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| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] | | Pages (45): [ « ‹ 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 › » ] | Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How could she be so dence but wise at the sometime. And I was really hoping that he quite that stuff he was taking since it adds up to his debts and all. Well I'm glad you updated and hope you keep it up. Peace.
| Reviewed By: TrinityK [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 06:10 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is another great chapter, I really liked it. I can imagine the bleakness Yash must have felt on the train. The whole Naraku thing and his situation with Yash sounds like it would really happen, it's depressing. But strong emotions in a story make it a good one, so kudos for you. I can't wait for the next chapter. I have a feeling whatever Kikyo, Naraku, and Hiten have in store for Inuyasha won't be too good. Great story, love it.
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 04:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh boy the angst...poor kagome...poor inuyasha...oh poor everybody...it will be nice to have a little break with the kids singing and maybe a reunion...oh what am I saying...cant wait for the next update and hope to get to read it soon thanks
| Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 04:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will he ever find out about her past? And I wonder what will happen if he does? And will that bitch kikyo get hers or what, naraku too? AHHH well till next time
| Title: Emotional
Reviewed By: GinaBristow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 04:09 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The scenes Chapter 2o between Inu and Kag actually moved me to tears.
| Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 01:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will never cease to be amazed how my hurt almost physically hurts after reading your chapters. The end of this one is so painful. There is nothing worse than thinking that someone has no desire to be anywhere near you, like the impression that Inuyasha gives her. Gods I can almost feel her soul burning and withering as she says those things to him with only his silence to confirm her belief in his indifference. It's painful to see him hold her to such high standards too. Everytime she can't fulfill these angelic notions he has he sees it as a little failure on her part to be what he needs. So many incorrect assumptions. So little choice for him, or so it seems. Maybe he needs to feel her cold shoulder for once. A person can only give selflessly so long before they exhaust their heart for receiving nothing in return. I can feel some problems arising already for the next chapter. Wow, depressing, but in a "damn that's emotive writng!" kind of way. Beautiful and dark as usual. As always I wait with impatience for the next chapter;) thanks!
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 16:37 EST
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Damn, people write so many reviews, and it just strikes me. This enitre story is extremely cathartic, isn't it? Let out the pain, let everyone know the pain and the sorrwo you feel, until it is gone. And damnit, you do it well. Anyway, thanks for updating the story (though I think everyone who reads this one wants the next chapter as soon as you are satisfied with it). On the plus side, I think everyone is willing to wait for it becuase of the outstanding qualit yof this story, lol. So, keep writing, keep working, and we'll all keep reviewing. From Graypheonix, a nod, a thanks, and hug for doing so much mor ein this story, well, later.
| Reviewed By: TrinityK (not signed in) On: January 12, 2007 05:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* I can't believe I was so late in getting to read this. These last two chapters were so... so... They leave me speechless, they're that good. Your words play together and leave an imprint on the mind. It's really deep. I love this story a lot, your doing more than a great job on it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Really. I'm still a bit speechless, lol. By the way, loved the song. It matched perfectly with what I think Inuyasha is going through. Update soon! ;-)
| Reviewed By: NekoAsami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 15:44 EST
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Wow. That's all I have to say. It's really good. Took me a while to finish it since I've been busy the last few days. But still, wow. I haven't read a good song-fic in a while. And I gotta say, I'm lovin' this story. The plot, the relationships. Everything. It's great. I totally love the song in this chapter too. I just love Three Days Grace all around. They're a great band. Anyways, I can't wait to see what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome. It's such a good plot you made for the two. They both love each other, yet they don't know and Inuyasha just can't say what he wants. Kagome can, but really, what girl can't say it? And in so many words. Well, it's good, great even, and I can't wait for you to update. So, update soon. I can't wait! And, I'm repeating myself... That's how good I think this is. : ] And the art you made, I'm still on my way to check it out, but I think it'll be great, make everyone really see the characters. Literally. Oh, and Inuyasha's story, I'm really wondering about it. Who was that woman when he went to the mansino? Why couldn't he go up the stairs to see her? So many questions, but I'm sure, you being the great author that you are, will tell us eventually. In the very first chapter, when Inuyasha is talking about 'to kill an angel' I think he's talking about that woman in the room. And something bad happened to her that Inuyasha can't ever forget. Maybe it's his mother... Hopefully, that's sort of what it means and not 'to kill an angel' a.k.a. Kagome. That'd be terrible. Promise I'm done now. This story is great, has great emotion, plot lines, everything. Update soon, please and thank you. =]
| Reviewed By: 026 On: January 08, 2007 05:34 EST
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first off i love this story and i hope you update soon this story is my fav out of all your others and i like most of what your work the only thing i didnt like was one of your fan arts for this story it was the one of inuyasha on his bike i thought that it could have been much better but you other stuff was good well anyway update soon
| Reviewed By: WanderingAnariel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 23:47 EST
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Wow... I love this story more with each and ever chapter! great job! Waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've finally finished! Nice chappy...hope to see n updation soon n i'm lookin forward to actually get to read the part when inu n kags do understand each other completely! happy writing =)
| Reviewed By: C.A. (not signed in) On: January 07, 2007 14:13 EST
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Really good chapter. Good song choice, it really captured the chapter.
| Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 01:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH this chapter read deep into inuyasha but will he soon see just why & how Kagome understands?! I hope so but till then the ride is a most take ne? LOVE IT TILL NEXT TIME!!!
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 23:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter. Inuyasha is such a great guy, and he doesn't even realize it. But, at least he is starting to recognize his feelings for Kagome and understand that she feels something sweet for him as well. Now if he could only allow himself to believe that he deserves to have something positive for himself....easier said than done. But, at least now there seems to be some hope for him. I'll be looking for the update. Terrific story.
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