| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2009 00:48 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! NO KIRARA!!!! ANYONW BUT KIRARA!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 09:00 PST
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Glad to be of service. This is a really excellent chapter. You are doing so much more with the idea than I ever expected.
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 02, 2009 07:02 PST
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Hello!!!! Its been a while huh? I meant 2 review the last chapter but I forgot, I'm sorry. Anyway I honestly had given this story up for a while; but u kept popping up with updates so I finally decided 2 start reading it again. You are doing an amazing job at making this story wonderful yet so fucking confusing. I'm really glad that I'm not 10 IQ points dumber or I'd be completely lost. Anyway, I have to say that I really enjoy Sess and Kirara as a couple and I am completely rooting for them 2 hook up. I am also really hoping that Kag and Inu get to finish the fun that you so rudely deprived them of. Well update again soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2009 08:32 PST
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are you going to continue the fic....please dont wait a year to update great fic
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Reviewed By: IYFG On: January 18, 2009 07:22 PST
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Congratulations Licentia poetica-your story 'Facets of the Living Jewel" has been nominated for "Best Alternate Reality/Universe at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2009 00:26 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo wow i finally read all the chapters :D though i coudlnt read the last 2 parts, coz of the spiders... (seriously creeped out by spiders..) but im really interested in your story :D cant wait for the next chapter :P
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 09:14 PST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2008 14:32 PST
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I have been re-reading again. My memory has been screwed over for awhile, so, I don't know if I noticed this before or not. Sesshoumaru violated Kirara's trust. That bit of information and the consequences were so sad. I'm left wondering if Sesshoumaru is an idiot. True, his plan worked and it was a good one. However, it cost him a lot, and he doesn't even understand what had happened. I love the way you have portrayed Sesshoumaru and the circumstances you have put him in. Also, your characterization of Kirara is wonderful! It really makes for sparks. They are at complete opposites. I think it is your characterizations that have made them my favorite couple in this fic. It is new and interesting----- Oh! Kagome's dad DID put three years behind his punch! So, this problem with the time traveling is partially his fault? Just great. I don't understand quite a bit of the last two chapters. It's not you're fault. I haven't been well. Ooooh, Kanna! I wonder what she is up to. That portion was so exciting! She kicked Saimyosho ass! Go, Kanna! Can't wait to see what happens next. She's flickering between, er, positive and negative, matter and anti-matter? ((Oh, someone on my journal left a link about Einstein's theory of relativity having been corroborated. It was very interesting. Think about it. The possibilities are endless.)) Geh, Naraku is gross. My skin crawled when you described him. I feel so bad for Kagome. She's having such a hard time. And...where is Souta? There is so much happening that I can't comment on it all, especially the stuff that I don't yet comprehend. I'll get it eventually. You've led me to do a lot of research that have actually proven my view of 'life, the universe, and everything'. ^_^ Thanks! I look forward to the next chapter and may actually have another review before then. My brain works in spurts. ^_^ ---- Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 00:41 PST
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Oh please, indulge in too much Christmas chocolate this year! I loved the Star Wars skit. *snicker* More! Can you tell I've been re-reading? ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: November 29, 2008 23:19 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL LOL LOL!!! Oo im on chapter 12, and i just had to say, when they learnt about how Kagome's father can hear things near the well, cracked me up XD more like I'm never gonna sit near that damn thing again!' that made me burst into laughter XD anyways im heading back reading :P
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2008 22:05 PST
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Brane, brane,go away...LOL. You know I love how you blend in string theory to all of this....creepycrawly! And most excellent. And as usual, MM never sends me notices of when you update, don't ask me why....
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 22:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!"The monk belongs to me too."
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 22:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!"The monk belongs to me too."
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 22:55 PST
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As always your chapters are well worth the wait! This one was intense and has left me hoping for Kagome's rescue before she is violated in any way. I do not like spiders and now have any even more healthy fear of them! Can Kagome see Aiko? Will the baby be able to help at all. She seems to have a level of intelligence that would suggest that she will play a vital role in all of this. I shall eagerly await the next thrilling chapter of your most wonderful (and my personal favorite) story!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 03:38 PST
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I'm sorry to hear you've been sick. This chapter was amazing. Really great dialog, really gross Naraku, more arcane science, and really great descriptive passages.
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