| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 23:11 PDT
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I'm very much enjoying this story too!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 22:15 PDT
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Awww, the ending to this just makes me want to cry! I know how you feel about writing with your emotions, but that's what makes stories even better, well IMO it does lol. Anyways, the forums site isn't working for me today and I have no idea why. Oh, and I thought this quote/poem would really fit for Jillian and Gavin: "I'm not suppose to love you, I'm not suppose to car. I'm not suppose to live my life wishing you were there. I'm not suppose to wonder where you are or what you do, but I can't help it because I'm in love with you." Well, I think it fits lol. Anyways, This was a really sad but good chapter. I just hope Jillian can make Gavin understand why she wasn't wearing the necklace, and I hope Gavin can make sure that Jillian doesn't go to Tokyo!
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 21:15 PDT
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I have to say, Gavvie screwed up big time at first. Now, he's starting to get the message through his head. (Thanks, Evan!) And the butterfly earrings to match her necklace... Let's just hope it's not too late for the both of them. ^^ leeksandmisosoup
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Title: chapter 24
Reviewed By: red_tigergirl2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 20:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this has gotten to be the first story i ever started to cry in man the endding was so sad i can't believe i was crying.o this story has got to get better i don't think i want to cry again
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 18:43 PDT
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Gavin needs to sit down and make her listen. Its fine and dandy to do what she asks but what she needs is way more important. Men! LOL! Great Chap as always. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: savvy_rae [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 17:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too bad U can only rate it up to 10!!! This is one of ur best works!!! So do u post new chapters during the week or just whenever??
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T_T This is so sad... He forgot her birthday. Gavin, gavin, gavin. Poor Jilli. Fight damnit fight! Oh well... I guess she's done all the fighting... Gavin step up and take charge! :D Anyway. This was a great chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 13:17 PDT
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I agree with Hanks final thought! I just want to grab Gavin by the ear and make him listen! This was a sad chapter. I can't believe he forgot her birthday!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 12:03 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man.... this one saddend me quite a bit. Im about to go out right now and I suddenly have a severe feeling of saddness on the brink of depression. Thats what I love about your stories. You portray the charactyers and there emotiions so well that the person reading it may actually feel those emotions and understand them. I have a question. What were you feeling while writing this chapter?
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Title: Long time since my last review..
Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 12:00 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just 'cause I haven't been writing doesn't mean I haven't been reading! I'm still absolutely in love with your works, they've been a large source of enjoyment for me over the past couple years. On a more personal note, I would like to thank you for being a huge influence on myself as a writer. Reading the carefully sculpted beauty of your works has helped create my writing style, which is incredibly influenced by yours. Your ability to bring these characters to life and play out interesting, realisitic, and emotionaly moving works is what I strive to achieve in the long run. As of now, the creativity you've embedded in me has helped me earn very good grades on my English writing assignments, so I can already see the huge improvements. Thank you so much for being so awsome!
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Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 11:06 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGHHHHHHHHHHHHH I HATE YOUUUUUUUUU Nahhh not really, but hey, cool story I want to read some more now!! poor gavvie and poor jilli, it almost made me cryyyyyy Please update suun, love your stories!!!!! Byye
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 09:33 PDT
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Oh Darn, the both of them. Can't they get their act together? Gavin, you go out there, wish Jillian a Happy Birthday, and tell her the truth! Jillian, go back, celebrate with Gavin, and tell the truth! No wonder these two aren't going anywhere... Thank you so much for helping me! leeksandmisosoup
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 08:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats soooo sad! I cant believe that Gavvie forgot her birthday! (of course with everything going on lately...i can believe it) Hope everything works out with thoses two! great chapter sue! Thanks!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 01:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2006 17:00 PDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY! i know i say that for every single one of your purity stories (and all the other ones you write), but well its TRUE!!!!! and though we have not seen Evan all that much (or not enough in my opinion, lol) i LOVE HIM! i can't wait for more! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!! who's story is up next? or are you gonna leave that a secret?
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