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| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] | | Pages (36): [ « ‹ 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 › » ] | Title: After reading chap.37
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 19:44 PST
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Miroku bought binoculars? That was the mysterious purchase he made?? HaHaHaHaHa!!!! Namaste,dear friend!!
| Title: May the force be with you!!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 19:32 PST
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I loved the alternate ending you provided! Tensei,Inuyasha and Sesshy as characters from Star Wars?? (laughing so hard,I fall off of computer chair!!) You rock,my friend!! Namaste!!
| Title: I'm finally catching up!!
Reviewed By: Inu4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 19:03 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there!! I've read chapters 23-32 after I found your story here in one sitting!! (while trying to ignore various body parts falling asleep!) lol I am so happy to 'see' you again! I have missed you and this wonderful world that you have given me permission to see by casting it out into the universe that is cyberspace! Thanks for the tidbits about yourself that you mention from time to time...It's nice to glimpse the person behind the author..Forgive me for rambling on so,but I'm making up for lost time since the troubles with A/S! Have a blessed week,my friend..As always,namaste!!
| Reviewed By: miakakiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2006 18:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, no, I did like the title....it just bothered me that it was first person singular active, rather than the infinitive. Sorry if I mixed you up or anything....~_~* Although....you might use the passive infinitive on the second term....making it "to gather, to be snatched". Except maybe that doesn't make as much sense as I though it did....~_~* Nevermind. It all works. It's just the conjugation that bothered me. Sorry. ~_~* Looks like Fluffy-sama will have to use Tenseiga on a human again. Either that or the Nexus will reset or something....except that doesn't seem like there was anything else she could've done. I am a bit curious as to WHY he's reluctant to do so. Perhaps the use of Tenseiga creates some sort of bond between Sesshy and whomever he uses it on? That would explain why he still lets Rin follow him everywhere. AND why he's so careful to protect her (ie the episode when Naraku has her kidnapped). Of course...it could quite easily be something else entirely. PLEASE hurry and get the next chapter out as soon as you can!! Everyone is on the edge of their seats, waiting to find out what will happen to Kagome!!! Please tell us!!!
| Reviewed By: ~parvatilotus~ On: January 21, 2006 17:45 PST
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*cries* if *sob* you *weep* don't *chokes* update soon *wails* I'll never forgive you. please? *looks at you with big weepy eyes*
| Reviewed By: miakakiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2006 11:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a REALLY great story. The Latin chapter titles add a bit of interest to the story. Much as I hate to say it, though....you might want to double-check the conjugation of the verbs. For example, chapter 38....your translation reads "Convoco, corripio: Latin; Convoco: to call together or convene. Corripio: to seize, snatch up, or steal" This makes sense...except that you didn't use the infinitives. (Which would be "convocare, corripire" if I recall correctly.) As they're written, the verbs are conjugated to the first person singular (active voice). Thus, they say "I convene/call together, I seize/snatch up/steal" which doesn't seem like quite what you're trying to convey. I realize it's a minor mistake and I probably shouldn't even bother you about it, but it's been bugging me. This might be the only place such a mistake of conjugation exists...it just kinda jumped out at me. However, I doubt that anyone else would really catch something like that. I happen to have a little background in Latin (3 years of it in hs) and a great interest in linguistics (which is why I carefully read the translation bits--it's interesting to know what the words mean). I do appologize for bothering you about this. ~_~* Anyhow.....a truely EXCELLENT story! I can hardly wait to read more!! *^_^* Will Kagome be OK? She HAS to be!!! And...how long before Sango's pregnancy is discovered?
| Reviewed By: FieryFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 16:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha ha ha ... very funny! I am enjoying the story...and I wouldn't want it to end that way at all! Maybe I'm just impatient. XP And My best lemon nom was actually for Mir/San. I loved that scene. there's a real lack of good Mir/San lemons our there, and I really liked whta you did with that one. I heart Mir/San muchly (and I actually won best Mir/San romance at IYFG last quarter...I mean..what?). Anywhos, I can't wait to see what comes next...with Kagome out of commission, however are they going to close the time rip! Oh noes!
