| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Title: Purity 7
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Sueric, you truly have the most wonderous, delicate touch. The way you weave your spell of words gently brings your readers into your world, and allows us to see your vision of this story. This chapter made me relive my first kiss, and the butterflys I felt when I experienced it. I love warm fuzzys, they make me feel wonderful, and that's the feeling I get when I read your stories. thanks.
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!! that was sooo sweet!!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sa On: April 24, 2007 18:19 EDT
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Waaa I love this chapter it was so sweet.....ohhhh
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Reviewed By: kds 1222 On: April 24, 2007 17:04 EDT
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YAAAAAY. The first official kiss!!! The scene couldn't have been more perfect. *bawls for joy*
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 16:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dancing AND a New Year's kiss!!! Loved it! Can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: evloner On: April 20, 2007 02:29 EDT
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That was great and I loved how you wove gunner into the story.
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay,this chapter was the bomb! I toatally love all your work, i'm so proud of Dr. G! I agree with Bitty, that it is just a matter of time for them. I'm worried that Gunner is going to find the truth and mess up everything that Bitty has accomplished, I really hope he doesen't. But I know that no matter what Gunner does, that Bitty is going to stay with Dr. G no matter what! Well that's enough of me babbling and i hope you update soon...Oh Yea Geusss what today is my Mommys Bithday!!!! hope ya have a great day!
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 14:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter. This one brought tears to my eyes. Thanks for such a wonderful chapter on such a gloomy day!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, so the gift was a puppy!! That's so adorable!!! I absolutely love Evan sooo much. I can't believe he got Cain a present like that! (well actually I can) ~LOL~ Gin is even funnier. She has no idea about the real world! How are those two even related? Keep up the awesome work. Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 17, 2007 21:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do so enjoy all of your chapters very much. Griffin is finally giving in to a little more display of affection. He has been a super hard nut to crack for Isabelle. I hope Gunnar doesn't ruin everything. I know, . . . we got to have angst to make the story more interesting. I have just been so hoping that Isabelle and Griffin will finally get close in some way. The carving is definitely the sign of a sensitive nature. I enjoyed that part of the story alot. Keep up the beautiful work. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 21:30 EDT
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Even if a person tries to lie about their emotions, the arts cannot lie. Writing for example, the words are not nessissarily important themselves, but the emotions evoked by those words are what are truly important. The same thing applies to music and the tactile arts as well. As always, keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 19:21 EDT
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Aw, I think Isabelle knows Griffin made the puppy! That's so sweet!!!!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 18:58 EDT
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awwww.....im soooo ready 4 them to fall in love already! i love this story!!!!! update soon : )
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 18:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter!!! But I have to send out a warning to Gunner, he better back off, he's starting to grate on my very last nerve with all his snooping!! (I still find him totally intriguing, though)
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 18:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWwwwwwwww that was so romantic...please update...cant wait for the nagst to start
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