| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 18:40 PST
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yeah, a week, cuz of school. Well, anyways, good chappie, update again soon please. ^-^
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Title: Chp 44
Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: February 09, 2006 18:27 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! And yes, the whole deal with Kagome makes alot more sense now, thank you. Kanna is evil, and the Kai-wolves are right not to trust her, but hey what can you do.
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: February 09, 2006 17:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol there does that make you happy? I liked the last chapter but I admit not quite as much as a good Kouga bashing. I liked this chapter too cuz Inu got to be all authorative and there's just something really sexy about him being that way. Anyway I have an idea, what if Inu and Sess attacked the vortex together? The Tenseiga can counteract the death energy within the rip and the Tetsusaiga can draw out the youki that keeps it open. Well anyway it was just an idea. Anyway it was a good chapter and yes more Kouga bashing would be appreciated. ^.^ Update again soon ok ja!!!
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Title: AAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: February 09, 2006 14:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God i love your story. i wish you could post like 4 chapters at one time but i wouldnt want you to kill your self just to do it:-) anyway i cant wait for your next chapter.
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Title: Very good!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 10:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good!! I can't wait for more!!
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Title: KEEP GOING!!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2006 10:15 PST
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WOW WOW WOW!!! I am so happy that you did another chapter!! Please don't take to long doing more!! the suspence is KILLING ME!!!!! congrats on the nomonation!
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 21:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok good...keep it up...and yes you should remember me look at your past reviews...keep it coming or i will sic my teething 8 month old on you...evil grin...:P
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Title: Very nice!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 19:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was, once again, a very nicely written chapter!! I can't wait for the next one!! And I'm so glad that you might be doing a Sess/Rin story someday! Hopefully someday soon!!
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 17:10 PST
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I really like your fic...even if it did take me a week to read it. ^-~ update again soon please. ~~Kuramas gurl
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Reviewed By: TheFabledCat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 04:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't even finished reading all of the chapters you have posted and I just had to review. This story is wonderful, I love it! So many twists and new things that I have hardly ever seen in any other fan fics. The lemons are tastefully done, and I really liked that. Most of the time they are a little too smutty and it makes me not want to continue on with the story. The characters are not that OOC and I like the fact that you tried to keep them as close to their original selves as possible. I have to thank you for the guides at the bottom of each chapter (I'm slow :P) I kudos to you on your writing. I can almost see everything playing in my head as a movie as I read it! (I'm a dork, I know.) ~TFC
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Reviewed By: phoenixburns [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 16:36 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you incorporated Kagome's missing father and explain Kagome's mother's strange willingness to let her daughter chase after monsters. The story is beautifully written with a clean flowing plot. Timelines and events fall into place without leaving the reader lost and confused. I love how orginal this take is or at least it is to me. I wait anxiously to read what new plot twist and turns you have in store.
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Reviewed By: gypsymuse [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 12:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm at a loss for superlatives with which to describe this delightfully original fic. (I had to come over here to keep up with it, so as not to miss out on the luscious citrus that FF.net will not allow.) I'm quite interested now to see what transformations Sango and Miroku will undergo (er, not that I'm biased toward that particular pairing or anything, no, not me). In character, deftly plotted, a genuinely unique premise, and perhaps my favourite Sango and Miroku lemon ever...I think you could say I'm hooked. :)
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant(nsi) On: February 02, 2006 07:41 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bravo damn i love your story, u got some real talent. dont keep me in suspence for to long k, update soon. arigato
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 22:16 PST
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Short, good, but short. Thats about all I can say for it right now. I'm a little confused, but I'll wait for the next chapter. I love this fic and look forward to every new chapter, load the next soon, and Keep writing. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: February 01, 2006 17:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not afraid of having children I just don't like them. I don't know why, I just never really have so I don't want any till I'm at least 28. My mom says she was the same way when she was my age so I know my opinion is going to change just not in the near future. Anyway good chapter I figured that she put the barrier up because the first thing she remembered when coming to would be Kouga. And good Inu's mark is balanced that means that he should be ok right? I really like the way Inu is turning out he's getting alot cooler with all this control and harnessed and recognized power. ^.^ Well update soon ok and congrats on the nominations!!!!!!
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