| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: kds 1222 On: April 11, 2007 16:34 EDT
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Christmas is the best! Griffin smiling = most definite heart failure. Loved it!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 15:52 EDT
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Agh now I'm impatiently waiting LOL I want to know what G made...agh!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 14:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's the best birthday present. :) I can't wait to see what G carved for her!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 21:01 EDT
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Sometimes I worry about Griffin, but to know that he's finally realizing that there's something there, that's special. I just hope that he realizes what that special thing is before it's too late and she has to leave back to Japan or something. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 08:51 EDT
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Moriko-Demon On: April 05, 2007 16:46 EDT
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Griffin really is a loveable bear. Haha. I enjoy your stories so much! Keep writing, and I hope the finger is healing good. ^^ I adore Bellaniece.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I just love Belle...she's sooo funny!!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! I hope your finger feels better soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 12:05 EDT
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awwww... sweet... maybe he should just carve something for her.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: April 03, 2007 23:08 EDT
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Very nice. Griffin is slowing admitting his feelings for Bell. Thanks for updating so soon, I didn't expect this chapter since you only have one good hand at the monent. It was a nice suprise, I hope you feel better.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 03, 2007 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh! You can not lie to Mama. Mama's always know about their children. Isabelle's got the fever now on solving or finishing the research. I have wondered if Griffin might have been a pawn in that past research. Not enough clues in that area yet for me to tell. I am glad that Isabelle decided to spend Christmas with Griffin. The development of their intimacy has been beautiful and touching. (My favorite parts.) It was definitely too soon to throw him under the bus with her family (especially Mom with little inhibitions.) I imagine Griffin like a deer in the headlights in the midst of Isabelle's strong charactered family members. That will be an interesting possibility for future writing thoughts. Neh? Thanky thanky for sharing so quick this week. Cynbad146
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Title: Very Happy
Reviewed By: theundefeatablemj [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm sorry this won't be very constructive; I just wanted to let you know that getting an email notifying me that you had updated this story brightened a very crappy day!! I began reading this series some time ago but this and that I wasn't able to catch up. I am sad that I won't be able to read through this story like the others but instead I must wait like everyone else...sigh. Lots of Love~MJ
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 18:25 EDT
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Aww, poor Griffin; he doesn't know what to get Isabelle. Ahaha, I just love Bellaniece; bombarding Bitty Belle with questions lol. Great chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: krazee-mad On: April 03, 2007 18:24 EDT
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only evil people stop the chapter before christmas while writing fanfictions.
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 17:07 EDT
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Agh, you've done it again! LOL Your story has got me hooked. I always look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: terpsichore44 On: April 03, 2007 16:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey... loving your fanfics as always!!!! :) I just thought I would drop you a quick note to say that a genome refers to the entire collection of genes an organism possesses in its DNA (such as the Human Genome or the the Drosophila Fruit Fly Genome, both of which have been sequenced). Thus Isabelle talking about the "transformation genome" doesn't really make much sense. I think the word you're looking for is gene, which controls the production of a protein (which is then expressed in some way such as eye color, blood type, etc). I'm not in any way criticizing the story, just trying to iron out a little kink I guess. Looking forward to more!!!
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