| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved loved loved this chapter. It really felt like I was watching an actual movie play out before me. You, girl, are very descriptive. lol. I loved the song, Breaking Benjamin is one of my favorite bands. I thought it fit perfectly with what the characters in this chap were feeling. So, Yash is finally starting to see the light? Or should I say truth? And wow, what an ending. I so can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad that your break helped you. I truly hope your doing good in your life. Update soon, or whenever you can. I know whatever comes out will be great! ;-) Awesome job, girl! :-)
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Reviewed By: bridezilla1015 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 16:27 EDT
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Yea an update!!! I loved it! The break didn't hurt the story at all. If anything it made me anticipate the next chapter even more. Keep up the good work, girlie!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. Now that Kohaku is known to Sango and the others, I can't wait to see how that plays out. And poor Inuyasha.....he took two really bad emotional hits this time. I just Kagome will hear him out. I'll definitely be looking for the update. EXCELLENT story.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: March 17, 2007 14:07 EDT
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This chapter was worth the wait. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 13:34 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Now that Sango and Inuyasha have seen Kohaku, I wonder what will happen?!? Update soon please because I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: antoinette On: March 13, 2007 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP DAMNABIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 06:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, very detailed!! I give an A+ for content and context!!! This is the second time that I read you story over again. I just love it. I am soo glad that Inuyasha finally knows. The hot passion b/n Kag/Inu is steaming...I hope they get a good juicy scene together ;)!! Anyways, please update soon!! I can't wait for more. Thanks you soo much for the excellent story!
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Reviewed By: Secret35 On: March 10, 2007 19:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is amazing, you have an incrediable talent for writing, it's fantastic, i just finished reading the whole story from where you left off, and it's heart wrenching that you stop at a completly insane cliff hanger, i can't wait until you update, i wonder whats inu's reaction going to be when sango tells him or not. So please, please, please update. p.s i hope that nothing's wrong, since you haven't update in awhile, so have a safe weekend ;) love secret35
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Title: NOW TOUR IN FOR IT
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 16:57 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BE IT KNOWN THROUGH OUT THE LAND YE HAVE OFFENDED THE LORDS OF THE UNDERWORLD, AFTER WAITING SO LONG FOR AN UPDATE THEN TO ONLY RECEIVE A REVISION IS INTOLERABLE!!!! I HAVE RELEASED THE HOUNDS !!!! I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, WHOSE ONLY PURPOSE IS TO DRIVE SLOW UPDATERS AND SHORT CHAPTER WRITERS BACK TO THE COMPUTER TO UPDATE. They are relentless in there attacks they will bark, growl and nip at your ankles until an update is posted!!!! After which they will transform back in to the cute little YORKIES they usually are and want to play with you for a couple of hours before coming home!!!! OLDDOG333
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Reviewed By: Antoinette On: March 07, 2007 23:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Antoinette On: March 07, 2007 20:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HURRY UP AND WRITE U JUST GOT 2 THE GOOD PART!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: MekoSummers [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 16:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Wow. I've been in front of my computer for about twenty-four hours now (shocking I have no life) on and off again due to my family. I have read tons, and tons (enough to sink a curise ship) of InuYasha fanfics. I like them all, but NONE has ever touched me like this - this is a beautiful work of art! (cheesey I know! ^-^) it captures everything, pain, sorrow, happiness, enjoyement ! Every emotion is describe to the fullest extent and InuYasha's struggle is so beautifuly described... It brought a tear to my eyes! Touched really affected me, and made me acutally feel the pain and struggle that InuYasha was feeling while he was singing Chop Suey. I loved and enjoyed the songs you picked for his band to sing (I REALLY liked that you picked my favourite song by Disturbed), your song list is awsome! You put so much emotion into your work is makes the reader feel what the character feel. You captured InuYasha perfectly! Gloriusly! hitting every mark in his personality. Although its very aggrivating, I love! that you haven't had InuYasha and Kagome just jump together, but describe how slowly they will fall for one another, slowly they become each others desires (faster for InuYasha of course). Once again the way you describe the pain, the torment they went through is beautiful. I cried at Chapter 21, and 17 they way they where written made you really, really, really feel! the pain that Sango felt because of her brother was so... intoxicating! and Kagome with the ache of re-entering her shrine was well done. I know the pain of walking into a room that once housed so many memories... (I cried that the fact poor boyu was stuck in the house o.o ) I also noticed that you had Kagome barely give pity but not making her heartless, but no pity in the fact that she could never know how they felt - therefore she had no right to do so, she didn't know their pain. Also the Evanescene Lies scene was ... well I'm speechless about it. I've told a ton of friends (who currently want me to shut up about it) about your fanfiction, as well I loved the way you just wrote and designed the Lies scene, it was... AWSOME! I hope I didn't bore you, but I do realize that I ran around in circles with the topic... but I just wanted you to know how much I love this fanfiction! If i could draw, I'd be drawing millions of scenes from this fic and sending them to you, but since I can't... I really can't. (*laughs*) But just so you know I also enjoyed the fan art you did of your story, the way you described and drew Kagoms scars were well done. I hope that you update soon, I've been lazing infront of this computer for a while now, and I would happily plant myself infront of it once again for another twenty-four hours reading more and more. Congrats on winning in the IYFG (thats were i learned about you anyway, while looking up winners) and I hope that you don't get bored of this review. If you made its this far in reading... wow! I feel sorry for you having to listen to my babble. But anyway! The jist of my review!! Your fic is very inspiring, beautifully written and I cann't await your update so that I can continue to read up on what is going to happen next. The juicy factor of having Sango meet up with Kohaku is interesting and I'm bouncing in my chair with excitement, also Kougas plan for Kagome is going to be fun - but I suspect that you'll keep it a more Kohaku/Sango centered at the moment. Well now I'm offically done! ... since I only have around 400 characters left in this review anyway (*laughs*) All and all! Thank you soo much for writing this story and I paitently await the next installement by my computer ! As well I'll be sure to read your other fics and comment on them. Good-Bye! and enjoy your day. - MekoSummers.
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: JesROCKS908 On: March 02, 2007 10:36 EST
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why haven't you updated, PLEASE DON'T LET IT GO IT'S THE BEST STORY AND ONE OF A KIND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'VE BEEN READING AN WAITING MORE THAN A MONTH NOW....CRIES SO HARD!!!!! ~JES!`
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 23:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: ash00026 On: February 23, 2007 20:17 EST
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this is such a good story update soon
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