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Title: Ch 1-3
Reviewed By: lavie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 00:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
It's pretty good/funny, though I did skim/skip some parts, like the beginning. Please identify whose point of view you are writing from or who you are writing about immediately, as I would more likely read what you've written. Btw, "base guitar" is spelt "bass". u don't need to capitalise the 'y' in Inuyasha; & why'd you make Kouga's hair brown instead of black (not that it matters). Also, wonder what scar(s) Kagome has. Tonikaku, looking fwd 2 the next chapter! Ja!
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Title: jtcl
Reviewed By: not log in On: July 22, 2006 16:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story I think is good I hope you up date soon on it
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this, I really do. Its a bit dark and ruley but I like what you've done thus far. Love how you've made the characters. And maybe Inu is a bit OOC, but I like him as you have him. Being this is an AU you can take it and make it any way you want it. That's one thing I love bout AU fics. Good piece ya got goin here and cant wait to see where you take them all. Update when you can. :D
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