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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 10:08 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this story. I'm glad Inuyasha has finally realized that Kagome is suffering too. I wonder what was in the stuff that Kikyo made Hiten give Inuyasha?!? I can't wait to see what happens next, so update soon please!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 07:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Took him long, but hey it has to be the right moment right? And is he still going to his promise to Kagome to go to that charity thing, you if they win that second compatition? Nice song by the why, weird at first but I kinda like it when I listen to it a little more. Anyways, why Inuyasha go to Sango to ask what she know about Kagomeinsteand of going to the said person at the right time? Well hope you update and wish you well. Peace.
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 03:06 EST
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omgosh omgosh! he knows he knows! That scene with Kagome and the ashes, especially Buyo's bell, was so heartbreaking! I'm sooo looking fwd to the next update. I sound like a valley girl in this update, but such a good chapter *woot woot*
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, that chapter was so tantilizing. He's so close to finding something out. I'm glad he had the foresight to go to Sango and find some stuff out rather than making petty assumptions like he seems so fond of doing previously. I'm so eager for the next chappie. That whole Kikyo thing is stressing me out though . . . no good, no good at all. The unknowing exchange between Kagome and Inuyasha at the shrine was really moving though. You set up the scene perfectly. Her silent anguish and his epiphany. The petals detail at the end was beautiful too. I loved the lone petal that touched him; it spoke volumes about their relationship, about what their hearts are yearning for and what she has done for him. Great work. Thanks much, as always!
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Title: Nekoreibaka
Reviewed By: NekoReiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 00:59 EST
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I'm a lil confused. Did Hiten really give Yash the laced stuff, or did he remain loyal to Yash and keep it clean? Or was there a warning in Hiten's words? Rei Nekoreibaka@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 00:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapters. I'm just really catching up with this story again, but your writing is wonderful. Your characters and their relationships are so well-written. And the emotion.....WOW! This is and extremely corny review (and I'm well aware of that, LOL), but I had to say it anyway. I'm also glad that Inuyasha knows a bit more about Kagome's past, and that he cares so much about it that he put off his self-destructive drug stupor until he could find out more information. I REALLY hope that he doesn't take whatever shit Kikyo slipped him. He's already had a bad hit dealing with that bitch before; this new stuff may KILL him. And slowly but surely he's come around too much to deserve a fate like that. I will definitely be keeping up with the updates from now on and look forward to reading more soon. I LOVE this story.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 23:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg omg omg omg...gotta update ASAP...that was so intense and I wonder what Kikyo has in store...please update soon
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I'm near tears at the moment. I can't wait to see what Inu will say to Kagome. I hope the come to save one another. She still needs someone too and Inu is just right (if he only believed in his self ne?) Oh man and what will they all say when sango see her lil brother?!! update soon and thanks for beautiful story.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 23:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wondered when Inu was gonna get a hint at Kagome's past. Now what will Sango tell him, and what will he do with the knowledge...Great chap...update when ya can. :P
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 23:05 EST
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Oh man. I love it! He has a pocket full of pills to forget the world with and he goes to Sango to get the full story instead. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 22:54 EST
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oh, god, how did you get through writing this one? i had tears streaming down my cheeks the whole time. i loved the way you had yash find out about kagome. she breezed into his life, everything shee did subtle, and it was perfect for him to find out about her in such a serene way.and as much as i want to hate kikyou, i can't bring myself to do it fully. she's in the same type of situation as yasha and right now he has something that has his focus more than the drugs, something that he desperately wants to make succeed, his mismatched family. she doesn't have anyone and doesn't seem to know how to make any real connections. i love it!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Silver Moon Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i just love your story! its so sad though :-( not that its a bad thing im just hoping that you may lighten it up in later chapters? lol i guess what i wanna know if youre planning on writing a happy ending or a sad one? also i was wondering if you were a fan of bullet for my valentine, because thier song 'curses' reminds me of inuyasha here. good song ;-)
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 03:01 EST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the January 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/january2007awards/Best-AU-AR-Fic -1st.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Jan2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our fifth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please note that each term we also look for volunteer artists to do the awards, like the one that you are receiving today, and we'd be delighted if you want to help out in that manner (or know someone who does). If you happen to be interested, please send the owner an email at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com stating your interest in helping draw the awards for the next term. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: sailor saturn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 21:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! it's sooo... deep! i just wish Inuyahsa knew kagome's story!!!! then he would know they are similar... and wouldn't think she hasn't been through anything remotely to what he's been through.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 20:47 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I wonder what Kikyo and Naraku have up there sleeve!! I kinda hope something will happen to Inuyasha that will hurt him, so Kagome can be there to help him get better! (kinda mean..I know) Poor Kagome, she's trying so hard to be what Inuyasha needs!! Update soon please because I can't wait for more!!! ^_^
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