| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter! I love how Maria thinks that Bitty is fat and has big feet!! (LOL) Griffin should watch what he says around his overprotective "parents". Jewelry huh...I can't wait to see what kind he gets her. Update soon please because I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 19:50 EST
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love the chapter and cant wait for the next one!! (the rest of my review never posted) WHHAAT!!! im soo confused...
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Title: aww
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 19:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that is soooo KAWAIIIIII!!!!! he wants to buy her a gift awww hahaha >_< soorry im in a weird mood right now...lol but as always
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 18:27 EST
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whoa can't wait to see what Griffen ends up buying heehee
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Title: Me too!
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 17:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's my birthday too, and I was so thrilled to get more "Avouchment"! And now the rest of the story is coming back to the surface again! Yeah! Griffin is entirely too cute, especially for an "old" youkai! Always looking forward to more! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Midnight Riddle On: March 05, 2007 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
My birthday happens to be today, and to come home and have a new chapter of this story uploaded was the best birthday present. Keep up with great work!
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Reviewed By: sunshine161820 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 22:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice chappy! i'm ready for griffin to realize he loves isabella and act on his feeling! i love this story thou. update soon!!
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Title: Bad puppy! LOL
Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 13:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea just like a pup. But I think its adorable that she cares enough to want him to experience the things shes had growing up, family, friends, unconditional love and happiness. Thats the work of a true friend well in her case maybe just maybe more lol
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: February 28, 2007 13:16 EST
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adorable! and also: richard dean anderson is still hot. ;)
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 18:34 EST
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Aren't loopholes fun? He didn't really have the chance at having a 'youth' (as far as we know), so Isabelle's giving him a taste of it now. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: fan4ever On: February 27, 2007 15:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
let me just say that i look forward to each chapter of avouchment and have yet to be disappointed by any of them... keep up the great work :) i just wish griffin could once and for all accept the fact that isabelle doesn't see him as a monster; he would be so much better off IMO.. but i'll leave that up to you to work out ;) p.s. i love the titles of the chapters! they fit with the plot but are just so sweet by themselves, as well
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe (nsi) On: February 27, 2007 12:24 EST
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I will take unbetaed chapters from you any time. There was anything screaming FIX ME!!! This seems like this is going to be a long story. With as shy and subborn as Griffin is it seems like it will be more chapters before the first kiss.
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Reviewed By: jable69 On: February 26, 2007 23:51 EST
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your updates remind me of x-mas, i check my e-mail everyday for a notification like people watch the calender. then its really awesome but then its over lol, anyways keep up the good work. (guess im back to waiting till next x-mas...i mean update)
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Title: ch 28
Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: February 26, 2007 23:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raindrops On Roses . . . hmmmm . . . intersting chapter title. It confused me a little til I thought about the chapter. A number of soft touching moments and thoughts with a beautiful setting. The men's underwear on Jilli scene gave me good laugh. Seems like they would be so big that they might be pretty airy. Then I thought again; hey, loose is comfy. I was glad to see your update. Thank you, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: bringer_of_the_sun On: February 26, 2007 21:18 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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OMG! I really love your portrayal of Griffin. He's so mature and dark but at the same time adorably naive. I love the christmas pecans scene. You really take the time to develope your character and each one is so unique! Your purity series could generate its own realm of fanfiction, if you don't mind me saying. I know you have your own plans for your character and I wouldn't dream of interfering in any way, but it's so darn tempting to write a fanfiction based on your series. I
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