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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 19:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup! ...its gonna take a miracle...lol :D Great chappie....update when you can. :D
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: monk-miko On: September 15, 2006 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just getting to good. Man I can't believe Inuyasha fell for Kouga's trick. This chapter was the best. Knowing Inuyasha he is going to ask Kouga about the charity thing. Inuyasha needs to use some common sense sometimes. Though Kouga does have a good plan. Just hope that Inuyasha doesn't bring Kagome into anything that will hurt her. She has been into just as much as Inuyasha. Though I do wonder who is upstairs at Sesshomaru's mansion that Inuyasha is to scared to see. I just hope that Kagome gets Inuyasha out of whatever he has gotten himself into. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I hope that Inuyasha will let Kagome help him. That's all that she wants to do. Please write another chapter soon. I have been waiting for this chapter for a while now. I'll be waiting for it. Don't let me down. LOL!!!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 16:25 EDT
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i adore this story. the music is great (and yep, if i don't have it, i find it and listen to it while the chapter is going on) and the characters are intense. i think that the group does have to watch with kagome. she's strong. but she may sacrifice herself for inuyasha without realizing she's losing herself. to have someone that is so lost inside themselves it only seems right that the one to help would have to become a little bit lost too. at least he seems ready to try and give kagome a chance to be his friend. to be comfortable with him. i just can't bring myself to trust hojo. he seems so concerned with what is right and what would be best for kagome that he's failing to see what she wants out of life. i always look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: saltandvinegar On: September 11, 2006 00:22 EDT
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question, if they're in japan why do they practice christianity?
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Title: future author
Reviewed By: Tiffani On: September 09, 2006 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that i really love this story. I know a lot of people don't review your story, but i know everyone who ever clicked on it loved it. So now there is a second person in the band who knows what happened to Kagome. My brain is coming to the conclusion that the person that Kohaku drew might just be Sango. Just a thought, but maybe if he ever saw her all his memories would come back or atleast he'll gain some. Anyway, I'm just blabbering. I really really really absolutely love your story and I can't wait to see what happens next. So update soon and keep up the good writing.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 19:52 EDT
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This story is so amazing! Very well written and intriguing!! Please update again soon... can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 18:43 EDT
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really good chapter..showed another side of kohaku and yay does this mean happyness bout to come to him and sango? can't wait for future inuyasha and kagome sparkage and drama!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 16:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stayed up all night reading every chpter great facfic pleaze up date soon damn that damn ass inuyasha gets on ma nerves
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: September 09, 2006 14:54 EDT
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i love this story. the songs you choose reflect the characters and their tumoils and accomplishments so well. it seems that everyone around inuyasha is finding out about the kagome inside now if only inuyasha will take the time to look. he knows how his friends are and if they are willing to look deeper into the girl then maybe he'll take the chance too. i wonder what kagome sees when she looks at hojo? she sees the pain and confusion inside inuyasha so does she see the selfishness inside hojo? i look forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: lilaznqutgrl On: September 09, 2006 11:18 EDT
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Hey, this was a good filler chapter. My only problem with it was that you spelled Kohaku wrong.
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 02:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This was a good chapter, even if it was a filler. I really, really like your story, and I'm honestly surprised you haven't gotten more reviews. Your story delves into a side of religion that lets people think about it, while not being in it. Does that make sense? Heh, sorry if it doesn't. To me, music is or can be a form of therapy, whether you play or simply love listening to it. Your doing a great job writing this story, and I can't wait to read more of what's to come. ;-)
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 01:48 EDT
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Hmm what is Inuyaha thinking? Update soon!!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 22:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the chapter was excellent at showing more into the lives of those at Shikon House. I was wondering bout Kohaku and a few others. But you did a wonderful job in explaining some of their background. This is one of those rare stories out there that you can get completely lost in. and you're right: alittle praise does help. :D
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 21:16 EDT
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Just got done reading your newest chapter. I had somewhat wondered when you would get into Kohaku's story, and behold, you have. In this story is he Sango's little brother? If so, and if he says he remembers her face and looks for her in a crowd, and if he was at the party last night, didn't he recognize Sango from the band? Whew, that was a lot of what if's, huh? I am glad that Kouga has developed a brotherly feeling of protectiveness for Kagome, but I wonder that any plan that he may have for her and Inu may backfire. Inuyasha seems like the kind to do just the opposite of what someone would want him to do. As a final comment, the sections of non-song text between the sections of song text are also italicised. I don't know if that was your intent, but it is somewhat distracting to the reader. The italics seem to serve no purpose. Caitriona @ juno
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 08, 2006 13:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just finished chapter 11 of your rather interesting story and I must say, good job. When I first saw it I thought that it would be a very different thing than I received when I actually started reading it. The first chapter where you give the background information on the 'world' is rather heartbreaking, frightening, and gloomy. It made me think for a while about the state of politics today. The only question that I really had about it was questions about the language barrier. How can there be a 'singoff' etc when the people of the country don't even speak the language? Perhaps I misunderstood - so I went on and ignored that issue. Moving on to characterization - I think that you have done a great job with all fo the characters. Each of them seems to be well rounded and fleshed out. You have done a great job letting each of them have a face that they show to their friend and the outside world, but within and to certain people they are different. I was especially impressed with Kouga in some of his later chapters. He exudes tough guy and male, but when he is talking with Ayame one gets the sense of sadness and grief over his past. Then when he interacts again with Kagome and the others, the flirting tough guy is back. That shows some really rather strong 'pre-work'. Another thing that shows, at least to me, the excellence of this work is the way you have told us most of the backgrounds of the characters of the story in a way that actually futhers the personal relationships between them. The conversation between Kagome and Miroku where they each display their scars to one another not only gives the reader some backstory, but it also shows the depening bond of friendship between the two. Each of the band members have told highlights of Inuyasha's story (even Sess leaked his own tidbit) and explained very well why they would continue to be with him in this harsh world. He helped each and every one of them with their dreams. Inuyasha.....ah, I have a warm spot in my heart for this tortured anti-hero you have drawn here. In many of the Inu!band stories they really try to make a badboy!Inu, but it really doesn't come across. It mainly comes across as a cranky asshole. (kinda like Sess usually comes across as a Vulcan with constipation) But you have developed a fabulous anti-hero and you haven't let the interaction with Kagome immediately change him. That much hurt and pain take a while. Even his brother sees it and can do nothing at all. And on a side note, I do hope that you will be telling us more about exactly WHO or WHAT is upstairs at Sesshoumaru's home, and some more of Inu's backstory. That and how he first hooked up with drugdealer!Kikyou are tidbits that you are dangling above our heads. On a final note, since I am running out of characters to write, one of the things that has been the MOST intrigueing about this piece is how you have integrated Kagome's beliefs and the beliefs of some of the members of the Shikon house into the story line. I was concerned when I read the beginning of the first one that this was going to get preachy...and then it didn't. You included well thought out, logical, non-demoninational arguements. I was shocked. I actually went back and re-read some of it again to be certain that I hadn't just thought I read it. It was integrated well, it did a FABULOUS job of explaining why the characters were certain ways, and was enlightening to the reader at the same time. A piece of fiction that would have been enjoyable already was suddenly projected into excellence. In closing, if you haven't been able to tell so far, I have greatly enjoyed this piece. I look forward to reading further chapters to see where you take us. Thanks very much for writing for us. Caitriona @ juno.com
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