| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
they kissed!!!!! i hope ur finger gets better:) update soon!
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Reviewed By: krazee-mad On: March 22, 2007 17:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
niiiiiice. kissy time!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 22, 2007 03:01 EDT
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great chapter! who knew hiccups could be so entertaining? so cute at the end!
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Title: Too Cute!
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 23:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know if I've ever said this, but hands down the BEST chapter I have read in the Purity Universe. Great Job, Sueric! How'd you break your finger? Hope it heals soon!
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Title: Evloner
Reviewed By: evlonerhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 20:57 EDT
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That was so sweet! I just loved the hiccup cure. Sorry about the finger I hope you get better soon.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 16:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you are very aware by now, I love this and all your Purity stories. But may favorite part in all the stories is the final thought. I love that! Always leaves me chuckling or like dag man. I really enjoy your fics and I always tell people if they want a good one read anything by you.
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Title: wheee!
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You broke your finger! That's like breaking a toe for a ballet dancer! As always, I loved the new chapter. The kiss! The first kiss!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 14:37 EDT
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Hmm....so Bitty Belle finally got a kiss out of him, kinda lol. Too bad it was part of her home remedies lol.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 13:08 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I loved when Bitty and Griffin compared their feet!!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Hopefully, there will be tons more kissing!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: March 21, 2007 10:21 EDT
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Has this been a hard story to write? This one seems like it is going slower than the other stories. Or maybe life has gotten busier. The first kiss. I am going to call it a quasi-kiss because it was a cure and not a kiss of emotions. When Griffin does kiss her on his own I think the fireworks will explode. We still haven't had Christmas with them yet either have we?
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 10:21 EDT
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Great chapter! I love all the hiccup remedies. And the kiss, loved it! So cute! Please update asap.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inu On: March 21, 2007 10:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sometimes when I read your chapters, I have to wonder, 'Where did she come up with this idea?' Do you use things that happen with in your household? Or do you just have a damn good imagination? I myself would have never thought to use Hiccups as a way for them to kiss for the first time. It was actually innocent, sweet, and brilliant!! Griffin and Izzy are seriously and adorable couple, almost as adorable as Cain and Gin. I really like them, and I'm still hoping that things work out for the best. Great job as always and it really suck to hear that you broke a finger. Yeah, that really...really sucks!!
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 09:57 EDT
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The sweetest first kiss you ever wrote. Beautiful! I love Griffin. Hug from Brazil
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Reviewed By: nekosan On: March 16, 2007 20:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: March 16, 2007 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter. Please update soon.
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