| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a strange turn of event... well, interesting to say the least, lol. Love Kiraras' character in this. Ive seen her displayed in human form some before, but none of them ever seemed to work:this definitely does. Her character is purrfect and very believable. And love how she can placate the 'Big Dog' like that. Awesome! The thing with Kohaku was interesting as well, especially with him trying to talk to Kaede, lol. Now what will InuYasha do? Should be interesting to say the least. Great chap... update when ya can! ;)
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Title: Another Home RunFJ
Reviewed By: Murasaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 22:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you get Kirara to translate "Most Mighty Little Two Tail who Whips Big Pfffft Into Line" into Neko? Because she certainly deserves the title! As always, it was well-written, with great characters, action, and dialogue, and just plain tons o'fun! As always, I'm waiting to see how Kirara will manage to teach the Inu yet another lesson in how to run a Pride. So glad you've kept at it!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 20:29 PDT
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A most awesome chapter!! I am absolutely in love with this story. Even though I am waiting for the end to see how everything works out, I will be sorry that the ride is over. You are doing an awesome job and I hope that you are able to see it all the way through! Until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 19:46 PDT
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Great chapter! Please, please don't give up writing. There were so many good things that I could probably max out the comment box without covering them all. You KNOW I loved the Sess/Kirara stuff. Also totally love that Miroku got to show his stuff this time and the continued excellent use of the real mythology that RT pulls from. The Souta as Kohaku was totally unexpected and a fabulous plot twist. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: AHAYNES On: May 28, 2007 11:58 PDT
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This is soooo good! I hope you update soon! I'll be checking back regularly for updates (=
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 11:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHMYGOD!!!! This is so well written and i absolutely love it!!!!! Please get the next chapter up as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:52 PDT
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I have just discovered your story. I absolutely adore it!! It is exceptionally well written...and I LOVE the Star Wars tie ins! I cannot wait to finish reading this one!
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Reviewed By: shalinilahiri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 07:01 PDT
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Nice chapter! Sorry, for reviewing it so late! I'm really worried about Souta now. Have I ever mentioned that I simply adore the way you depict Kensei and Innin's relationship? And also, Mouryomaru making his grand entry!
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Title: Salve me
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:43 PDT
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I was right about Kirara...but I didn't think about Sesshoumaru. Another twist in this wonderful story. I can't imagine where this is going. I don't often do this, but please update soon. Thanks for writing for us though. I know you say you want to leave us a good story, but you have given us a great one so far!
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Title: Non compos mentis
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:28 PDT
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I am completely in love with Houseki! I just want to hug her/him/it/them. I don't know why I find the creature so appealing, but I do. The section where they were discussing DNA and quarks and the like completely cracked me up. Great job. I hope that everyone gets balanced soon though, the strain seems to be too much for Kagome to handle. Is that why the crap is happening in the future? Anyway. They aren't balanced because they need more supernatural, right? Why not add Kirara? (or perhaps I got confused in the Houseki speak.) The situation with Kohaku, Kanna, and the Falcon is decidely odd. I never know from one minute to the next who Kanna is really playing for. Perhaps she is just playing against Naraku and for nobody. Sounds about right. There is another chapter calling my name. Thanks for writing!
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Title: e pluribus Unum
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 19:02 PDT
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I bet merging with a baby wasn't one of the threads that kagome saw when she was first in the nexus! Adding the babe and Shippou into the mix is definately a twist that I didn't expect in any way. I like that about your writing. You bring something in from left field - wham! Great chapter BTW. Thanks for sharing your story with us! Caitriona
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 18:38 PDT
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You may not get tired of reading this, but good chapter again. Your Miroku is a letch, but only towards his Sango and I like that. This chapter showed a lot of their relationship, both in and out of the sack. Playful, loving, and caring all wrapped up in a wise houshi wrapper. He tries so hard to understand and interact with youkai!Inuyasha. And it is so human to smile to try to comfort someone....poor Miroku. You have added an interesting twist with placing all four of them in the nexus. I wonder where that is going. Need to read the next chapter, huh? Thanks for sharing your writing with us.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:41 PDT
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I just realized that it has been months since I have read this story, and I don't know why. Extra bad Caitriona. Concerning Canis Mala: WTF! What is going on with the shards? Are the ones that Naraku controls burning as badly as the ones that Kohaku and Midoriko possess are? On a humorous side note, when Kagome goes into her trance and Inu sends the dogs to get the other members of the party, I can just imagine the conversation when they get there. Miroku runs up to see K&I still joined at the hips and K staring into space. "Inuyasha, I know you said you were going to f**k her stupid, but this is going just a little to far!" Sorry. Had to go there for a minute. Anyway - Great chapter as usual. I love the bits with Kirara and Sess. That she calls him bad dog most of the time just makes me smile everytime I read it. Thanks for sharing your writing with us! Onto the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 05:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story and it is difficult for me to review because the story has so many small nuances and there are so many things happening at once. Please forgive me for not regularly reviewing.....The creation of Houseki threw me for a loop. All I can do is wonder what it's purpose is. It is quite funny. Oh my, I wonder how Sesshoumaru will respond. Perhaps Kilala will be of some assistance and perhaps remind him of his responsibilities to the pack in general......I must tell you that you are an excellent writer and produce quality work. I won't be able to review all aspects of a chapter, but know that I do appreciate all of the time and effort that you put into it. It is obvious that you spend a lot of time on your chapters. Your story is one of those that no one ever forgets. I will tell you what has me very excited at the moment. It is the developing relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kilala. That is only because I am a Sesshoumaru fangirl. However, everything that you have done with Kagome and Inuyasha has been absolutely wonderful. I love it. I do have a difficult time with all of the Japanese terminology, but in the grand scheme of things, it is unimportant. I will be re-reading and then I will do more commenting. ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie On: March 20, 2007 18:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed this story sooooo much. I can't wait until the next chapter! I love that Kirara has a big part in this story. She is left out so often and I love the interaction with her and Baka no Tashio! lol! I love this story.
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