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Reviewed By: seme-_-uke On: April 03, 2007 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww that was so romantic...GO GRIFFIN...any drama going to start soon with the bad guys??? dun dun DUN...Update soon...*bows*
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 15:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, he's realizing that she's his mate!! I'm so happy for them. I don't know if it was suppose to come across like this, or if I'm just reading too much into things, but Bellianeace (sp) seems to have something on her mind, what it it? Awesome job, by the way and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: March 30, 2007 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Enjoyed every word. I was wondering if Jezebel might find the bracelet before the end of the chapter. Hopefully, she will find it before Griffin takes it back. Thank you ever so much for sharing, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 18:24 EDT
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Aww, those poor fishies! Lol. Although, that would be pretty funny to see lol. Hmm...and when will Isabelle show Griffin how much of a gift he is to her? Lol.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...that was so romantic...GO GRIFFIN...cant wait for the drama to start...PLEASE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*greatful sigh* As always, love the story and the way you write it. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: elvina On: March 29, 2007 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is it each time I stumble upon one of your fanfics I stalk them for days waiting for new updates? I absolutly love your work. Very sweet chapter, can't wait to see how Griffin will pull himself out of the stocking thing. Sad to hear about your finger, hope it gets better soon lots of hugs from elvinah
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 15:05 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! Cain and Gin are sooo cute together!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the awesome work!! ^_^
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Title: Simonkal of Inuy
Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesomely done. I could actually visualiz sydnie on top of the fish tank. That was brilliant!! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2007 13:34 EDT
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Great chapter! I liked that Gin, Cain, and Bas were in this chapter. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 00:26 EDT
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I've heard of a lot of hiccup remedies (mine is meditative breathing), but the kiss is something that I haven't heard of before. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: March 26, 2007 22:26 EDT
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aww, you broke your finger?? dang. i've been there. the drugs dont help for some reason... lol. great chapter! ;)
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Reviewed By: yuki_chan_89 (not signed in) On: March 23, 2007 23:05 EDT
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As always you manage to make us smile with the brilliance of your ideas. I am very sorry to hear about the broken finger, that really is unfortunate. I hope you get well soon...and don't have to take too many painkillers. :P The story is wonderful as usual. We wait as patiently as possible considering the addictiveness of your writing for the following chapters. Don't listen to flames at all, they're just written by sad, lonely people who have nothing better to do with their lives than make other people feel bad. You are a wonderful author. Thanks for another great chapter, chao!
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Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luvving this story so far! So you broke your finger? nasty. I broke my ankle and this is the first time in weeks i've been able to get to the computer... lol at least you have nine spare fingers, i only have one spare leg. I really like how this is shaping up... i really like Gunnar, so i'm looking forward to Purity 12... And, out of interest, because this idea's been niggling at me, I know that youkai that are a few centuries old tend to change their names a bit. Was Griffin's name ever Kioshi? I'm probably wrong, but whatever. Good luck with the stories. I had a fanfic on here a while back, but i pulled it and changed account because i got a lot of hurtful reviews. I know i'm not a brilliant writer, but some people were really brutal. I hope you don't suffer from this too much, but if you do, don't give up. Some people don't know good stuff when they read it, and loads of us love you. Hugs, and get well soon!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 23, 2007 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just the right amount of humor; just the right amount of seriousness; and just the right amount of feelings. I really loved this chapter, it was so touching. You could not have done better with that first kiss. Again, loved it. Cynbad146
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