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| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 › » ] | Reviewed By: New Fan On: November 30, 2006 18:26 EST
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I glad that you are writing again. I enjoyed this chapter. When will the true challenge begin?? Update soon!
| Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 15:08 EST
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WOW! I love this story! It is really amazing. I honestly can't wait till the next chapter. You have me on pins and needles! WOW!
| Title: ^.^ Yay
Reviewed By: ixmyeyesadorehim [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 09:16 EST
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Beautiful, once again! I love it! ^.^ Keep up the fantastic work!
| Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the original chapter 16, but the additions that you have made to it are completely wonderful. They add a deapth to the story and characters that wasn't quite there before. The scene when Kagome makes lunch for Inu was wonderfully in-character for him. He wants it, but he doesn't want to admit it, and when there is a threat of it being taken away, he clings to it. But this section also brings up a question: Is Inu using all his money on sex/drugs or paying off previous highs, and spending little to none on food? Inu's spiral of darkness was really highlighted in this chapter during his bad hit. The song choice was perfect (I also liked the descriptive way you had Inu sing the piece). The conversation he had with himself convincing himself that Kagome had 'betrayed' him with Sesshoumaru was wonderful. The comment about he stoic god and the perfect angel was a rather good one. I also think you did a wonderful job describing the distorted senses and terrible sick feeling that coming down from a bad hit can feel like. The only change I didn't like was changing Inu's line from "I feel like some Chinese takeout." to "I want them to know. Angels deserve to die." I just like the other line. The second one makes it more about hating Kagome and less about hating himself. Back to the good stuff..... The bathroon scene was really good and emotional. Inu was still coming down and Kagome's enterance sent him on another kind of head trip. It has been somewhat humorous that from the beginning people have been trying to protect Kagome from the fact that Inuyasha is doing drugs. In a time as bad as this, living in an orphanage, she has most likely seen as much, if not more than, the rest of the band. But it is still sweet that they wanted to protect her, even Inuyasha. All in all this chapter was a roller coaster. From the bottom of the bad crack to the top when Kagome promises to always catch him, poor Inu has really been through the ringer....I really look forward to reading more of his backstory and finding out what he is running from inside himself. Thanks for writing for us. Even though it takes a little while between chapters, they have been always worth it! Caitriona at Juno dot Com
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2006 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. Kagome's goodness still continues to mystify me. I just hope that she can pull poor Inuyasha out of this.....MESS he's in. His determination to destroy himself is just heartbreaking. So many tortured souls in this story...I just hope that it all works out. You do such a good job bringing these characters to life; I look forward to seeing where you take this next. Good luck with your new job by the way.
| Reviewed By: bluegurl On: November 26, 2006 00:07 EST
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yea! you're back! im happy! congratulations on your new job!! as for the chapter, dont worry, it was great as always. this kind of story shouldnt be rushed, especially dealing with the kind of emotional problems they have. and im soooo happy you are taking the time to develop the characters, it makes the story and the people more real. and i luv how you portray kagome. many people either make her really stupid and naive or really bitchy, or both. but anyway, i patiently await the next chapter, Happy Writing!
| Reviewed By: gure On: November 24, 2006 23:44 EST
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Found your story a couple of nights ago, when I couldn't sleep. Thanks so much for writing it! It kept me company during the hours of what would have otherwise been A Very Long Night. This is an excellently written fic. I'm very fond of the characterizations. You've made the characters your own without deviating too far from canon. I also greatly appreciate the amount of thought that's gone into this. The spiritual element is intriguing. I generally steer away from fics that have even remotely religious overtones due to their unfortunate tendency to get...preachy. It makes me very uncomfortable. Your story, however, never goes into specifics. You get your points across, but it's broad and nonprejudicial, which is exceedlingly nice to see. The choice of music in this has been very fun. Some of the songs are ones I have to turn up loud and sing along while driving. By writing the lyrics, you cleared up a few mysteries for me. Who knew Filter was saying "Hey man, nice shot, " and not "Amen nation"? Sad, yes? Really liked the song, just could never catch that line... It makes much more sense now! Been greatly enjoying this story, and am looking forward to seeing how everything is going to turn out. Good stuff!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im lapse on my reviewing...its a holiday thing, lol. Great chapter. So much insight. Makes me wonder if Kagome really knows how deep shes going. She seems to be willing to go the distance tho. Seeing as the rest of the band is starting to see Kagome in a different light, makes me wonder how willing Inu is gonna be now. Update when you can!
