| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2005 15:21 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, was finally able to catch up with the latest chapters. My computer died. Well, not died, the tech said, "it had issues", whatever that means. Anyways, great chapters. This is great, cant wait to see what else is gonna go on.
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Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 16:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looking for more, guess you are editing
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Title: Mellie
Reviewed By: Mellie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 05:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the hard work. This is a good story. Have you read Becky Tailweavers -THE WHITE DOG? SHe has a Shirokaiba in that story.
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Reviewed By: Inaqui On: November 30, 2005 19:27 PST
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*raises eyebrow wryly* White... Fang? bwahahaha. Very nice. I liked this chapter. I think that you could probably flesh it out a squidge more, in the conversation between the half-wolves and InuYasha, but that's just my opinion. I love the personality that you're developing with InuYasha's demon side, very unexpected but well-done.
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 13:50 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, Love it! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 12:50 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Loved the interaction between InuYasha and the all the dogs. And I knew about Akita's but not about the other breeds. I thought that was pretty cool. Should be real interesting with Sesshomaru sniffing around now. Myouga dont watch, he's liable to get himself squished. Cant wait for your next update.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2005 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone recommended this on one of the sites I go to, and I must say, you are very talented. I like the way you write, how you have the characters. This is, I think the only story Ive read thus far, anywhere near side by side to the Manga. I read the translated one done by Chris. Where you mention Sesshomarus' sword being broken, and Tensaiga was re-forged and is now a formidable weapon. And other differences as well. But even as you have it close to the Manga, this is definately your story. LOL, and am so so glad you didnt have whats-his-name as a damned dish rag either. I couldnt believe the character was put in there as a rag of some sort, lmao. Oops, I take that back, he was turned into a rag? I dunno, anyways, great story, and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Inaqui On: November 26, 2005 22:57 PST
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Yep, it's all fixed. Now I can give you a looong review *wink*. Well, as I said, I really enjoyed it. I think you've been able to integrate the ideas of Inu Youkai pack rituals etc without it being abrupt like some, seamlessly carrying on from canon into your own ideas. The choice between Kagome and Kikyo was believable, not abrupt. I saw no glaring typos or misuse of any grammatical structures etc. As for promotion, well, I think people are taking care of that for you *wink* I found the link in a yahoo group haha. Seeing as you want con-crit, I'm going to think a bit about what could be improved and I'll get back to you. :) I think this is a very good start for any writing endeavor. Now that the serious stuff is done, I'll regress into frantic fangirliness. OMG UPDAAAAAAAAAAATE!!! OR NO POCKY FOR YOU!!! *glomp*
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: November 26, 2005 12:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, Great Chapter! I've been waiting impatiently for it. I think that this story is very original. Your imagination must be outstanding to come up with this idea, let alone turn it into a story. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Inaqui On: November 25, 2005 21:13 PST
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I really enjoyed it, but the end of chap 28 doesn't, well, end! It finishes in mid-sentence!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: November 25, 2005 20:41 PST
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Hey, there are parts missing!
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Reviewed By: ~*Mystra*~ On: November 23, 2005 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I stumbled across this fic today and read everything in one sitting. Fascinating! Beautiful! Insightful! And utterly different. Thank you for gifting us with this and please continue soon.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2005 10:49 PST
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Ambush ... you know that's not quite what I meant, and I get the feeling that it's going to cause a bit of a fight with Sessho-kun. Hopfully Yourei stops it before one kills the other. Maybe Inuyasha could explain ... nah, Sesshomaru would never stand still long enough. Can't wait for an update.
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Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: November 21, 2005 22:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See, told you I'd read this one! By the way, I don't understand what the lat chapter name means... in English. It confuses me. I love your story. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 08:20 PST
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Uh-oh. Sounds like Yourei is in trouble. Update soon!! *prepares ambush for Sessho*
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