| "Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 11:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh oh poor Kagome disappeared. I hope nothing bad is going to happen to her and if it does I hope Sesshomaru and Inuyasha can rescue her. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 21:12 CST
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Nice, i like this so far...the beginning makes me think of that move 'an american haunting' though....but i see the differences. VERY original! I'm loving this story! -amber
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 20:34 CST
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oh...poor Kagome...what we put her through in fanfics...but yay....they're getting married after this drama ends...woot *happy dance*...good writing though...it was intense or a minute when he said "we need to talk"...i was holding my breath...oh boy I cant wait for an update...thanks
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, at least she was happy for a short while. I wonder how they are going to go find the Shikon No Tama in the modern age. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: December 15, 2007 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nope...I really wasn't expecting a chapter so soon. You'd better be careful girlie your gonna make us all spoiled. :) I'm glad she said yes him. And Sesshy getting all parental was kinda hot. *lol*
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Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story a few days ago and I have to say that I'm hooked. It is an hauntingly beautiful story. Your characters are well developed and convey the essence of the original characters. Their emotions are intense without being unrealistic. I especially love your portrayal of Sesshomaru, he still maintains his aloofness without being a complete boar. You have a real talent for creating imagery that makes me feel as though I'm immersed in a movie as opposed to just sitting here reading. I only have one concern though, when Inuyasha finally told Miroku about what was really going on, Miroku pretty much high tailed it out of there. I understand that it was overwhelming to hear everything Inuyasha told him, but they were supposed to be "blood brothers." It seemed like the only reason Miroku even went back was because of Sango. While you needed some sort of plot device to show just how strong their relationship was, you left me feeling a little disappointed with the apparent frailty of Inuyasha and Miroku's friendship. Other than that, this is an exquisite piece of work and please update soon!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, that was speedy and spiffy, ne? :D How time flies when you're drawing, am out one day, then the next... whammo... update! Sweet! :P Loved where ya picked it back again, very beautiful. Lemon garden was great too, hehe. Sess is vicious when hes pissed, then again I think he even when he isn't. And am he pissed cause they be foolin round or cause he haint gettin any, lol. I need to go back and reread some, I think. Now on to The Tama. could just feel the dread in the room. Like your worst nightmares coming true. Great chap. Till next install... update when ya can! ;)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cliffee? You did that on purpose, you evil, evil author you! Lol. Nice lemon, BTW. ;) Very good visuals as well. I love it when I read something and can actually see it. Very well done. Now you evil author you... update when ya can! ;) Hehehe
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Title: Human heart
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"M~E~M~O~R~I~E~S Moments that should be held in my heart & mind,yet in time..Everything will become dust in a corner. Madness comes, Over looking scars..Forever apart of my future. I will fight off an Eternity of past Sorrow..." i am srry for taking so long. cumputer is a mess! but im still here!!!! hope u like the poem..
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: December 13, 2007 16:36 CST
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OMG that was hot...and yay...he popped the question...but they way they have been going at it I am sur[prised she isnt pregnant yet...but damn taht was good...makes me wish i had a boyfriend right now XD
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi* On: December 12, 2007 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see you writing again. I won't lie...I forgot all about this story. o.O BUT...I did go back to freshin up on the plot. I can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 15:29 CST
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hahha...i like your note at the end but damn it was good...a very good present...i thank you *bows But now u got to update cause a cliffhanger like that needs to be answered...but thanks again cant wait to hear from you
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really glad Sesshomaru is telling Inuyasha the story of his previous life. It would have been nice for Kagome to also be awake to hear it. Good chapter and thanks to the reply to my review!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 23:08 CST
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wow...i finally read your story...i have ben putting it off for a while but I am happy i read it...now i just need an update...oh...my birthday is on monday that would be a nice present...XD...keep up the amazing work...cant wait to hear more
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really complicated. Some parts are sad and some are very enjoyable. At first I thought Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were demons in this life; but now realize they only were in their past life at least for now that is. As many twists and turns this story has taken I would not be surprised if their demon parts are reunited with their human parts. Please update soon and thanks; this is an awesome story.
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