| Reviewed By: jessbit On: January 19, 2006 15:52 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, you've explained Kouga's behaviour. And from his point it's actually logical. Now I can't go on about how thick he is. Ah well. Another great chapter. I agree with Tara 222 - you three all have differnt strong points but from what I read of Silent Sky and Seuric's works, I think you're character depth is the best. Especially the way you treat Inuyasha's different sides and how we see both his inside and outer self and how the inner selves affect his outer self (appearence to others)
| Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 18, 2006 19:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A perfect score for this chapter!!! Mainly cuz Kouga finally got his. ^.^ Anyway sry for forgetting to review the last chapter I was going to do it later but I was just really busy and completely forgot. Thank you for updating now though, my b-day is tomorrow, i'm turning 18!!!!, and this was a lovely present. Anyway YAY!!! Kouga bashing!!! And yes I quite agree with you Kagome has been showing Kouga favor and I always feel like slapping her when she does it. But being human and obviously not fluent in either biology or zoology, which i'm currently taking, she honestly isn't aware of her actions. She's just being a friendly typical teen girl. And yes Kouga is a wolf so in NO way tame and yes even dogs can become agressive when provoked. Hell even my Border Collie will nip and growl a lil if my 11 year old sis takes her rough housing a bit too far. Anyway update soon ok I can't wait to see Sango and Miroku's reactions when they learn that Inu has gained control of his blood and all. ^.~
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Reviewed By: frani1375 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:21 PST
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This is such a great story. I totally agree with the way you portrayed Kouga. He's only being nice to get what he wants and if that was taken away from him, I could totally see him going balistic over it. I can't wait for you to update. Now, if I could only update my story......
| Reviewed By: FieryFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 23:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I nommed you for best lemon! Whee! I'm really enjoying this fic. It does seem like things are being dragged out quite a bit...I really want to see how the group is going to work together as the living jewel, etc, and I want to see what happens with Sango and Miroku and the whole pregnancy thing. Whee! Anywhos, I really appreciate that you update this so often...I get impatient when authors take forever to update, and I've really enjoyed the story so far. Your characterizations are spot-on, and you've definitely got a compelling plot. I do think that Kouga's a bit more of an asshole than he should be, but everyone else is awesome. Whee! And I just said "Whee" far too many times, and you probably think I'm one of those crazy reviewers. Who knows, maybe I am. Anywhos, wonderful story, keep up the good work, and congrats on all your nominations!
| Reviewed By: jessbit On: January 16, 2006 01:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I love you. (not in THAT way, just your writing) Thanks for answering my question. Things are getting interesting. I'm not sure that I trust Kanna, she just never seemed to have any thoguhts let alone free will, so how could she even consider going behind Naraku's back. On the other hand, she might just be smarter than Kagura and act obedient. guess I'll find out eventually, huh? Pocky sounds yummy! Chocolate AND lollies! I could just eat, and eat, and eat, and ... I'm beginning to see a problem. Just as well virtual selves can't get obese or diabetic or anything. So if you get sick of pocky I can be your official pocky eater, if you want to, of course.
| Reviewed By: firebird234 On: January 14, 2006 17:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Kouga is trouble doesn't he realize he has never had any rights to Kagome since Inuyasha is higher up on the royal scale then he is, but we all now how dense he is. I love this story can't wait for the next chapter, it will be fun to read Kouga getting his tailed behind kicked royally.
| Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2006 17:32 PST
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Uh oh. Somwthing tells me that Kouga is in deep s@#$. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are not likely to allow him to live after this, reguardless of what Kagome wants. Oh well. I can't wait till Inyasha gets a good sniff of Sango though... Keep up the excellent work and update soon please. I love this!!
| Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 22:41 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I hope that InuYasha lets his demon out and kills Kouga or beats the hell out of him. But how could they of not noticed him? Where were the Kai Wolves? O'well hope you update soon.
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