| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: great update!
Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 05:23 PST
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Thanx for the update. I REALLY like this story! I love how you have put so much thought into the story. Keep the new chaps comming!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 03:11 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was awesome, but i miss inuyasha n kagome n this chapter. Are you gonna make kag preggo during all the tough time their in now? what about sango?...i'm itching to find out what that other soul is..all tho i might have a hunch who it could b. Anyway..like i always say...UPDATE!!! oh yea...n i LOVE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Mace On: March 12, 2006 21:30 PST
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Wonderful, I'm so glad you updated. This story if definitely progressing nicely. I'm glad to see that you can give the characters dimensions, develop them slowly, and still keep the ideas that Takahashi-san intended. Overall, your plot is complex while still being easy to follow, and I'm extremely impressed that neither Midoriko nor any of your original characters have become deified or have overtaken the plot. Also, I'm not really sure what the uproar about the lime content is about, but don't be discouraged. I found it to be both accurate without being clinical and romantic without being impossible. Well done, and I look forward to your next installment.
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Title: Great!!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 10:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good!! I really liked the part about what Kagome did to Inu's hands!! And the ending was great!!
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Reviewed By: wishes to remain anonymous On: March 10, 2006 14:18 PST
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I don't know what scares me more; how you describe limes so well or the fact that you CAN describe limes so well!!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: March 10, 2006 13:47 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What an evil and magnificent bitch Kagome is! Her wraping of IY's hands was hillarious. His revenge on her was equally great. I'm lovin it. Shippou's offering of the pocky was rather cute. His slip of calling Kagome Ma- was sweet. I liked how Inu is including him more in the 'Pack'. Once again, on the triple aspect of the Inu, good amalgamation of it. This is one of the few stories that makes the demon!inu not an idiot. Thanks so much for writing for all of us. Your placing in the IY awards was in no way a mistake or a fluke. You have a seriously good storyline and characterization here. Caitriona
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Reviewed By: jessbit On: March 10, 2006 02:02 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRATULATIONS on your characterisation award! And your alternate endings are always funny, I love every one of them. Could the alien have pulled a soap-box out of somewhere as well though? I automatically connect that image with a soap-box, Don't ask becasue I don't know. Maybe it's got something to do with that vacumm cleaner sucking my brain before...
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Reviewed By: Evie_Lovejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 23:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. It's got a very original plot and the characterization is very complex. I haven't seen a Koga reaction like that to Kagome before, but it makes perfect sense. With Kagome's signals, it was natural to interpret her in that fashion. Plus, with his wild nature, his instant bloodlust was a follow-up that was inevitable. Personally, I don't really like when Kagome and Inuyasha end up together so quickly, but I'm such an angst whore. *Giggles.* I loved their first mating where they linked.. too bad that can't really happen. *Sighs forelornly.* It would be very... stimulating. -^.^- Please do update soon, I'm quite interested with what directing this story will go in. I haven't enjoyed a fic like this since I became obsessed with Sueric's writings. With all my respect, Evie
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 21:25 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooo, such a nice update. It ended so sweetly. It's about those two had a little alone time, poor things! Things never stay quiet for long though..can't wait until next time!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 16:39 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHOOPEE!!!. you update n it made me love this story even more(if it's even possible).Now, this is my wonderful word for all the magnificent authors out there: UPDATE!!!!...I love it....LOVE IT ALL!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 08, 2006 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could kill you. I was so happy when I saw that it said you had updated on the third,only to find out that it lied!!!! Then I had to wait 5 days for you to post the next chapter. *sigh* oh well I enjoyed it so I guess it was worth the wait. And yes hypoglycemia does suck, thankfully I'm only borderline so I don't have to worry about what I eat as much, as long as I get some form of protein every day. And I gotta make sure I eat before I drink cuz one time I didn't and it fucked me up bad. lol. Anyway this is a really cool story and I like that I'm getting to learn a little latin and some quantum physics as I read. Well congratulations on your win and update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 03:50 PST
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WOW!!! I loved this story! Your amazing. I'm so gonna put you in my fav. Update!!!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: chanda (not signed in) On: March 05, 2006 10:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, what a wild sexy adventurous ride this story has been so far. I love the depth you placed in your story. I will definetly put you on as my fav author on this site. Please update soon. Thank you Chanda.
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Title: Chapter46
Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 28, 2006 10:31 PST
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Another great chapter. I am really enjoying this chapter. I wonder a lot about Kanna and what her purpose really is with this story. I like her, and I like that she is not Naraku's lapdog any longer. My favorite part of this story is not only when Inu's demon side comes out, but also when the three sides come together and talk to those around him. Just the way that you write it leaves the reader with a sense of the power that he really does possess. But the line "Screw being Inu-no-Taisho" cracked me up completely. I wondered why Miroku collapsed, but I was much more concerned about Kagome's sudden Hypoglycemic episode. Even if she was having a lot of adrenalin pumping into her blood stream, she shouldn't have just dropped like that. Did it also have something to do with the amount of miko energy going out of her body and the amount of 'energy' she used up with Inu earlier? (but I did like how you didn't ignore the growing symptoms and just have her pass out, but rather had her weaken and then drop.) Thanks for writing for all of us. I have really enjoyed this piece and just know that I'll enjoy the rest too. Caitriona
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 20:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I really liked it! And you've still got me wondering whether or not Kanna has turned over a new leaf, or if she's still the evil little spawn we all know and love...
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