| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: September 25, 2006 17:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! you had me wait over a month for this and you cut it off there??!!! There better be a lemon in the next chapter, this is just too promising to not have one. anyway I can understand your lack of free time, I just started working at a vet hospital and I have very few days where I'm not working...it kinda sucks. Anyway the story is getting very good and I can understand Kagome's reaction to Inu's change, he sounds absolutely delicious. ^.^ I gave you an 8 on the spelling and grammar cuz you had a few words strung together into some nonexistant words. Other than that and not putting the lemon in this chapter it was very good update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 15:34 PDT
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loves the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 14:52 PDT
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I'm hoping for triple lemons next chapter but knowing you evil authors it'll probably be all Sangsty and stuff.
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Reviewed By: Luna18 On: September 25, 2006 13:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh, Kagome's soo lucky..she has one hell of a sexy Inu-Hanyou at her side that never fails to surpise us! I can't wait to see what will happen now..a sane full Inu Demon? May the sparks fly! Oh, and is somthing going on between Kirara and Sesshy by any chance? That would be original if you ask me, but if you ask me again, I'd honestly see that tiny fact a litte..strange. That pairing sounds even more werider than the usual Sess/Kag pairings (Both Kags:Kagome belongs to Inuyasha only and Kagura..well..I don't like seeing her with Sess for some reason, he deserves much better^x^) It's your story, it's up to you to decide! Thank you for being such a good author!!XD
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Reviewed By: Namine On: September 25, 2006 13:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleese..pleese..PLEESE tell me that my brain is funtioning wrong..pleese tell me that you didn't just hint a possible Sess/Kirara pairing near the end of this chapter.. .. .. eek, sounds far more worse than the Sess/Kago pairings..*shiver* Mabye it's just me. No. HOPEFULLY...*gulp*
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Title: sempai18
Reviewed By: localsamurai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah another chappie. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 not signed in On: September 25, 2006 11:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chappie...hope to see the next one soon, keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: September 25, 2006 09:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK! Nooooooo! Why'd you stop there?! I really have fallen in love with this story. I like how full demon Inu is coming out more and more. Your writing style is amazing to. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 25, 2006 09:09 PDT
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ohhh the ears! demon inu just couldn't let him keep the ears. and sango...she and miroku are going to be in a boatload of trouble once the cause of her mood swings comes to light. and imagine, miroku jealous of inuyasha! and did sesshomaru walk off with kirara under his fluff? won't they notice she's missing? looking forward to next time. i love it when inuyasha exudes masculinity.
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 06:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter!! So worth the long wait for when you update!! Yet, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 05:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was most interesting between Sango and InuYasha. And Sango and the rest have no idea whats goin on with her, but maybe InuYasha does. When he does figure it out, heh that should be fun, lol. I like what you've done in creating Demon InuYasha. Also like how not only how Kagome responded to him but Sango as well. Wonder why, in a way, they dont do that with Sesshomaru. Hnn...Anyways, great chapter. Am so glad you were able to update. Next one sounds like it should be fun, lol...A very intimidating, very male InuYasha...w00t! Update when you can. :D
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 05:44 PDT
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Yeah he's demon!! Woohoo. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love the story. Update soon!
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Title: Up to Chapter 55
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 11:27 PDT
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Wanted to let you know that I still follow your story and enjoy reading it! I didn't know where I left off last time so I decided to read it from the beginning all over again. ^^ I was recaptured by the effective methods you utilize to weave a story and make it into a masterpiece. The fresh insights and positions you take on the characters make the story interesting and fun to read. I giggled so many times at the antics at some parts of the story while the romance in others was written so wonderfully that I could feel the emotion as I read it. To me it seems that there's plenty more to tell in this tapestry you've weaved so far and I await the next chapter eagerly! ^^ Keep up the great work and I'm excited to see what happens when Inuyasha's demon side gets control for the first time! *squeals* Look out Kagome!!! *giggles* P.S. Your beta does a wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 06:39 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It is simply wonderful and keeps me going with what is going to happen next. I cannot wait for the next update, and I love how you have Kirara in the story. I love the cat superiority that she shows. It reminds me of a saying that I have to tell you. A dog looks at his master and thinks, this person feeds me, gives me shelter, and takes care of me . . . they must be gods! A cat looks to his master and thinks, this person feed me, gives me shelter, and takes care of me . . . I must be a god! Heh, heh . . . Can't wait for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: fjfksig On: August 22, 2006 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost think something is going on between 'Bad Dog' and kirara.
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