| "Facets of the Living Jewel" Reviews/Comments [ 534 ] |
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 07, 2006 06:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well then I can forgive you for not updating, i understand the whole taxes thing. My mom's an accountant. And yes Jinx and Bandit are the betas and that with wolves only the alphas mate but they ARE half dog, and with dogs all the members mate not just the alpha pair. Well I hope Kag can help Miro, that's so sad that his wind tunnel is widening. Oh I can't wait till the next chapter when Sess and Inu get to spar...that will be soooooo cool!!!!!! ^.^ And Inu is learning all kinds of new things all the time and he started training with Yourei Taisei sooner than Sess so I can't wait to see if he can kick Sess's ass now. He's always won before but it was never 100% definite. Anyway please update soon and I promse to stop throwing kouga dolls at you. ^.~
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: April 06, 2006 13:33 PDT
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This may seem rude but....WILL YOU UPDATE!!!! Did you fall off the earth or cease to exist or something? It's been more than two weeks!!! I know that sounds selfish and rude and impatient but you usually update fater than that and I'm going crazy cuz no one else is updating and I'm bored. *sigh* just please update soon and help me save what little sanity I have left.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: April 05, 2006 10:00 PDT
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Sorry it took so long to get back to reveiw this chapter. It is a good one though. I like the look into Miroku's soul that you have given. He is such an interesting character that usually just gets labeled as a hentai lecher. There is a lot of spiritual deapth that you being out well in this chapter. You are lending a sense of urgency to his situation with the constant mentions of the pain and pulsing. Brings to mind the most receint chapters in the manga. :) I wondered throughout this whole chapter just what Kanna knows and what can be done to slow/stop the kazanna sooner. Some of my favorite moments in this chapter were when Kirara was 'talking' (she is definately smarter than your average cat) and when the canine members of the pack were talking. Giving these animal members of the story some play time give even more deapth to the story.....or facets to the jewel. (couldn't resist myself on that one.) Thanks for writing for all of us! I look forward to future chapters. Caitriona
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 09:06 PDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best Romance Fiction (Alternate Pairing)" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2006 00:04 PDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best In-Character Fanfiction" (for Inuyasha) at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
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Title: Congratulations!
Reviewed By: tootalltygerlily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2006 23:26 PDT
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Congratulations, your story has been nominated for "Best AU/AR Fiction" at the Feudal Association. Voting will be held through May 1st, 2006 and winners will be notified shortly thereafter. Feel free to join our group and/or help us spread the word about our group! The official website for the group - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ The yahoo group where nomination/voting takes place - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ If you have any questions, feel free to email Dark Avenger (the owner) at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan (not singed in) On: March 29, 2006 12:26 PST
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PLEASE O PLEASE REAVIEW!!!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 26, 2006 18:40 PST
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I already reviewed but I have a question. Why did you label this story as an AU? Wouldn't it be a continuation? I mean you are going with what is happening in the manga but just your own version.*shrug* oh well i'm sure you have your reasons update soon ok ja!!!!
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Reviewed By: pickle juice On: March 26, 2006 11:50 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story. It's really turning out to be of the greats. LOL. Don't stop writing, I need to know what happens next!~* =]
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Reviewed By: Neko-Lady On: March 25, 2006 00:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story was recommended by Fenikkusuken. She was right your story is very interesting and your lemons well written. I'm sorry you killed off Kagra, (and I know that's not spelled right) I've always hoped that she would get away from Naraku. Even if she is bad I like that she stands up to him. Question; Did you decide to use Time Lords in your story because of the BBC t.v. show, 'Dr. Who'? There really isn't any resemblance in the character, just the name of Time Lord. Well, I've stayed up too late to get this finished, hope there is some way to link to this story so I will know when you update. Cheers! Neko-Lady
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Kilika On: March 23, 2006 23:11 PST
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I've really enjoyed reading this story so far, and cant wait until it comes to a conclusion. You've really done some unique things with this story.
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Title: Very good!!
Reviewed By: Tevrah [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 21:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good! I can't wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: Leo-mae On: March 22, 2006 14:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww....I was waiting for some more Inu/Kag fluff but there wasn't any. *sigh* oh well. So is Naraku's black hole thing that those other Time Lords are watching Miroku's wind tunnel? And thanks for putting Kensei's hypoglycemia in that was nice of you. So are Jinx and Bandit mated and that's why Bandit waas acting guilty? Because only the alpha members are supposed to mate? Oh well guess I'll find out later huh? Well update soon ok ja!!!
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Reviewed By: Ardent-Amber [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 13:52 PST
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Sry about the wait, but it took me a while to get around to the lemon...hehheh...naughty, naughty...sadly, my brain is incapable of functuning well enough to write a decent review, so yeah...MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 08:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Very informative. Keep wondering what Kanna is up to. Can't be anything good. And poor Miroku. Can't wait to see what happens next. And I just happen to love your lemony goodness you serve. You are just so damn good at it. YUM! Old puter here was FUBAR'd for a bit, so hopefully no problems for a while. Update when you can.
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