| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 243 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 23:53 CST
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yay, an update. Boo, Levion Died. Yaaay, Inuyasha's coping with his pain. Boo, it was a cliffy. Yaay, you'll update soon or I'll kill you!!!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 14:20 CST
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well... lets keep these chapters popping
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 10:48 CST
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Great chapter! I'm so glad Inuyasha came back! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 01:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I read all of the chapters today. It's nearly midnight, but I couldn't stop! You are an excellent writer - I hope you are also writing some original works for you most certinally deserve to be a published novelist! I am pretty picky and don't give praise like this lightly. I particularly love the whole "host" idea, along with the losing of the heart. Inuyasha's daughter (as I would guess) is also a brilliant idea. I would like to see more intimate moments between Kagome and Inuyasha and I am hoping against hope that Kikyo does NOT come back - can't STAND her!! Thank you so much for writing and sharing this - I am very much looking forward to more!
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Title: suspense
Reviewed By: silver_angel_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 23:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i wanna know what's gonna happen!!! who is the mysterious little girl? gawd, this is so suspenseful!!! you've got a GREAT sotry on your hands and my gosh i can't wait. ^^
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I hope that Inuyasha and Kagome can finally figure out their problems! I can't wait to see if Inuyasha finally talks about the girl in the picture!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update it again before x-mas.!!!!! i love this story !!!! it is so good!!!!!! please continue iT!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 16:42 CST
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can't wait till you regurgitate another chapter
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Reviewed By: elemental66 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 14:44 CST
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i luv this story please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Emerald of My Heart On: December 11, 2006 14:41 CST
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Rawr! More cliffy's. This is really a wonderful story. I think the silver haired girl is Inu's daughter with Kikyo as well. Makes a little sense I suppose. Wah where on Earth is he? Update soon!!! 10/10
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 08:48 CST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 23:32 CST
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Sniff,sniff, now see what you made me do. Geez where the hell is Inuyasha when you need him and that silver haired girl is his daughter with Kikyo isn't she. I wonder why she's decided to help out Kagome? When will Kagome get all the info she needs to help Inu, he needs her just as much as she needs him. Can't wait for the next chapter this one took to long to come in (smile).
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its good to read this and its good you updated. You I kinda knew the power was from the hearts but not from the people though. Really hope that Inuyasha cames back soon 'cause I'm starting to miss him. Well hope you update soo and keep up with giving us the goods.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad we got to see some more of Kagome's power this time! Usually when she's with other people she's made out to be weak, but now she's really starting to come out of her shell. I hope Inuyasha comes back soon...I miss his wittiness!! ^_^ I am also really starting to wondering who this silver headed little girl is?!?! I thought it was really neat how you put Yura of the hair in here too!! Very creative! ^__^ Please don't wait too long to update because this is a really good story. Keep up the good work because I'll be waiting for more!!
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Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 11:40 CST
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yay an update! Love the chapter! ugh! you ended it now I must wait.
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