| "Purity 7: Avouchment" Reviews/Comments [ 891 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 14:12 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't believe Avis is dead. I wonder what's going to happen now?!?! I thought Griffin and Bitty had perfect chemistry in this chapter. I am really starting to wonder how Griffin got all of those nasty scars!!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 13:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems like things are about to get thick. I can't believe Eaton killed Avis, well yeah, I can believe it, but damn, when Bas and the rest of them find out about this, things are going to hit the roof. I'm wondering, when Eaton finds out that bitty has the docs, will Griffin be able to protect her and move accordingly with all the build up of scars and such. I hope so, I really do. You know Sue, I really love this couple, I do. Great work!!
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Title: *crys with happiness*
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now look, you've gone and made me cry. Thank you for posting this chapter... heck, ANY chapter! *sniffles* I love reading your work. I always knew Dr. Avis was working under someone else... he just couldn't have been the Big Baddie, as I call them. Damn, crying at work is never productive.
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Reviewed By: evloner On: February 12, 2007 11:07 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. That was so cute how griffit blamed the dog for eating the garland. I got a good laugh out of that scene.
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Reviewed By: Ookami_Mononoke On: February 12, 2007 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Agh! I totally love this story, but I keep getting all twitchy for an update! Great job on all of your Purity works though, they're fantastic. *twitch* Gaah! There it goes again!!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry for no review been reading way way to many Naruto fanfiction. Hey your writing is as good as ever mabye a tad better only on chap 14 now but plan to read the rest soon. Such a good job.
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 20:42 EST
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oh my gosh.... I've FINALLY caught up!!!!! i just have to say, i love your stories so much!! the characters are all so real and I can really picture them in my mind! i love stories that are vivid enough for it to seem like you're actually there with the characters, and you stories do that!! anyways, keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more!! =]
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Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 21:49 EST
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It's just cute to see that Griffin vounteers with the children. But I thought she at least suspected it when he brought in that boy with the broken arm that one time? I guess hearing about it and seeing it are two different things. Keep up the good work, dark
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: January 30, 2007 23:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Relationship changes involving night visits, sexy bathroom shaving camraderie, "mornin' lovins," and crafts with Griffin and the preschoolers. How smoothly you moved from one subject to the next. It was great and heartwarming. Fluff extrodinaire indeed! We all need a shot occasionally. Thanks! Cynbad146
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Title: awww
Reviewed By: yasha _luver602 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 23:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED this chapter...griffin and kids..too perfect and "cheating on me" haha...hilarious...anyways wanted to say great chapter and cant wait for the superbowl one!!!
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 19:34 EST
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I read chapter 25 and it struck me that I don't know Gunner's real name, Mamoruzen mean????help??? Anyway, excellent chapter. Can't wait for the one shot..Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 17:28 EST
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"I thought about making a huge-ass cake and having Mama pop out of it, but you know, Cain's old . . . he'd probably have a heart attack and die which would make Bubby tai-youkai, and he's already insufferable enough without adding that to the equation . . ." LMAO!!!! Oh my gosh, I just love Evan, that was just too good! Hmm....I wonder if he's really going to do that though, that would be a sight to see lol. Aww, I kinda knew that it was the children coming to his house. That little girl seems so cute!!!! Hmm...and Superbowl Sunday one-shot! Yes! Gives me something to do other than watch football lol, not my best sport to watch lol.
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Reviewed By: bert_6 On: January 30, 2007 17:00 EST
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wow that was a really sweet chap with all the kids and chirstmas coming up!! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This si driving me crazy. But I shall remain patient. I have to know what is going on with Dr. Avis and the research. If he hurts Jilli then I feel bad for him when Cain and Gavin gets through with him. I also can wait to find out what in the world is up with Griffin.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 12:48 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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