| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper (too lazy to login) On: May 31, 2007 18:53 EDT
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Pancakes!! *cough* Sorry, this chapter made me hungry for pancakes... but I do like the rest of the chapter. Especially how Kagome came back and they started having a deep philisophical debate about God. Are those your personal beliefs too, or do you just write it for the story? Anyway, I like them, they're really interesting. Congratulations on being pregnant! Don't eat too much salt though; it's bad for your blood vessels. I'm sure you'll be an awesome mom ^_^
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! Keep up the awesome job. Another great chapter as usual! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 17:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I'm glad that some of the tension is gone between the pair!! No doubt it will be back, but at least it's gone for a little bit!! I can't wait for more, so update soon please!! Keep up the amazing work! ^_^ P.S. Congrats on the baby!!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 17:45 EDT
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OMG Congrats on your surprise...and glad that the move went well...wow...yay 4 u...anyway thanks for updating and I hope you feel up to keep updating...I cant wait for the next chapter and I hope everything goes well with the baby GANBATTE
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Title: Awww
Reviewed By: mai-sama On: May 31, 2007 15:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congratulations of the new baby~!! There alot of fun and im sure that you'll be a great mother! And the new chapter was so sweet! Its good to know that Inuyasha has his head at least so what out of his ass. Cant wait to see what happens next~!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:56 EDT
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First of all Congratulation's on the new addition to your family, babies aren't all that hard, though I have never had one I often have baby sat my nieces and nephews when they were still quite small. Don't worry about the chapter being short it happens to all of us. Just think you could be like me and not updated for about 6 months. I bet all my readers hate me by now. But I have an excuse (well sort of) I'm rewriting it because of all the things that I didn't think of before starting the story. O my I think I started ranting again, sorry about that. Happy writing from the one and only weirdo, Emily.
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Title: Oh Boy
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:31 EDT
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The chapter may have been short, but it was powerful. Don't sell yourself short, I love this fic. Man, I'm still waiting for my heart to slow down.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 13:07 EDT
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woot! Glad to hear that you got here alright! And your preggy!!!! SQUEEEEEEEE! congrats. I feel your pain with the diaper thing, I've not once changed my nieces diaper yet and she is 4 months old xD and I am jsut getting used to the drool and spit up. Do add me on facebook!, actually, I;ll look you up :P since I;ve still got your emails :P take your time with the chapters, your fic is great, so its worth the wait
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 09:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can't even put into words how that chapter made me feel!!! I love how deep u get into them it's just WOW ya know. And here I thought I was the one how could read someone like that (other then my mama that is) Ya know u talk like a friend of mine and he talks like Inu (or Inuyasha talks like him and to add to that they look alike gold eyes but no white hair..at the moment) Do you have yahoo IM? if so email me let me know and I'll send ya mine. You're someone I just have to get to know. Take all the rest u need we can't have ya over doing it now! till next time
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: KagAka )(KagomeAkane)( On: April 30, 2007 11:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness you finally updated!! I was waiting and waitin' for this chapter!Got to say it was an ok ending although I wanted more but hey it's your job to leave us wanting more, so good job! And as for the cat don't listen to cats...they're planing a world take over ^-^ -KagomeAkane
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Title: well worth the wait
Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 13:26 EDT
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now this is what i was waiting for and oddly i'm glad it was sesshomaru who pushed kagome to realize what she was doing. by being so certain that it was her very presence that hurt inuyasha, she ended up on the verge of abandoning him. what he wanted to expect from her. sesshomaru is definetly male in this, and not at all adverse to the fact taht kagome is attractive, bright, and caring but he thinks of his brother first. i get the feeling it's as though he adopted yet another person to protect in kagome. and inuyasha. god that shower scene. he realized that's exactly what kikyou did, rape him. he may use her to get drugs, but when he's in such a condition she takes what she wants from him and leaves him feeing worthless. and he's far from it. i cna't hate the character just yet, not until i know what drives kikyou to live life the way she does. from your descriptions she's attactive but not in the healthiest of shape, boney hips etc. and it's natural that inuyasha is going to push and push hard to keep kagome away. he's ruined, his life is shit (in his opinion) and he'll destroy her in the process of needing her. and i can't think of a better way for those two to come together. both of their stubborn natures are out in the open and now kagome knows that no matter what the boy says (the little boy inside the man) she's not going to leave him to his own devices. because he could hurt himself so much worse without her around. your chapters are always worth the time you put into them!
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 03:35 EDT
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Oh Yay! What a wonderful chapter.. Inuyasha finally caved in a little bit :o). I love how Kagome can figure out all the characters.. except hers and Inuyasha's relationship. Go Sesshoumaru! is all I have to say. :o) Thank you much for the new chapter! I always am super excited to read this chapter. Let me tell ya.. this week was hell, and I am happy to finally relax a little and read a good story. Your update came at the best time! :o) No worries about the upcoming updates.. I know how crazy life can be. I can only hope that I will survive until finals are over. Yuck.. only a few more weeks left. I hope your moving/packing/cleaning goes well.. I have to move out soon too.. I don't want to know how much stuff I've accumulated. Best of luck to your moving! Thanks again for the update!
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Title: OOOOMY
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEA!!!! YASHA WITH THE DAWN COMES THE LIGHT HOPE HE STILL HAS ENOUGH STRENGTH TO HOLD ON!!!! AND IF HE DOESN'T THEN KAGOME WILL HOLD HIM TILL HE DOSE!!!! HAPPY FOR SANGO BUT HOW MUCH WILL KOHAKU REMEMBER!!! As always we await the next update I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 09:19 EDT
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You always know just the write chapters to write. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 21:58 EDT
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Gah! Edit on my last review: I meant chapter 15, w/ the whole bathroom scene between Kagome and Inuyasha and she helps him get over the bad drugs! >.> I don't know why I said chapter 9...
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