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Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 30, 2006 09:45 PDT
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I think that I've managed to confuse myself completely in this chapter. I'll come back to the first section in a minute. Section two, with the Kai-wolves confused me only in that I can't for the life of me remember what "miroku's thing" is supposed to me. I have thought about it and thought about it. I have even considered re-reading the entire thing since they came into the picture, but I can't for the life of me think of what that smelly thing could be. Perhaps I missed something. How about a hint.... The third section, with Kirara, sess and company.....You didn't tell us what her initial plan was, so I can't really tell what has gone wrong in this. I think that in this chapter you allude to K being scent marked as if she mated. I REALLY didn't think that was the case. Is it just that K was around him so much that she smells of him? Both Rin and Sess himself say that he won't hurt Kirara, so I don't really think that he will let her drown, but that was a good cliffy. Kirara really didn't think that THIS is what would happen to her. I don't know if it was your intent, but it seems that you are implying that Sess is becoming "interested" in Kirara. If mating with a human is bad, how much worse is mating with a CAT! Back to the first section. You did a great job of not only explaining some of the basic tenets of miroku's religion, but you also did some great work in the conversation between him and Midoriko. The relationship between the four of them in the group is so dynamic and you do a great job of making it realistic. You aren't trite with it. Oh well. Regardless, I think this is a wonderful chapter and I look forward to reading the next one. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 13:54 PDT
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Eeeep! Evil, evil cliff hanger!!! You wouldn't. Right?
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: June 28, 2006 13:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! Sorry I didn't review the last chapter, anyway is Sess attracted to Kirara? That would be cool if they got together but isn't he in love with Rin? And why hasn't he realized that she and Yourei Taisei couldn't have mated because he already has a mate? And what was the whole point to this anyway, what was she trying to teach them? She was obviously wrong about Sess so what is it that she was wrong about when it came to Inu? *shrug* I'm confused. And I can understand why Miroku would need Inu's permission but not necessarily Sango's Inu could hurt him way worse than Sango could and under mate right Inu could kill him too. Anyway the next chapter sounds like it's going to be very interesting so update soon ok ja!!!
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Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 00:27 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I recently discovered your fic and I have to say that I just flew through it. It is absolutely engrossing. I just couldn't get enough. I love so many things that you've done. The whole time lord twist is unlike anything I've read before and I can't wait to see how the group fixes this "nexus" problem. And I must say that I LOVE what you've done with Kirara. I'm a cat person and it totally cracks me up how regal and defiant your Kirara is and how similar my own cats can act sometimes. I hope Sess won't leave her in that water too long. I like where their feisty relationship is going. Please keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon.
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: June 27, 2006 22:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. Excellent as always. I absolutely love the depth of character you have given Kirara. I am also thoroughly enjoying the dynamic between she and Sesshoumaru - Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Twinkle On: June 27, 2006 22:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. Excellent as always. I absolutely love the depth of character you have given Kirara. I am also thoroughly enjoying the dynamic between she and Sesshoumaru - Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 21:09 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OH OH OH PLEASE DON'T TAKE TOO LONG UPDATING!!! I am so inlove with this story! I want to know what Sess will do! Poor Mir I probably feel the worst for him right now! What is that about the wild dogs? Are they paring themselves off as "belonging" to certian "humans"? I was a little confused about that. I really love this story and have been following it for awhile. Please don't let me hang for too long!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: June 27, 2006 20:04 PDT
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He most likely is acting like that becuase he is attracted to her. I do not understand why she does not let anyone see her humanoid form. Sessy/Fluffy better save her!!! Update soon!! ^_^
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Title: soon
Reviewed By: sempai19 On: June 27, 2006 19:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh!!!! I hate and absolutely loathe cliffy's. Please update soon and save me from my imaginative mind.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: June 27, 2006 18:18 PDT
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sesshy, sesshy, sesshy...that is the most stubborn dog i have ever met. he claims that no harm will come to the neko because she's part of the joint pack with inuyahsa, but he's willing to let kirara. whom he knows will not back down, drown to prove what point. that he is an ass? kirara won't need a point she'll be dead and inuyasha will be trying to kill him. can't he see any of the unwavering faith that little rin has in him and see it's a strength to join together and a weakness to be alone. much as he'd like to think it, he's not all powerful. brillant chapter, you really have a way with words. until next time (please don't drown the kitty...)
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 13:05 PDT
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The latest chapters continue to be great. Kirara has a cunning plan? The Inus are doomed.
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Reviewed By: SusyLynn On: June 22, 2006 17:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderfully entertaining story!! You are an excellent author. I've just spent two days reading all these chapters. The way you write I can imagine everything so clearly. Thank you for writing this masterpiece!
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Title: Chapter 53
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 18, 2006 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe that the damn bird actually dropped the kids. What is he thinking!?!? yeah, yeah, I know that he has had some agenda for everything that he has done, but poor Rin must have just messed her kimono. I know he didn't really splat them, but come on! Kirara is turning into a more and more interesting character. I am glad that you have taken the time to flesh her out more. Most of the time in the manga and anime she is merely a cute kitty or a supernatural beast of burden. I wonder what you would do with AhUn? The battle between Sess and Inu must have been a thing of beauty. I actually read it twice through before I started typing again so I could get a good mental picture. The reasoning behind it was even better. In another fanfiction that I really like (hello again by delkaiden) the author has Sess talking to a once again emprisoned Inu. He comments that he had resented Inuyasha because those around him followed him out of respect, not fear. He says that Inuyasha was born with that spark that it took Sess centuries to understand and longer to gain. You have aluded to the same thing in this story but worded it differently and in such a way that it almost leaves the reader to realize what Sess is missing without stating it specifically. Inu-papa knew it and tried to tell Sess the night he died protecting Izayoi. Fabulous, fabulous chapter! And then Kirara starts up her plan with a cat bath. I am glad I didn't have anything to drink when I read this last section. Sesshoumaru getting a catbath from a cat with a 4-inch-wide, 40-grit-industrial-sandpaper tongue just cracks me up entirely. It also gives a whole new meaning to the tern dermabrasion! I can't wait to see how this goes! Thanks for writing for us. Caitriona
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Title: Chapter 52
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: June 18, 2006 18:44 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that the pups were finally born. When you first mentioned them at the beginning of the chapter (mucus etc) I was concerned that one of them wouldn't make it at all. Go Kagome! I see the white runt becoming her favorite in spite of runts and albinos being the ultimate Omegas of most packs. Yourei Taisei's tactics have been interesting throughout this entire story. I look forward to his sections. While he irritates some deep antiestablishmentarian part of my soul, I would love to just pick his brain. Lots of deep stuff that sometimes takes a long time to get out, but when it does.....damn...really deep. There is another chapter to read now, so while I may have other things I would normally write about that other chapter is calling to me and making the thoughts blank out. Thanks for writing! Caitriona
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Title: Great Chapter!!!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 22:48 PDT
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I just LOVE this story! I love the way you do the neko! I can't wait for your update!!
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