| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 05:14 PDT
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Loved it! I can't get over how wonderful a write you are... Can't wait fr the next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: October 26, 2006 03:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh!!!! you suck!!! I was waiting for what happens between Kag and Inu and then I see have a lovely new chapter up but it's all Sango and Miroku!!! Don't get me wrong I like the pairing and they should be together for forever but I was really looking forward to the inu and Kag stuff. Inuyasha sounded down right delicious and you are making me wait even longer. *growl* you better update soon. Anyway it was a good chapter but I only gave it a six on the enjoyment factor because it was a big let down that Kag and Inu were nowhere in here.
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Title: Ch. 57
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 03:14 PDT
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Wonderful! I'm loving the possession jokes. I can't wait to see their reaction when they find out just what is possessing her. But will the baby be affected by the Living Jewel
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:58 PDT
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So. A part of the being that was formerly the 'great priestess' Midoriko has succumbed to the hatred within the body of Kikyou. And Kikyou has allowed Midoriko to control her body... but only to kill Inuyasha and the Shikon no Tama. I don't think Midoriko has as much control as she thinks.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:27 PDT
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If it took power for her to go back to Inuyasha after he pushed her in, how did she get through when he pushed her in? Was she using her energy, or was she simply not aware of her energy being used. Also, if Naraku were to erase time itself, would the Time Lord die? Because, if he is essence of time, and time is dead, than... he must also be dead. Another question, and I know I'm taking this really far: If the time rip, so to speak, was cause by Naraku and because he obtained the jewel, was it also perhaps caused by Kikyou's betrayal and the corruption of Midoriko. One last thing: Is Midoriko on equal status with the Time Lord, or is she greater? Or is he? Because Kagome, being the Time Lord's child and the daughter of Innini, whatever she is, could very well be as strong as - or stronger than - Midoriko, depending on their individual levels of power.
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:20 PDT
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So... double meanings...?
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:14 PDT
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Wait one minute... Kagome's mother is some kind of demi-goddess who had Kagome - and maybe Souta - with some sort of God? Is the Time Lord a god, or is it just some really powerful being that is a title passed down through generations or something. I don't understand! *waiL*
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 08:51 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^__^GOMEN!!!!! GOMEN GOMEN GOMEN. REALLY. I didnt get a chance to read n review cuz of school n all, but I jus wanted to thank you for updating; n why'd you take so long!^__^ Jus joking, i took long to read too. Enyway, I do luv this fic lots, n i've been real bored, cuz it's only homeworks i've been doing n having to study for all these tests the teachers are giving us. I swear that they hate us all! *sigh* It's so stressful, really! I sometimes end up sleeping in class then having to get the nots from my friends.lol So i'm here, n i'll try review more, k?^__^ Oh yea, i started my first fic, only 3 chappies tho. Pwease read it n tell me how you like it, n if you enjoy it. Go easy on my now, my first fic^.^ ~ I'm so sleepy!!! n school's 2morrow. *sobs* lol, Happy writing. =D
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: melf On: September 28, 2006 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!! what the hell are you tryen to do to me? what a cliffy! you so better upadte again soon!!! and what was that shit with sango and inu? i'm not to happy about that little part. anyway overall it was good.
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 23:13 PDT
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Congrats on all the awards! And thank you for the update. What a chapter! Poor Miroku and Sango. Hope they work everything out soon. Miroku should really listen to his Sensei's advice; it'd do them both good. And I love the way you do fulldemonInuYasha. Can't wait to see where he takes Kagome. And was Kirara going home with Sess? Heh, that's so cute. I hope you can continue to find time in your real life to keep on amazing all your zealous fans with more of your story.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 16:55 PDT
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RWAR!! Omg, this is SUCH an awesome fic!!! I just read 56 chappies in about 5 hoursssss soooo good!!!! I love this, and I love what you've done with Inuyasha, you deserved all those prizes and awards!! I can't wait until you update this amazing fic!
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Reviewed By: SusyLynn On: September 27, 2006 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh....such a satisfying read. Another original, exceptionally well written chapter! I just have to know where Inu is about to take Kagome. Don't make me wait to long! wooh hoo!! :D
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Reviewed By: katie... On: September 26, 2006 18:58 PDT
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i love you. update soon please? i would like, dance with joy(??? .. yes, i would.. in my own special way..uh. yea, anyways) if you were to update this before a month passes ...so dont procrastinate. i hate waiting. i had to wait for like... almost two months (kinda)for one chapter. but this is an amazing story, i will wait forever... or like until you havent logged on for like a year. i might give up after then. love you!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 04:37 PDT
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With so much set up and so little pay off this time next chapter promises to be GOOD! I loved Miroku checking to see if Sango was possessed. Heh. I'm sure many fathers to be before him have wondered the same thing even when they knew the cause.
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 19:03 PDT
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ohh, lovely chapter. Demon Inuyasha is so very hot. Sango getting aroused was a little strange though. I wasn't sure where that was coming from. Please update soon with more Demon Inuyasha.
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