| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 16:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Grandma's back! Damn, fine story, Love it. Cant wait till you're able to update again. Oh, and BTW, LMAO, I just love the *Darth Sesshomaru* skit. But I have to ask, Nani Shiyagaru is the *NooNoo*? LMAO, Cuz I have no idea. Ok, nuff outta me, am off to find me M+M's. Update soon, onegai?
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Title: chap 43
Reviewed By: InuBaby369246, not signed on On: February 01, 2006 16:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the thing on their forheads is a ying-yang? Cool! Also, I don't understand just what happened with Kagome, and the tree. It's a little cfonfusing because I understoofd that she died. But maybe I read it wrong... you never know.
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Title: Lovin' it!!
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 16:28 PST
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Say where do you get these Latin quotes? I wanna know!! I love em. Especially when thet're so true. Anyway, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I hope you'll update more often.
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Reviewed By: Selina On: January 29, 2006 01:36 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah I read the updated chapter. Now you goy to update some more please. i really like this story and hope you continue, oh yeah i wonder whats going to happen with barrier. uh-oh love selina
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Title: Another great chapter!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 10:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, hey! Another great chapter!! I just love this fic!! And I agree that Rin is way too young for Sesshy right now, but in about ten years, it'll be perfect!! I do hope that you'll consider doing a sequel with them! It'd be great and I'd be sure to R&R!!
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Reviewed By: miakakiri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 21:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nyaaa!!! Poor guys! Poor Kagome, too, 'cause I bet she's rather confused....but....I mean, the guys weren't even DOING anything, and they WANTED to help her! Oh well. They'll get over it. Right? At least Kagome's alive again, right? And now she can fix the time rip (been waiting for you to get to that since those dolts started fighting). And next time EITHER of the Brothers Inu bumps into that blasted pi--wolf...he's either gonna die or be castrated (depending on who catches him first....excuse my Ranma reference). I do hope the next chapter comes out soon (though unfortunately even if it does I probably won't be able to read it until next week, as I don't even have a computer, much less an internet connection...~_~*) It seems rather sad to leave poor Inuyasha and Fluffy-sama stuck to the wall like that....And I'd like to find out what the symbol on Inu's forhead IS. And why it bothers Miroku. And what IS Kanna up to....is she telling the truth or not? And is Midoriko OK? So many questions left by the ending of this chapter! So many more things to discover! *^_^* You certainly know how to hook your readers with cliffhangers! *^_^* Just don't leave us hanging too long....wouldn't want anyone to fall. Ne? *^_^* (Yeah, I guess that's just a nice and flowery way of saying "Please hurry and get the next chapter out!" but I'm not trying to be pushy or anything. ~_~* Please don't take offense!) Hope you have a great week! *^_^*
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Reviewed By: Leo_mae On: January 27, 2006 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! She lives!!! ^.^ I'm glad cuz if she satyed dead i would have had to kill you. lol. Anyway yea I know it takes a while, i'm in the fucking health academy at my high school. I've taken Anatomy & Physiology hon., Health Science I (crash course of anatomy), and now i'm taking zoology. There are so many things can happen to prevent pregnancy from occuring that I'm surprised women even manage to become pregnant. With all the shit an embryo has to go through to survive being in their mother's body it's almost like we aren't meant to reproduce. Which I kinda like the idea that my body doesn't like the idea of being pregnant. Sorry I have major issues with babies and small children, I'm not having any kids till my thirties. I want my 20's to myself. Anyway update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: Tara222 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 18:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again I am in awe of your greatness. (bows) Unfortunately, I never got your e-mail. If it's not to much trouble, could you try again? I think I fixed the problem. Thank you so very much.
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Title: Absolutely wonderful!!
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 22:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is absolutely beautiful and I could find now flaws whatsoever! ^^ I would first of all like to say that anyone who thinks your story is too logn is a moron! I love every last second spent reading your story and it is one of the best I have ever read. ^^ Please continue writing logn and detailed chapters with such wonderful description that are full of plot. The fluff is wonderful too and I absolutely love what you've done with the Inu instincts and the various mating rituals. I must say you are a very talented writer and I encourage you to continue! ^^ This last chapter is killing me with suspense and I hope you update soon!!! I have to find out what happens to Kagome!
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Title: UPATE SOON!!!
Reviewed By: mel f On: January 25, 2006 16:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO THIS IS WHAT I THINK YOU SHOULD DO: POST LIKE 3-5 CHAPTERS ALL AT ONCE BECAUSE WAITING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT IS KILLING ME! :-)so update soon please:-)
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Reviewed By: Jessbit On: January 25, 2006 02:52 PST
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I just thought of anotherr reason it's good not to have the Kagome/Sess thing - how would Sess deal with having both Rin and Kagome in his heart? Kagome and a teenage Rin are currently running around in my head vying for Sesshoumaru's attentions, stopping occasionally to fight one another. Ouch, I think they hit something in there.
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Reviewed By: Jessbit On: January 25, 2006 02:46 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooohhhhh, you sneaky author. Particularly sneaky and teasy title too. I hope your beta gets better soon and I agree with the angsat - as much as I hate it, the story would be boring without it. Although I was VERY tempted to write a four thousand character review consisting of the one word 'gaaah' in capitals with lots of exclamations marks - I figured that you'd probably get enough of it anyway. :) Thanks for updating regularly, even if you're only leaving cliffies :) oh, and thank goodness you didn't make Kagome go after Seshoumaru, that would be VERY wrong ... and I'd feel so sorry for Inuyasha ...
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Reviewed By: kt On: January 24, 2006 19:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you need to update NOW! no more of wodering what will happen to kagome!
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Title: Wonderful story!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 13:21 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful Inuyasha fic!! I just love it!! I can't wait for another chapter! And I hope that maybe you'll have a sequel one day that will be a Sess/Rin pairing! Other than Inu/Kag and Mir/San, they are my favorite couple!! Great story and can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: Selina On: January 24, 2006 06:37 PST
Comment/Review:
okay so let me get this straight since sesshy can't revive her, soshe won't want to follow him (yyeeeeeeaaaaaahhhhhh) she is still going to stay with inu (YYYYYYYaaaaeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhhh) so she is still alive with that chakura thing thats so cool (yyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh) please update Love Selina
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