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 20:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I just finished reading your story... It is amazing! Its one of the best stories I've read. Seriously. It's so intricate; I love the complexity of the characters. Simply amazing. I hope you update soon. I look forward to finding out about Sango's past... and more of Inuyasha and Kagome. I hope she can get through to him. I am so happy I found this story, fantastic job! This is def. going on my favorites!
| Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: November 22, 2006 10:57 EST
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now, i have to write a review...i loved this chapter, it revealed so much while still leaving alot clouded in shadow. kagome has an insight into inuyasha that is so deep, deeper, i think, than even she realizes. she knows that he thrives on the feeling of torment in order to numb it, to prove to himself that he can feel at all. it's what he lives for, it's live in that shitty world so why should he want something better? the others see it on the surface, they know why, they want to question, to pry, to fix, and finally to resign and avoid; there is nothing they can do. and tehy are surprised that kagome even dares to do what they will not. just be. help with what needs to be done, let inuyasha know that she will be there, share that she is not as innocent and as unaffected or sheltered as everyone wants to believe, and even if she doesn't understand, she'll be there. if he doesn't want her, she won't forsake him. she's slowly unraveling the secrets that each person had hidden out in the open. the lives within the lives they lead and she's healing them just by being there. the memories of her scars, her youth, the things she misses, brought sango to a place she didn't want to visit again, a pain she probably didn't think innocant little kagome could understand, but in a way, kagome had a pain greater than all of them (at least to this point, since most of their demons have yet to be revealed). she survived the dead and distruction of her family. her body being mangaled and the recovery mostly alone or amoungst strangers. the depth you're going into here, in this world, in this setting of music, is incredible, and i always anticipate more!
| Reviewed By: inukagome4life On: November 21, 2006 22:40 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
evanescence, linkin park, AFI, blue october, my chemcail romance STARIGHT UP!!!!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 18:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Frickin awesome as usual. Still, It is hard to update sometimes, so if there are RL issues, no worries, we'll wait for the latest chapters, especially when they're all written this good. You are one of my all time favorite authors on here, and I enjoy reading your stuff. Please keep writing I should say, but you seem like the sort fo person who would do so anyway, so no need. Though, please keep writing stuff of this calibur, is what I really want to say. Beyond that, your characterization of Inuyasha is amazing, so dark its worse than even Kyo was at first in Fruits Basket. Still, a great story, and one I enjoy reading, and would love to read more of. Update when you can, and we'll read it as it comes out. Later.
| Reviewed By: Angel_4_life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 18:47 EST
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Kagome is never at a loss for wisdom is she? How war makes people mature firghteningly fast...beautiful work, WDW! This story touches me in a way that I haven't been touched in a long time. Christina
| Title: CD
Reviewed By: CD On: November 21, 2006 17:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The angst may kill me, but I'd die happy. I love the progression of your story. It doesn't feel rushed or forced. It flows and develops beautifully and I can't wait to see what you will do with it. I hope to see lots more for this plot and when it does eventually come to an end, I do hope you continue writing.
| Reviewed By: SusieQ On: November 21, 2006 15:15 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that I love your story! I've never read one like this or about this. The story is so mature and powerful, and even though there isn't a lot of action, you make every chapter so interesting to read! I usually prefer stories with romantic comedy or action, but you write this story so well and the personalities you give the characters make them feel so real. The way they deal with their past and what happens to them just seems like you actually went through this or you know people like this. I feel like they're really complicated (especially Inuyasha of course) and make the story complicated (or at least the relationship with Inuyasha and Kagome) and it grabs and keeps my attention. I'm not very good at explaining things, but you do such a great job of writing this story and making the characters. Also, even as you said, this chapter didn't have as many things as other chapters, i was really happy with it, as usual, for all the reasons above! You're such a great writer! This story is one of my favorites! Thank you for this beautiful story! =D
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