| "The Demons Within Us" Reviews/Comments [ 663 ] |
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 22:32 EST
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Wow... wonderful chapter! That was the perfect song choice (I like that song btw). It def. showed Inuyasha's emotions. I love how you write. It's real. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Each one gets better and better. :o)
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 21:42 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, who new he can be a nice guy, but hey that was very sweet of what he did. And again you had struct me with your wonderful writting and this chapter. It was almost like I could see the dance that you made for Kagome, very nice. Well hope you update and keep it up you are doing a fantastic job of this. Peace.
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Title: Evil Angel
Reviewed By: Sorrows Angel Light [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 21:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can hear it on you tube.
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Title: Evil Angel
Reviewed By: Sorrows Angel Light [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should seriously have the song Evil Angel by Breaking Benjamin in here. Sounds perfect to me. I really love this story! KEEP IT UP!
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Title: I LOVE DIZ STORY
Reviewed By: la_cuban_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 18:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE DIZ STORY EACH CHAPTER I READ MAKE ME LOVE IT MORE PLZZZZZZ KEEP WRITING UR STORY ROXZ
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: January 06, 2007 18:09 EST
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wow. i jsut cannot get over how inuyasha is his own worst enemy. he wants so badly to understand how kagome can heal everyone but himself and he just doesn't realize that he has to want it, that he has to feel worthy of wanting to be healed. kagome already thinks that. and they read into each other perfectly. they may not know where the pain comes from specifically(especially in inuyasha's case since he still can't see kagome as having any sort of torment in her life. it's going to be an incredible journey seeing how he reacts to finding out how tormented her past really was) but they both can read each others souls. wonderful chapters.
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Title: the demon within us
Reviewed By: dogdemon ri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 09:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is truly one of a kind. i have enjoyed reading fic to a great extent. the only thing i worry about is about the part where inuyasha says ' to kill gods angel' i hope kagome dosent die in this fic.
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Title: Thank You
Reviewed By: NekoReiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 03:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I juss want to say that I truely love this story. It's brought out many emotions in me that I didn't want to identify, or think about. But you let me and you brought it out and it gave me strength, even if I teared up sometimes. And I want to say thank you. I'm not sure you understand what I'm thanking you for, but I also think you do, because you wrote this beautiful story. This story(I continue to say story because I bilieve that it deserves a higher title than fanfiction) is sooo strong with feelings and it's really intense. Thank you.I really enjoy reading this. Second: InuYasha!!!! Ahhh! Unrequited love! Gah! And I'm really curious to see if there's more to his story. I feel like there is, like there's something hidden, that needs to be brought out, but he's strong, and stubborn and won't let it out, or let Kagome in... well... tell each other thier stories, cause I think it'd solve alot of the trust issiues. Third: Your art for this story. It really brought the characters out more to me. It gave the feelings they mean to show in the story to their faces more percisley. Thank you. -Stephanie (NekoReiBaka)
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 03:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To to love, live, and love again. Sometimes you have to remind yourself why the pain and heartache is worth the pleasure, but having someone's heart and faith is beautiful. I love the emotions stirring in Inuyasha's soul. So torn, yet wonderfully hopeful. I find my curiosity constantly coming back to Inuyasha's ignorance about her past suffering. A cold wind is going to blow through his soul when he finds that the beacon of pure joy that is his Kagome has suffered her share of darkness. At any rate, I loved this chapter. The stick twirling was fantastic. I love that she glows from the inside out and filled Inuyasha's with pride. I think he needs something or someone to feel that in so that he can eventually heal and find that he is worth more than poor self-esteem allows him. Great chappie, as always!
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Reviewed By: Niece [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 02:37 EST
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I can't get enough of this. Your writings are absolutely amazing, especially when you focus on Inuyasha. "Rather feel pain than nothing at all"? It's freakin' awesome the way you tied that to him. I mean it. He was so empty inside that it made him into nothing. But then he felt the pain of unrequited love and he saw that it was better than what he was. I love it. I can't wait until you come out with more chapters. So I really hope you update soon. And good going with the music! It really adds to the story. Especially since it's the way Inuyasha can be true to the world and come out of his shell.
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 02:10 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I thought that song fit perfectly with how Inuyasha is feeling also!! It was sweet how Inuyasha was willing to go out and sign one more autograph just because Kagome asked him too. I can't wait for more, so update soon please! Keep up the good work!!!! ^_^
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 01:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh bravo...bravo WDW, great chapter! And such an appropriate song as well. Very enjoyable and enlightening. Inu has it bad and hes just really grasping this I think. As it was said, he has a new addiction and he doesn't know what to do with himself. Great chap to a great story....Update when ya can. :D
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: Darksaintofchaos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2007 01:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey your a really talented wirter I love how you really describe how each character is feeling I excited I can't wait for the next chapter. Darksaint
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Reviewed By: inochigake On: January 06, 2007 00:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy hell that was amazing...so intense and loved the description with the twirling...I hope to hear from you again soon with a new update
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 08:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I FELL RIGHT IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC!!! You really r real gud! I hope all goes well with inu n kags...and i'm looking forward to lemons! lol, lots of them...update soon^^ Can you plz read my fic too? Onegai!! =)
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