| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 14:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. I was up all night reading it. You have truly found a unique plot.
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive been lacking in my reviews as of late, for this, I apologize. Oh hell, I suck at reviewing...I read, but am not always able to review. Especially when the spam-thingy dont wanna work for me...grrr....When ya try 5-6 times ya just give up. But this was good. Ole Fluffy gettin a bath, then turnin the tables back. I so love Kirara's human form, even tho she doesn't. Made Sesshomaru feel things he didnt wanna. GO KIRARA! Lol...Love how she calls em all her kittens too. But why couldn't InuYasha sense her when his brother approached with her under his MokoMoko-sama. I could under not scenting her so much BECAUSE of where she was at, but to not sense her youki? Hm...Anyways....great chapter. Update when ya can ... :P
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Reviewed By: HMPrune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 10:47 PDT
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Sorry I haven't reviewed before... This is a wonderful, rich and excellently written story. I love how you have given life to the characters (I have never seen Kiara written this way before!) Many kudos for the wonderful job you have done with Miroku - I love his character and the way you have written about him with Sango. I am still awaiting a resolution for the widening Kazaaza - hope it ocmes soon!
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Reviewed By: Pete8477 On: July 24, 2006 13:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story keep it up. Are you going to pair sesshomaru and kira together?
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 03:29 PDT
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I checked my email notifications several times a day waiting for this, you cruel, cruel woman. It was worth the wait. I agree with the other reviewer, far more fluff than I thought we'd get. Yay! The ending bit was great but I think my favorite moment was when she caught him checking out her boobs. Hee!
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Title: chapter 55
Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 23:48 PDT
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If I haven't said it before I'd like to say it now: I love your Latin chapter titles. I thought this one was particularly appropriate. Thank you for the update! I know you wouldn't let anything too bad happen to our favorite neko but I was still dying to know how it would all turn out. And I'm pleased to see it turned out wonderfully. Thanks also for the scientific explanation on cat purring. I've been a cat lover all my life and I never knew that. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Full Moon time!! I'm excited to see how everyone deals with fulldemonInuYasha. And I am still just tickled pink at how the whole Sess/Kirara interactions are going. They way he saved her by utilizing Kagome's "powers" was really neat. They're so feisty together, which is not an adjective you'd normally associate with Sesshomaru, but which kinda fits when he's going toe to toe with Kirara. And he likes it when she purrs. So cute! Those Inu brothers and their hell cats... Great chapter. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 23, 2006 23:45 PDT
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Well I'd say thats more Sesshomaru and Kirara fluff I'd think I was going to get.... I hope there is going to be more. I love the story and I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: SusyLynn On: July 23, 2006 20:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter! I just love what you have done with Kirara's and Sesshomaru's personalities. I never can tell where this story is gonna go. It's so entertaining! Please update soon; I'll be waiting!! :) :)
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 09:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loves loves LOVES the fanfic...especially Kiara, i no i didnt spell that right buy u get my meaning...U BETTER NOT KILL HER...oh!!!...and i also loves the alternate story, isnt Yoda just amazing???...anyways like i said before i love it and u HAVE to update soon...Cheers
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 10:43 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yea i forgot....I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOO- *take a breather bubbles* -OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THAT CHAPTER SO VERY WERY MUCHY!!!! *toothy grins* lol, I kno I'm crazy, no need to inform me.lol they Ja ne!! ^_^!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 10:40 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!! !!! *pouts* That word...*growls* CLIFFY Are you sure you dont make them n it's only intereting endings?! KAMI!! I fell out of my chair and my butt is hurting *rubs butt while glaring at the computer* I HATE CLIFFIES. GRRRRRRRRRR!!!! Atleast my i wuz right with my hunches about sesshy having a thing for kirara. That scene with them wuz bootiful. OMFG!!!! Inuyasha and Sango both having sexual feelings towards each other and the same goes for Miroku n Kagome.I really love the way kirar tlks..'naughty kitten' tsk tsk tsk...she really does put a good name to us females;in my book. Even tho you said your not giving me any hints ( which i think is jus rude.*pouts*lol) I did find some in chapters, but i'm not gonna rat, i'm grateful for your writing style. I really am an inquisitive girl, mostly in the good way, but i tend to get a lil out of hand. I feel like I'm in heaven, you're blessing me with these wonderful chapters. *wipes imaginary tears from eyes*lol oh n in the chapter bfore this, i thought that inuyasha speaking in thirds wuz sexy. *whispers* ::dont tell sesshomaru:: lol. GREAT JOB!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 08:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well well well, first of all, i would like to apologize for not reviewing, or reading chapter 53 earlier. So, Gomen!! Now for my review. What can I say? I fucking love this fic!!!!. I really enjoy kirara's attitude. "Put me down, you overgrown chicken!" LOL, that wuz funny, and when she called him a fat chicken!lmao, kirara is so arragont and stubborn. Dam! And the way when she told the sensai, "listen well my pupil".lol. I'm gonna kill myself with laughter. She's so awesome!!! When she wuz in her human form n wuz shuddering cuz she had to touch the sensai wuz right out histecrical! I kno cats hate bath, n she's willing to take one cuz she had to touch him.lol. Oh, n dont forget the fight between those sexy inu. *drools* The image of them fighting is so fucking hawt! They are very wery bad Inu or should i say 'kittens?' lol. Bad bad inu's!! very sexy, but bad still!!!lol. I'm drooling over them too much,ne?lol really dont care.oh, that last part had me laughing when she wuz chastising sesshy about cleanliness.lmao! Funny, JUST FUNNY!! And for once, I'm gonna TRY not to beg for hints, since you clearing dont wanna give any *pouts* how cruel can you wonderful writings be? It's bad enough that you all know the meaning of cliffies!!! I've finally lost it. Your lucking your a wonderful writing. That word wonderful is an understatement for you ya kno? *sigh* enyway, i'm thankful that I tryna tolarate your dreadful cliffies. I LOVE THIS FIC, CHAPTER N YOU!!!! Thanx for making my day with this chapter. Arigato!!! Pwease hurry n update. No wait, I'll say that AFTER i read the next chapter. hehe...so, I'm off to read your last updations. I, ofcourse love this. Ja ne!!! ^.^!
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Reviewed By: Reignashii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 01:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a cool story ^-^ hehehe i couldnt stop reading till i finished >-< im looking forward to the next chapter!
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Title: Oh goodness!
Reviewed By: monkeymary89 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 15:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! I have to say I've searched for a really good Inuyasha fanfic for a while. This is it. You have really returned to me my faith in fanfiction. You are obviously very intelligent. (Biologist? Oh my goodness! Science was never my strongpoint ^_^;;) Don't ever doubt your writing skills! You have style that I haven't seen in a loooong time. I absolutely LOVE this story, and can't wait for an update. By the way, what an evil cliffy you wrote! For shame! *grins* Still, you've given this girl quite a few laughs, and I want to thank you for that. This story ROCKS!
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Reviewed By: Jerri On: June 30, 2006 13:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm actually enjoying this story alot. It's different enough to not lull me to sleep and it's fun. Although I'm sitting here waiting for Dr. Who to show up somewhere...One of those things that cause me to be torn a "that would be cool"..."but I don't know if it would help the story"... A Dr. Who / InuYasha crossover...Hmmm....
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