| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 21:38 PDT
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AWWWWWW! FINALLY! that was so cute. jilli's comment about mating time in at the OK Corral cracked me up because there is a bar in my town called that, so at the mention of it I was picturing something quite surprising, to say the least, haha. Great chapter, I'm so happy for jilli! im really worried about that creepy stalker though, somethings gonna happen I KNOW IT! keep up the fantastic work, cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 21:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! I was so sad at the begining of the chapter....then so incrediblly happy at the end! You say that this is coming to a close...but the stalker guy? Cant wait for the new chapter! Thanks a ton Sue....I love your work!
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 20:54 PDT
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YEAH!!! WHOOO HOOO!!! GO GET HIM GURL!!!e..hemmm...sorry got a little carried away...lol. I'm so glad he finally admitted it.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 20:29 PDT
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Its official. Jillian officially owns Gavin, and pretty soon she'll have the mating mark & papers to show it. And why did I suddenly have a vision of Jerry Maguire when he was begging his wife not to leave him saying the infamous phrase "you complete me" when Gavin proposed to Jillian??
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Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Finally!! awesome chapter!! I loved it, i'm just waiting to see theclimax of this story because seeing how you write makes me expect something awesome!! I loved this, itis very very nice, now a question, what are Evvie, Jilli,and Gavvie's ceremonial colors??? 2) how many chapters do you estimate are left on the story?? aaand 3) do Gavvie and Jilli have crests?? if so where are they and how do they look like?? I hope you can answer this...... and oooh i cant imagine Bas and Cain's reaction to jilli's mating if it does happen in next chapter...:P lots of hugs nd kisses Ginny
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 19:44 PDT
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Oh, I absolutely LOVED this chapter! WTG GAVIN!!!!!!!!! WOO HOO!!!!!! He FINALLY did it! Yay!!!! Haha, I love Jillian's attitude toward his confession too lol.
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 19:03 PDT
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*laughs* Okay, that was bloody fantastic.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 18:33 PDT
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Woohoo! Go, Jilli! And thank God Gavin finally admitted it. All you ever need is a kick ass rock star named Zel Roka and nothing (and I mean nothing) can go wrong! leeksandmisosoup
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 18:30 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay soooooooooooo sorry i haven't reviewed in a while, but to more pressing m,atters. MY REVIEW!! OMG this chapter was amazing. i must say it was well awaited. it finally got to the point, not of the story but finally it showed their real feelings albeit a little confrontational it was what they needed. no more fronting jusat lay it all out. get angry and say what you mean. lol. i loved it. and at the end jilli was hilarious. poor gavin he didnt no what to do with her dragging him away like that and announcing her very obvious plans to (the word 'rape' popped into my head during my reading. lol) claim her mate. lmao. i cant wait until the next chapter. luv ur writng always sue 10 outta 10! update soon!
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:41 PDT
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HAHAhahahaha... yes, I meant to leave the review for this story... when I signed in... it dumped me wherever it did. :D Thanks for another awsome chapter. LOVED it... as always... though I think I'm looking forward to the next one more. ;)
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 17:11 PDT
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WOOHOO! LOL...Jili's not going to let Gavin change his mind. Hehehehe...they've got lots of sexual frustration to work through ;)
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 15:50 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I understand completly. On another note. When gavin gave jili the box I thought it was going to be a different surprise. Oh well . Cant wait for next update.
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 07:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost cried in this chapter. Gavin is such a jerk. He still thinks that JIllian still doesn't know what she want, but it him who cant bring himself to understand the situation. But like you said, "All men are fool." LOL. Hope you can update soon, cuz I'm dying to know the outcome of this Purity.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T This is so sad. Poor Gavin and Jilli. Get with the program you guys!! Keep up the good work. Wewt cant wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2006 00:15 PDT
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This is so frustrating to read and at the same time SO GOOD! Poor Gavin and Jilli, I really wish they would be straight forward with their feelings, but then there wouldnt be a story (or a rather short one!). Great chapters, and i LOVE that Evan is included in them! (The more bad deeds you tell us he has done the more i like him! haha). Keep up the fantastic writing (as it always is) you rock sue!
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