| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sharon (yugiohgirl03 comp wont let me sign in) On: November 19, 2005 22:54 PST
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teething...as inuyasha says "feh" both my boys or teething and i will sick them both on you if you dont keep this fic coming...(2yr old molars and first teeth)...great chapter keep them coming.
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 11:34 PST
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This is going on my favorites list immmediatly. I love it. Can't wait for more so update soon please!!!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 10:53 PST
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I like the Latin titles. Cool. and especially that most of them are quotes. Anyway, going to finish reading what's here before I review again.
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Reviewed By: FieryFaerie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 17:38 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fic. Espeically how you're keeping up with the most recent manga plotlines, and adding something extra to it. There are a lot of aspects of this fic that are so original and wonderful and I commend you. I can't wait to see what happens next! Great job!
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Reviewed By: jade_pendant [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 16:34 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow girl you;ve got me addicted to your story, plzzzz for my sanity sake update soon. arigato
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Title: WAI WAI!!!
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 11:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man...I'm so happy. There is another awsome story out their for Inu/Kag fans...Wai Wai, now I have to go spread the word...so more people can see this story. Wai Wai
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: November 14, 2005 20:11 PST
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Oh!! Don't get lonely here!! MMorg has been a pain lately and leaving reviews is difficult--I still love this story and look for updates practically every day--since I know you like to update quickly (thank you so very much for that!) I love how Inuyasha is changing (I love his 'talks' with himself--they're so much fun ^_^ ). Kikyou, so bitter--I'm glad both Inu and Kagome finally did something about her--the truth shall set you free!! ^_^ Anyway--thanks again for a good fic and I shall await your next update....patiently...I shall try patience!
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 14:20 PST
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ok you are safe from my drooling 5 month old for now...grins evilly...but you wint be if u dont kepp updating...more more more...grins
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 20:12 PST
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me like and me want more now...or i will sic my 2 year old and drooling 4 month old boys on you...grins...please continue updating.
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Title: The daemon made you do it huh?
Reviewed By: StupidLoserFantasyINC On: November 06, 2005 08:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! That was really original! You had a very unnoticable amount of gramatical error but I'm the kind of person that actually looks at the stuff so don't worry about it! And you're Latin! Do you speak it or did you find those on the internet somewhere? Well great job I hope you continue soon
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 01:24 PST
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Another great chapter. I wish I had your kind of insperation right now, I have atleast 3 stories I have been trying to write and I have run into blocks on all 3. The biggest problem has been my computer, it keeps crashing on me. I do have to say that for awhile this chapter had me a little confused, but I managed to figure out where you were going with it later on. My biggest question is: was it Kagome who brought Inuyashas' three sides together or did he do that himself? or mabey they did it together????? GAH!! now I'm confuseing myself, oh well, keep up the good work.^-^
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Reviewed By: Neracio On: November 04, 2005 14:05 PST
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This is an amazing fic. I love all your ideas! i have a question, though: does kagome's dad get any help in the 4th diminsion?(I call the time-travel place in the well the 4th dimension) Like, a few years in kagome's future, another teen falls down the well and is supposed to train with kagome's dad with the Nexus and helps kagome and all them? Great story. PS: my FF.n name is Neracio.
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Title: FFRG Review: Prologue
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 13:43 PST
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Hi, and thank you for submitting to FFRG. First thing I noticed was the distracting use of brackets and other such things, and while you provided a key for it, using it in the realm of writing tends to be grating and lends itself to a convoluted, hard to read format. If you were to simply put single quotes around the text and italicize it, it would still come across as you intended without being so intrusive. Give the impression that the characters are telepathically speaking through action, thus alleviating the need for your 'key'… You might find that this will not only strengthen your overall characterization, but will also give a more cohesive feel to your prologue. You may also want to change your Chapter number selection to Prologue, thus it will not affect your later numbered chapters (Try the chapter manager for this option- the page where you uploaded the chapter.) Try not to use capital letters to emphasize words. Italics work better and look cleaner. As for your summary, I had to read it a few times for it to make complete sense. Perhaps rewording it would be to your advantage. Your chapter is good; your grammar and spelling is meticulous. Overall, the Prologue is strong, but watch out, please, as your style tends to lean toward the "tell", and at times loses sight of the "show" part. Dialogue is strong, and I think you have an excellent start! Keep up the great work, and thanks again for submitting to FFRG!
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: November 02, 2005 19:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story!! Just love it! So well-written--a refreshing change ^_^ Love the original ideas/take on everything--gives everything a new twist that kinda makes you go 'hmmmmmmmmmmmm....' in a great way. Keep up the fantastic work--can't wait to find out what Inuyasha and Kagome have been up to...all alone....in the past.
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Reviewed By: misticknight2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 01:44 PST
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another marvolous set. I love how this story is coming along, simply amazing. When will you have a kag/inu lemon? I hope it's soon. It's also fun trying to figure out what the latin words mean before the end of the chapter. I hope you don't mind, but I've been copying them to a seperate file, I like useing them on my friends. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep writing.
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