| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 12:35 PDT
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YES, they FINALLY talked about why Jillian stayed away from him for two years. Sort of, anyway. Jillian still didn't let Gavin really explain what happened, but its a start. At least now Gavin isn't outright saying that Jillian isn't his mate. But I think Gavin needs a rosary around his neck if he keeps referring to Jillian as just a kid. He can't have it both ways. Either Jillian is adult enough to make her own decisions or she's not. But that still shoudn't be an issue considering the fact that Jillian is an adult and knows exactly what she wants.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 11:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geeezzzz Gavvie! You still feel boring and like your not good enough? Well at least he's admitting his feelings to Jilli...at least by showing her physically. Great Chapter Sue....can't wait till Monday!
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2006 10:16 PDT
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Oh, Jilli, why won't you listen to Gavvie? Sigh, women... (I'm a woman, hehehe). I was wondering where the sneak peek about Morio and Meara was. I can't seem to find it, so can you help me, please? And I'm sorry, I completely forgot to say thank you for helping me with the Family Tree (I still made one, but in Japanese). And is there going to be a Purity fanfic about Mikio and any of Rin's kids? Arigatou gozaimasu to ganbatte on your next and all chapters as well as your stories! And I really can't wait that long for Gunnar's story... Mata Atode, leeksandmisosoup!
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 23:33 PDT
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Mm the mystery sort of solved hehe. i hope gavin can get jili to listen to him. im so glad you got those chapters out quick hehe i was dien to know and now i do hehe. untill the next chap
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nooooooooo. Gavin make up your mind. I just cant wait till those to get together. It seems every time that they get closer, something pulls them apart (even if it's just by a little bit). But anyway. Wonderful chapters (since I havnt been on in a while to review them). And can't wait till the next one. wewt! =]
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 21:36 PDT
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Hmm, I wonder what is going to happen next. Someone really needs to strap those two into chairs and won't untie them until they work out all their problems and Gavin realizes that Jilli really does want to be with him, forever! Lol.
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 21:20 PDT
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Great chapter! Yeessh....maybe Gavin is coming around after all. I almost read the teaser for the chapter after this not knowing this was posted. Not getting updates from mediaminer yet again. Oh well, your chapters are worth hunting down when the emails don't come =)
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 20:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh.... so everything is looking on the bright side of life. THe only problem is Gavins attitude. But that will probaly change in the next few chapters somewhere.... or mabey not. Thanks for posting your stories so readers like us can view and review.
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Reviewed By: LadyinRed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 19:37 PDT
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missed the answering machine huh... hope its nothing bad. fat chance right lol. How do you update soooo fast!! im home all day with my 2 boys and i just leave my gmail up and you keep popping up! im trying to get my fix before i leave for tampa for a week. ANNIVERSARY!! yay! FREE BABY SITTING!!! Happy Dance! thx for the updates however you do it! cya'll
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:47 PDT
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Oh poor baby I feel so bad for Jilli. But can't what to hear what Gavin has to say for hisself. And Brandon was a big meanie for starting the whole dang thing. Great Chap hope you update soon. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:22 PDT
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Okay, I've started to review now... Ooo, now let's see Gavvie's reason!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a bit, puter of mine was FUBAR for a couple weeks and it still isnt quite right, so Im still trying to play catch-up with everything. Love the story, and almost thought Gavin was gonna give in there with Jilli for a sec on that one chapter, that is till Hank showed up. Great timin there Hank, lol. Think maybe Ive finally caught up here now. I kept wondering what it was that got Gav stuck in the doghouse, interesting. Anyways, great chapter and update when you can.
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 08:19 PDT
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Man Gavin really shot himself in the foot didn't he? These two are on a longer and harder rollercoaster ride than Inuyasha and Kagome were. I feel for them. At least they're figuring it out though. Me, I'm still looking for that perfect someone, and if you weren't taken I'd ask you. Anyways, thanks for the chapters and the PDFs on your website I really enjoy having them to go over again. Ja ne, Crolynx ;p
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2006 06:32 PDT
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I loved this chapter!! I can't wait to read the next so we can see Gavin's reaction to what Jilli told him. I have this suspition that it wasn't a date (although it sounds like Shelly would have liked it to be) but he was her partner in something for school, or he was tutoring her. I hope to be able to red it soon!! Love your work!!
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Title: hehe...oops
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2006 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha me agian..i really meant to give u all 10 out of 10's...so here i go again
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