"Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 12:42 EST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter. I loved the interaction between Bitty, Griffin, and the children! I can't wait to see what happens next, so update soon please!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 12:02 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm on my way out the door, but I just wanted to say thanks for making my day. I absolutly loved the new chapter, but then I love all you work, don't it?
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Reviewed By: Perrin33 On: January 30, 2007 10:34 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great Chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 26, 2007 00:26 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You know, I thought this was an exceptionally beautiful chapter. The last part, where Griffin begins to give into his feelings for Isabelle, was so softly descriptive and touching. I was very, very impressed. It made my heart go KA-THUMP quite a few times. I can not wait to read what Isabelle might feel. The "legend" thing is very original and adds alot to the story. Also, Gunnar definitely acted like a young cocky version of Sesshoumaru in some of his words and mannerisms. The "narrowed eyes" was perfect. Though, judging from the bedroom scene, I am not sure he has inherited his grandfather's class. I figure that you want us to see that he has some cold hardness to his character even though he is young. How old is he supposed to be? Thanks! Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 21:03 EST Comment/Review: De Nile is a river in Egypt, Griffin. I thought you would know that by now with how old you are! Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: evloner On: January 24, 2007 21:30 EST Comment/Review: Oh my god! I feel so honored that you took the time to answer my comment. Wow!! I'd didn't think that I could hold you in any higher esteem, or look at you with greater respect, but by just acknowledging that you read my comments made me feel so special. Great chapter and Griffin was very sweet. Hopefully Griffin won't wait until Isabelle is asleep to express his feelings.
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Title: Incandescence Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 01:10 EST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW!!! I really love the words that were used in the last chapter. Griffin finally realizes that he doesn't want to be alone anymore. I can't wait until the fluff. Great update and teaser! Take care.
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Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 00:23 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Beautiful chapter. It really touched me. It's nice to see that Griffin has accepted the inevitable. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: jable [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 23:27 EST Comment/Review: wahhhhh, nooo didn't think that id ever catch up. i started reading purity 1 about 3 weeks ago and was reading like 10-25 chaps a day (yeah i didnt learn anything in school the last month lol) its gonna be hard to just read a chappy every few days, i might have to start paying attention in class agian!!! ahhhhh!, well at least i wont get my axim taken away all the time now. anyways great job, your my favorite author prolly of anything i read, right up with gary pulsan and tom clancy
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Reviewed By: charity- nicole On: January 23, 2007 20:34 EST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWWWWWWW!!!! it's sooo cute!!! man , i wish half the guys who hit on me were like that... no.. they are just all " hey mama , wanna holla at a pimp?" stupid!! lol but yeah.. keep up the good work!!! loved this chgappie!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 17:56 EST Comment/Review: Please tell me she heard him say that! That was so sweet! I just want to give the bear a hug now lol.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:41 EST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great chapter....I started crying by the end of it! lol I always love the scenes between Gunnar and Myrna! I think they would make an adorable couple!! I'm glad that Griffin is finally starting to see that he and Bitty can be mates...then maybe we will finally see what haunts his nightmares pretty soon. I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 16:25 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW! thats all I cam really say. It took him long enough to break down and now that he did WOW!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 10:07 EST Comment/Review: Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 09:48 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love Griffin's attitude. To me it comes across as brash, but loving, and I find the whole Jezebel and fat ass thing just too endearing. Anyway great job once again, and it's good to see him accepting the fact that she is his mate. I love Girffin so much, he's just adorable, but I'm absolutely in love with Gunnar!!
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