| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 09:30 EST
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You just can't help yourself, can you? You're torturing us with your little clues of what happened to Griffin. When are we going to hear the whole story? I can't take the suspense! ::Lol:: You know I love your stories. Please, just hurry with the rest of the chapters. I really can't wait to see this story play itself out, especially now that Griffin has admitted to himself his dependence on Isabelle. As always, great writing, great story - you're an amazing author.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 08:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your work. You create such believable and heartfelt chracters and you have weaved them into a universe completly there own. Thank you for sharing your stories. I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 23:48 EST
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He's never had ice cream talk about hibernating! LOL Another great chap Sue, waiting for the next
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 04:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh boy that wasintense a the end and cute...yup just awfully cute...cant wai till the suspense of the notebook theif comes up and tries to harm Isabelle...KICK HIS BUT GRIFFIN...cant wait for the update...thanks
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Title: That is so cool!
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is the wierdest thing! happy birthday to your brother. lol. two aquarians in the world make life so much more interesting. hope you and your brother are blessed with many more birthdays. GREAT CHAPTER... WRTIE MORE!
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Reviewed By: charity- nicole On: January 17, 2007 21:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its cute how their oh-so-totally-date was an oh-so-totally-not-a-date ... at least to Griffin... lol.. that was cute and very touching and ... kissy kissy... lol... keep up the good work.!!!!
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Title: ~Silver Bells and Mistletoe~
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 20:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked how Isabelle had kissed Griffin on the cheek and how she got him to eat ice cream for the first time. He even came back for seconds. I still don't feel the closeness between them yet but that will come in time. Great chapter and teaser! Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:03 EST
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Griffin, stop living in denial, it's a date! Lol. That chapter was cute; everyone knows it's a date and he just refuses to believe it lol. Haha, Isabelle is right when she said it's never too cold to eat ice cream; it's still delicious, even in the middle of winter lol.
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Reviewed By: Lianne On: January 17, 2007 18:38 EST
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OOOO...loved the 'date' haha. Nice chapter, and i can't wait to see what happens next ^_^
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Reviewed By: evloner On: January 17, 2007 18:14 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story, but I have to comment on Griffit's way of speaking to Isabelle. He's very cruel when he speaks to her-calling her fat ass and such. I know she's not offended but to be call such names in public, well let's say that I would be pissed to say the least. I know this charater must be capable of expressing loving feelings even if he's abit confussed right. Part of me believes that Isabelle is so blinded by love she doesn't care how Griffit speaks to her as long as she gets to be in his presence. Please don't take this as a flame. I love this story and I'm one of your biggest fans. I'm not asking you to change a thing about this story because I'm sure you have a fantastic ending planned. So if Griffit and Isabelle do get together he has some serious over time to do in the romance department. :)smile
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 15:51 EST
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Great chapter. I'm just now getting around to reading all of the sequels to Purity, which by the way, is one of my favorite fanfics out there :) Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 15:18 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Poor Griffin, I'm suprised he hasn't died of embarrasment yet!! LOL Update soon please because I can't wait for more!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 12:14 EST
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yeah you keep telling yourself that, Griffin. It was a date. I am now hearing Little Mermaid's Go on and Kiss the Girl when reading this story.
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Reviewed By: Rawben... On: January 17, 2007 11:35 EST
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i love that griffin has an obsession with her ass. lol!! i bet that ice cream guy thought he was insane. ;)
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 10:41 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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