh, everyone was given a show! Yummy! Inuyasha's declaration was absolutely excellent. *sniffles* Can't wait for Sesshoumaru's answer! Good show woman! And I have to tell you that, by the context, I was able to understand the Japanese words. That is important to me as the tedium of reading the glossary and then attempting to place them at the point where they occurred in the story is too much trouble for this here lazy person. Souta showing up in Kohaku's body was totally awesome! I sure hope that he and Kanna can help. Wouldn't it be out of this world if he and Kanna were the ones to balance the whatever it is? I know it's not going to happen, but still...Where do you come up with this stuff? Your story is well written, original, sensual, action packed, full of suspense, contains mystery, surprises galore. Who wouldn't love it? The only thing that I'm left wanting is more! That's it. That's all. I would like more in each chapter, but authors must move at their own pace, go where the story and chapter leads them. I'm always disappointed when a chapter is over...because I am selfish and want more. It's the truth. sigh I guess I'm just stuck, gazing at the ground until another chapter arrives. No more despairing or your collective readers will just have to kick your talented ass. Now, back to work, woman! ^_^ Snow
| Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 14:31 PDT
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HOOORAY! You updated! I'm glad that people convinced you to continue. I have been checking back in on this story and eagerly awaiting more. Not too many authors have as well constructed a premise - and an interesting premise at that - with well composed writing to boot. I hope we will see more soon.
| Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 05:57 PDT
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Oh My freaking god!!!!!! Souta!! You're alive!!!!!!! Update soon!
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