| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This tale is spun with colorful strands of plot and imagination. So many things coming at you, that your head spins (in the good way). I find myself hanging on every word. I hope you will continue to dazzle us with your talent for original story telling. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 19:41 PDT
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oh shit.... stupid stupid Houseki!!!!!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 22:27 PDT
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Heh, I still like how you portray Houseki, even tho its a serious situation, how the character comes across is rather humorous, lol. Kirara's appearance in her humanoid form seemed to startle a few there, but I do love how you have her portrayed as well. But now Lord Sesshomaru arrives, and not in a very good mood, I take it. Wonder how Kirara will convince him... Great chapter. Update when ya can! :P
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Title: long time, no review (sorry)
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 21:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story just keeps getting better. It's incredible and the excitement keeps building the closer we get to the big climax. I love how the living jewel is finally starting to come together, only with a couple of additions no one could have planned. I can't wait to find out if Kirara and Inuyasha can talk some sense into Sesshoumaru before he goes nuts over the perceived challenge. Man, so much exciting stuff going on! You've done a wonderful job writing a story that's turning out to be truly epic.
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Title: sempai18
Reviewed By: localsamurai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shoot. Sess is going to be pissed. Poor pack.
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Reviewed By: SlightlyPsychoPrincess On: March 11, 2007 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Especially the latin titles, as i am currently taking Latin II. I have a question though, isn't salve a greeting similar to hello. I had thought to save was servo(i save) or servare( is saving) I could be wrong though. That aside, This is one of my favorite fanfic's to follow and i check every weekend for updates. I absolutely love your plot line and character development! Update soon!!
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Title: Ch. 62
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 17:39 PDT
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Kirara revealed and Sess as part of the jewel? I didn't see that coming. Really great job on Myoga too, especially the escape towards the end.
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Reviewed By: lsc33 On: March 05, 2007 04:16 PST
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Very good story. You have a few qurks, but otherwise very interesting I like the sci-fi parts. My husband is a big star-trek/star-wars fan I told him to read alittle. He started reading at one of the lemons..hehehe Now he thinks its all Harlequin. :P Anyways Update soon.
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Title: Chapter 62
Reviewed By: inuyoukaikiyo On: February 18, 2007 18:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..This fic is one of the best I have read in a VERY long time. I love the story line and plot, you are very creative and I appreciate it! I am a huge fan of doggieearlover and Fenik's stories, and yours is right up there with them! I can totally see why Kirara in this story is up for best characterization, she's awesome! I love how you write Inu and Kagome! The InuDemon and InuHuman idea is awesome. I am sadly restricted to the Anime on Adult Swim so I am usually lost in some stories, where they base it on the Manga. There isn't any stores that carry Manga around here. (damn) You explain it so I'm not lost, and still keep it within the story line. That's not easy to do. Sesshomaru is placed in the story nicely, and you don't make him seem like a heartless fool, or a 'I cry for help on the inside', as some authors do. (it's very irritating) And about Kagome...I love how you wrote her as well. She's very confident, and not a 'poor me' kind-of thing. Also the situation with Kikyou...that's where you got my thumps up. I HATE when people drag on the Kikyou thing. Uhhg...You made it short-sweet-and simple. Good Job! I am looking forward to the next update, I will follow this story like a religion. *giggle* This story is absolutly wonderful, and don't let anyone tell you different! If you quit this story, I will personally track you down, and make you finish it! *giggle* Okay, I'm rambling once again...I do that alot. Great Story, your a Great Author! Keep it up! ~Kiyo Fallen Wolf Angl@aol.com or InuYoukaiKiyo@aol.com
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 06:29 PST
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Houseiki or whatever is very irritating. Very. Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2007 06:29 PST
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Houseiki or whatever is very irritating. Very. Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 21:12 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe, I cracked up at the little Star Wars parody you wrote. This is a great story so far!!! ^_^ I love it!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 13:26 PST
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I'd forgotten the bit about Miroku reading Kagome's science books. The mention of quarks made me laugh. So, are you going to let us in on how Sango is different? Assuming this isn't a nod to Buffy the Hanyou Slayer. Thanks for the update.
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Reviewed By: Em On: February 09, 2007 04:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this story SO much! Can't wait to read more. A great spin on Inuyasha. Just love it!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2007 00:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that was most interesting, lol. Loved your characterization of the creature Kagome conjured up, lol. A little bit of everyone. Wonder now tho, how she gonna get them all back to normal. And whats Kanna up to now, which cant be anything good. Great chap iPoe. Update when ya can! ;)
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