| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 23:51 EDT
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hey its me again sorry for bothering you but u but i had a dream and i was looking for the chapter when toga and serria had got in a argument and toga said somthing about this toga and serria said this serria and the ryo busted out laughing can u tell me in which purity it is in and what chapther because i cant find it thank you and hope you hav a good day or night depending on whenever you get this
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 22:46 EDT
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lol my bad srry i read it rong u kno i think it would be better i keep my mouth closed srry again ur a great writter and i love your work
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Reviewed By: inugurl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 14:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please right more soon. I love all the purities and can not get enough of them. I think i read all of them 2 to 3 times.
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Reviewed By: ColShaLin(notsignedin) On: April 14, 2007 12:11 EDT
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I rarely have time to comment anymore, but I just wanted to let you know I have SO enjoyed your whole Purity series, and I always get excited when I see a chapter announcement in my email. Keep up the great work! I am enjoying reading about Christmas in April. (Especially since it is supposed to snow here in Indy again today!)
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 18:27 EDT
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hey you are doing a great job but i have a question if gin is married to cain and belle is married to kich wouldnt gin be belle's sister in law/step mom so wouldnt that make gin, bitty belle's aunt/step grandmother insted of cousin because in Procrastination you said . 'Her cousinâ€"or aunt, depending on who one asked' in the 28th paragraph
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 13:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww...that was sweet! now all he has to do is give her her other present. i think she'll really like it. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 12:54 EDT
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I wonder how long it's going to take for Izzie to find out about the other gift for her that was 'mysteriously hidden' under the curtains? I highly doubt that Grif's going to point it out to her... Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: terpsichore44 On: April 12, 2007 23:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry! I'll keep that in mind for the future I guess? In case you do still have some questions, my email is jenn44@sbcglobal.net . I'm happy to help :)
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 10:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!! Griffin should have known that he didn't have anything to worry about!! Does he give her his other present? Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 09:16 EDT
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This chapter was so cute! I love it! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: seme-_-uke On: April 12, 2007 01:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO GRIFFIN...he is such a romantic...I want to know whats in the present...please update
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 20:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice seeing them become so close, too bad that they're going to have to go through some tough times soon, which sucks. But this was great, really, it was amazing!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 18:16 EDT
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Grumpy old bear fits him lol; but in a cute way! I think Isabelle loved the holiday because she was with him lol.
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Title: Christmas
Reviewed By: FrisyPixie777 On: April 11, 2007 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a cute chapter Sue! Griffin seemed so embarresed about the gift but I knew that Isabelle would love the braclet. I'll be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: evloner On: April 11, 2007 17:04 EDT
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This is a very nicely written chapter. I was wondering what happened to that necklace, I'm glad Bell got to receive it. You are doing a great job at setting the stage for their burgeoning romance. It's sweet to watch how Griffin is slowing acquiescing to his feeling for Bell. Being alone for so long and feeling that you don't need nor deserve the comfort of another person is heart breaking. Giving into his feeling for Bell must be extremely difficult for him. Great job. Update soon.
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